Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 注意句子結構與語法正確性，避免重複詞語；回答要有主題句並用一兩個具體細節支撐。可以把描述簡化並使用連接詞使語意更清晰。舉例：先直接回答有或沒有，接著說明原因和具體例子（如附近有購物中心或咖啡廳）。

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. They make the area feel modern and convenient because there are many shops and cafes on the ground floors.

제안: 減少口頭填充語（如 "uh"、重複詞"I I"），直接陳述習慣並補充具體情境。可用連接詞說明原因與頻率，並給出具體例子（例如旅遊時拍攝）。

예시: Honestly, I often photograph tall buildings when I visit a new city because the photos prove I was there. For example, I usually take pictures of iconic skyscrapers and share them on my social media.

제안: 避免重複並改進語法，把答案擴展為主題句加具體細節。用連接詞說明偏好的原因，並舉一兩個具體活動來支持你的觀點。語句要完整正確（例如 'I like going to the beach to watch sunsets'）。

예시: No, there isn't a building I want to visit. I prefer spending time in nature, such as mountains or beaches, because I enjoy hiking and watching the sunset on the shore.

제안: 回答要更流暢並修正詞彙和語法錯誤（如 'tall beauties' 應為 'tall building'），並用一兩句話完整說明原因和具體好處（例如視野、日落景觀或設施）。避免重複與斷續。

예시: Yes, I do. I currently live in a tall building and I like it because the higher floors offer better views, allowing me to see farther and watch beautiful sunsets from my window.

× Yes, in the places where I lived there are many have raised buildings.

✓ Yes, in the places where I have lived there are many tall buildings.

原句中“many have raised buildings”结构不正确。应使用形容词“tall”修饰“buildings”，并用“many tall buildings”表示复数。另“where I lived”在描述目前或过去经历时更自然用现在完成时“where I have lived”。建议多练习名词复数和形容词搭配，以及现在完成时在经历描述中的用法。

× It make the the buildings make make me feel like modern and the and the convenient 'cause there are a lot of shop shops there.

✓ They make me feel modern and convenient because there are a lot of shops there.

原句有重复词（the the, make make, and the and the, shop shops）且句子结构混乱。主语应为复数代词“they”（指buildings），谓语用“make”或更自然的“make me feel”，并用形容词“modern and convenient”。“because”代替口语缩写 'cause。建议删除重复、确定清晰主语并正确使用复数名词和连词。

× Will honestly speaking, I I would take the tall buildings when I get to the new place, new places 'cause it can prove that I have been to the city.

✓ To be honest, I would take photos of tall buildings when I get to a new place because they can prove that I have been to the city.

原句开头用“Will honestly speaking”错误，应为“To be honest”或“Honestly speaking”。此外“would take the tall buildings”缺少宾语（photos），且“new place, new places”重复。将“it can prove”改为“they can prove”以指代复数“photos”或“buildings”。建议学习常用表达“to be honest”，注意添加必要宾语及代词一致性。

× Sometimes I would also post those photos on my social media.

✓ Sometimes I also post those photos on my social media.

使用“would”表示过去习惯或虚拟情形，但此句描述现在的习惯行为，宜用一般现在时“post”。建议区分“would”与一般现在时在表达习惯时的区别。

× No, there isn't.

✓ No, there isn't one.

回答否定特定存在时，通常后接名词或代词补充信息，直接说“No, there isn't.”虽可理解，但更自然是“No, there isn't one.”建议在否定存在句中补全指代对象以更清晰。

× I am the person who who prefer to spend my time in nature, especially mountains, forests or the beach.

✓ I am the kind of person who prefers to spend my time in nature, especially in mountains, forests, or on the beach.

“who who”重复，谓语人称需与先行词一致，“person who prefers”第三人称单数需加-s。介词搭配“in mountains/forests”与“on the beach”。建议注意代词从句的动词一致性及常用介词搭配。

× I really like the going to those places and take wonderful sunset.

✓ I really like going to those places and watching wonderful sunsets.

“like the going”中不需要定冠词“the”；“going”后动词应用-ing形式并列，“take wonderful sunset”不自然，常用“watch sunsets”或“see sunsets”，并把“sunset”改为复数以表示一般经验。建议熟悉动名词用法及常见动词搭配。

× Well, I am living in a tall building right now.

✓ Well, I live in a tall building right now.

“I am living”可表示临时状态，但若描述当前居住事实更常用一般现在时“I live”。两者都可，但在口语考试回答简洁常用“I live”。建议根据语境选择更自然的时态。

× Actually the answer is yes. The tall beauties could help me too see further compared with the low level apt I can also.

✓ Actually the answer is yes. Tall buildings also help me see farther compared with low-level apartments.

“tall beauties”用词不当，应为“tall buildings”。“could help me too see further”语序错误且“too”用法不当，改为“also help me see farther”。“low level apt”应为“low-level apartments”。另外“farther”比“further”更常用于物理距离对比。建议学习常用名词搭配和副词位置、比较级的用法。

× I can also capture the sunset.

✓ I can also capture the sunset.

句子本身语法正确；如果上下文指一般性习惯，可改为“capture sunsets”。此处保留原句或改为复数以表示习惯。建议注意单数/复数与语境一致。