Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接且语法正确。先用一句话直接回答，然后用一两句具体说明位置或喜好，避免多余和重复。注意时态和主谓一致，例如把“is a building is under construction”改为“a building is under construction”并用连词和介词连接短语。

예시: Yes. There is a tall building under construction very close to my house, about two minutes’ walk away. I enjoy modern urban architecture because it looks sleek and impressive, especially at night when the lights are on.

제안: 回答应更流畅并使用连接词组织句子。先给出简短直接的答复，然后用一两个具体条件说明何时拍照。修正语法（例如“catch my eyes”应为“catches my eye”），并避免重复。

예시: Not usually. However, if a building catches my eye because it is beautiful or unusual, I will take a photo of it. For example, I photographed an old cathedral last year because of its intricate façade.

제안: 回答要更明确并注意语法和用词（例如用interest作形容词要用interested）。先直接回答，再具体说明想参观的类型或理由，并举一两个具体例子。避免说“visit you”之类不清晰的表述。

예시: Yes. I would like to visit a famous restaurant with striking architecture. If a restaurant has a beautiful interior or a unique design, I would definitely go there to eat and take photos.

제안: 回答应更简洁并用正确的连词表达原因。先给出肯定或否定，然后用一两句说明原因，注意语法（如“earthquakes happen in my country”）。可以补充在安全措施下是否会改变看法。

예시: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because Taiwan experiences frequent earthquakes. However, if the building had excellent seismic design and safety measures, I might consider it.

× Yes and is a building is under construction right now and this nearby my house.

✓ Yes. A building is under construction right now nearby my house.

原句结构混乱，有多余的“is”和不正确的词序。应使用完整句子“A building is under construction right now nearby my house.” 保持主语+系动词+过去分词短语，并把地点状语放置在句末或合适位置。建议：说话前先在脑中理清主语和谓语，避免重复动词。

× I love top buildings feels OK.

✓ I like tall buildings; they look OK to me.

原句使用了不正确的形容词“top”及动词短语“feels”与主语不一致。应使用形容词“tall”描述高楼，并用复数主语“they”搭配单数动词“look”。建议：注意形容词选择并保持主谓一致。

× I like urban architecture.

✓ I like urban architecture.

此句语法正确，仅保留原句即可。 (说明：句子结构和用词都正确。)

× Not usually, but if when I see a building that is catch my eyes, I will like take picture of the buildings.

✓ Not usually, but when I see a building that catches my eye, I'll take a picture of it.

原句时态和动词形式错误：定语从句中应使用第三人称单数动词“catches”，名词短语“catch my eyes”应改为常用表达“catch my eye”。未来意图可用“I'll”。同时“take picture of the buildings”需修正为“take a picture of it”。建议：注意定语从句动词与先行词的人称、数一致，并使用固定搭配。

× Yeah. So it's that depends on the building is beautiful or not, special or not.

✓ Yeah, it depends on whether the building is beautiful or special.

原句包含多余结构“it's that depends on”和错误的从句结构。应使用“It depends on whether...” 引导选择性从句，去掉重复的“or not”并合并形容词。建议：用固定结构“depends on whether...”表达“取决于……是否”。

× Yes, if I'm really interesting in the building and I I always interesting in like restaurant.

✓ Yes, if I'm really interested in a building — I'm always interested in restaurants.

原句把形容词“interested”误写为“interesting”（意思不同）且时态/词性错误。应使用“interested in”表示对某物感兴趣。重复“I”也要删除。建议：区分“interesting”（有趣的）与“interested”（感兴趣的）。

× So if this restaurant is like. Very beautiful, I will visit you.

✓ So if the restaurant is very beautiful, I will visit it.

原句有断句和代词错误：“visit you”把听者当作宾语，应为“visit it”指餐馆。句子内的无意义停顿应去掉。建议：注意代词指代对象并保持连贯句子。

× Oh, MMM. I think not to talk because, you know, in my country, Taiwan is really. Earthquakes.

✓ Oh, hmm. I don't think so, because, you know, in my country Taiwan there are frequent earthquakes.

原句中“not to talk”不合逻辑，且“There are earthquakes” 的存在句需要复数谓语。应使用“That doesn't sound good”或“I don't think so”表达否定意见，并用“There are frequent earthquakes”说明事实。建议：学习“There is/are”结构以及用更自然的否定表达。

× It happens on my country so I don't like live in a tall building but if it's safe.

✓ They happen in my country, so I don't like living in a tall building unless it's safe.

原句使用了错误的介词“on my country”，正确应为“in my country”。此外“不喜欢住在高楼”应用动名词“living”，并用“unless it's safe”更自然地表达“如果安全的话除外”。建议：注意介词搭配（in + country）和动词形式（like + -ing）。