Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear. Start with a concise topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid contradictions (e.g., "I'm not sure there are no") and incorrect word choices ("awful" is wrong here). Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly.

예시: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. However, when I visit Tokyo I always notice Tokyo Tower, which is very tall and impressive.

제안: Give a clear reason and a specific example. Use correct grammar for possession and countable nouns ("someone's building" and "photos"). Mention the permission issue briefly and add a linking word like "because" or "so".

예시: No, I usually don't take photos of buildings because I feel uncomfortable photographing private property without permission. For example, I avoid taking pictures of people's homes and prefer photographing public landmarks instead.

제안: Answer directly, then give specific details about why you want to visit. Use correct sentence structure and singular/plural forms. Include linking words like "because" and describe feelings or features specifically.

예시: Yes. Near my house there is a temple called Sakura Jingu that I would like to visit because it is a famous traditional building. I enjoy its peaceful atmosphere and beautiful wooden architecture, which makes me feel relaxed and cozy.

제안: State your preference clearly, then give one or two concise reasons with linking words. Correct repetition and verb forms ("I have only lived in apartments"). Mention specifics like privacy or garden if relevant.

예시: No, I don't want to live in a tall building. I prefer a single-storey house because I value having a garden and more privacy, and I have only ever lived in apartments so I would like a quieter, ground-level home.

× I live in a rural area so I'm not sure there are no tall buildings near my home.

✓ I live in a rural area, so I'm sure there are no tall buildings near my home.

The original sentence uses a double negative: 'not sure there are no' is confusing. The intended meaning is that the speaker is certain there are no tall buildings. Correcting to 'I'm sure there are no tall buildings' removes the double negative and clarifies meaning; add a comma before 'so' to join the clauses properly.

× However, in Tokyo it is famous tower of Tokyo tower.

✓ However, in Tokyo there is the famous Tokyo Tower.

Word order is incorrect and the definite article is needed. Use 'there is' to introduce existence and 'the famous Tokyo Tower' as a specific landmark. Place the noun phrase 'Tokyo Tower' at the end and remove redundant words.

× It is so big and I was so awful.

✓ It is very big, and I was so awed.

The adjective 'awful' means 'very bad' and is incorrect here; likely the speaker meant 'awed' (feeling wonder). Use 'very' instead of 'so' for more natural emphasis in this context, and keep tense consistent: 'is' for size, 'was' for the speaker's past feeling.

× No, because I think someone's building have O also have light so I don't have to take a picture without permission.

✓ No, because I think some buildings have lights, so I shouldn't take pictures without permission.

Multiple issues: 'someone's building' is incorrect for plural generalization—use 'some buildings'; 'have O also have light' is unclear and should be 'have lights'; 'I don't have to' expresses lack of necessity rather than prohibition—use 'I shouldn't' to express that taking pictures without permission is not appropriate. Also plural 'pictures' is more natural.

× So I don't take a photos.

✓ So I don't take photos.

The article 'a' cannot be used with the plural noun 'photos'. Remove 'a' to match plural 'photos' or change to 'a photo' for singular. The present simple 'don't take' is acceptable for habitual action.

× Yes, near my house there is there has a temple called Sakura's Jingu and this is so famous and traditional buildings and we are feel comfortable and cozy.

✓ Yes, near my house there is a temple called Sakura Jingu, and it is a very famous traditional building that makes us feel comfortable and cozy.

The original repeats 'there is' and 'there has'—use a single 'there is'. 'Sakura's Jingu' is awkward in English; 'Sakura Jingu' or 'Sakura Shrine' is better. 'Buildings' should be singular 'building' because referring to that temple; 'we are feel' is ungrammatical—use 'makes us feel' or 'we feel'. Clarify with proper relative clause and adjective order.

× No because I want to live in house because I I have only live in apartment so I want to leave a house which is which has only one floor.

✓ No, because I want to live in a house; I have only lived in apartments, so I want to live in a house that has only one floor.

Many problems: missing articles ('a house'), tense ('have only live' should be present perfect 'have only lived'), repetition ('I I'), wrong verb 'leave' should be 'live', and awkward relative clause 'which is which has' should be 'that has'. Use semicolon or commas to separate clauses and correct plural 'apartments' if referring to past experience.