Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Shorten and clarify your response with a clear topic sentence, correct some grammar (use lowercase for storeys, 'storey' or 'storeys'), and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use one linking phrase to explain why there are no tall buildings. Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum.

예시: There aren’t any tall buildings near my home; most houses are only two or three storeys. Our building is slightly taller at four storeys because local regulations prevent high-rise construction, so the neighbourhood is mostly low-rise.

제안: Be more specific about frequency and reasons using a linking word. Correct phrasing (say 'I usually don’t take photos of buildings on their own'). Keep it concise and add an example to make it natural.

예시: I usually don’t take photos of buildings on their own; instead, I take pictures of myself in front of interesting buildings when I travel. For example, I often photograph myself outside historic sites to remember the visit.

제안: Good content and personal detail. Improve grammar and cohesion: use a clear topic sentence, correct tense and phrasing, and one linking word to connect reason and intention. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I would like to visit Falaknuma Palace. I’ve heard stories about it since childhood, so I’ve always wanted to see its architecture in person; if I get the chance, I would spend several hours exploring the palace and admiring its ornate design.

제안: Make your preference clear in one sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and redundancy (e.g., 'more where it is covered with more plants' is unclear). Use concise vocabulary like 'greenery' and 'homely'.

예시: I prefer living in smaller buildings because they are closer to nature and usually have more greenery. For example, a low-rise house with a garden feels homely and peaceful, whereas tall tower apartments can seem impersonal.

× In my locality I can find only small buildings which are two Storey or three Storey.

✓ In my locality I can find only small buildings which are two-storey or three-storey.

Use of articles/capitalization and compound adjective formatting: 'two-storey' and 'three-storey' are compound adjectives and should be hyphenated and not capitalized. Also no article change needed. Suggestion: use lowercase and hyphens for compound adjectives describing buildings.

× Ours is a bit tall compared to them which is A4 storied building.

✓ Ours is a bit taller compared to them; it is an A4-storey building.

Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: 'a bit tall compared to them' should be 'a bit taller compared to them' to compare correctly. 'which is A4 storied building' is ungrammatical; use independent clause 'it is an A4-storey building' and include the article 'an' before a vowel sound and hyphenate 'A4-storey'.

× As it is not permitted in our locality to construct large buildings, we do not find any.

✓ As it is not permitted in our locality to construct large buildings, we do not have any.

Verb choice and preposition: 'find any' is awkward here; native phrasing is 'do not have any' or 'there are none.' The preposition structure 'permitted in our locality to construct' is acceptable, but overall 'have' better expresses possession/existence of such buildings.

× I usually don't take photos of buildings separately, but I do take my photos with these buildings.

✓ I usually don't take photos of buildings on their own, but I do take photos of myself with them.

Pronoun and phrasing: 'my photos with these buildings' is informal and ambiguous. Use 'photos of myself with them' or 'take photos of myself with them.' Also 'on their own' clarifies 'separately.' Ensure present simple tense consistency.

× Since very long I want to visit Falaknuma Palace.

✓ I have wanted to visit Falaknuma Palace for a very long time.

Tense and time expression: 'Since very long I want' is incorrect. Use present perfect 'I have wanted' with 'for a very long time' to indicate a desire that started in the past and continues to present. 'Since' requires a point in time; 'for' is used with durations.

× I heard many stories about it since I'm a child, but I have never been there.

✓ I have heard many stories about it since I was a child, but I have never been there.

Tense consistency: 'I heard many stories about it since I'm a child' mixes past simple with 'since' and present. Use present perfect 'have heard' with 'since I was a child' (past point) or 'since childhood.' Also 'I'm a child' should be 'I was a child.' The clause 'but I have never been there' is correct.

× So if I get a chance, I would go there and spend some time and admire its beauty and architecture.

✓ So if I get a chance, I will go there, spend some time, and admire its beauty and architecture.

Conditional and modal usage: In a real conditional ('if I get a chance'), use 'will' rather than 'would' to express a likely future action. Also streamline verbs: use parallel structure 'go there, spend some time, and admire.'

× I usually like small buildings where we have more where it is covered with more plants which is near to nature.

✓ I usually prefer small buildings that are surrounded by more plants and closer to nature.

Word choice and sentence structure: 'like' can be improved to 'prefer' for clarity. The original has redundant and ungrammatical phrases 'where we have more where it is covered with more plants which is near to nature.' Recast as 'surrounded by more plants and closer to nature.' Use 'that' for defining clauses.

× I feel comfortable and a homely feeling in them than in tall buildings.

✓ I feel more comfortable and at home in them than in tall buildings.

Comparative and sentence structure: 'I feel comfortable and a homely feeling in them than in tall buildings' is ungrammatical. Use comparative 'more comfortable' and idiomatic expression 'at home' instead of 'a homely feeling.' Maintain parallel structure: 'more comfortable and at home in them than in tall buildings.'