Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子不够简洁且有多处语法和词汇错误（例如“the the”、“skies rippers”）。回答没有清晰的主题句与连贯的支持细节。建议用一到两句直接回答，再用1–2句简要比较并用连接词提升连贯性。注意发音和常用词汇，如“skyscrapers”。

예시: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a small village with only rows of houses. In contrast, big cities have many skyscrapers, so the skyline looks very different.

제안: 回答表达了理由，但句子有语法问题（如“to taking photos”、“different design buildings”）且有些重复。建议开头直接给出肯定句，再用连词引出原因并提供具体例子或习惯细节以增加内容丰富性。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I have been interested in architecture since childhood. For example, when I see an innovative skyscraper with unusual shapes, I always take several pictures to study its design later.

제안: 回答表达了愿望但不够具体，且多处冗余与语法问题（如“that beauty”、“if I have opportunity”）。建议先明确指出想去的具体建筑或地点，接着说明原因并用一两句具体细节（谁说的、什么时候去等）。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Shanghai Tower in Shanghai because colleagues told me it is one of the tallest and most impressive buildings in China. If I have the chance, I would go there to see the observation deck and take photos of the city view.

제안: 回答有明确立场但表达不够精准，存在语法和用词问题（如“a whole buildings”）。建议先用一句话直接回答，然后用1–2句说明具体原因或期待的体验，并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would be a new experience compared with living in a house. For example, I am curious about the views from higher floors and amenities like a gym or rooftop garden.

× Not really because I live in a small village so only a row of houses, but in contrast the the big cities live the big tall buildings and the skies rippers.

✓ Not really, because I live in a small village with only a row of houses. In contrast, big cities have tall buildings and skyscrapers.

句子结构混乱且有重复（"the the"），缺少主语和谓语，使信息难以理解。建议拆成两句：第一句说明事实（主语+动词+地点/状况），第二句对比时使用完整的主语和谓语（例如 "big cities have"）。另外将"skies rippers"更正为常用词"skyscrapers"。

× Yes, I always take photos of buildings because from my childhood I'm interested in the different design buildings.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of buildings because since my childhood I've been interested in buildings with different designs.

原句时态和词序不当。表示从过去持续到现在应使用现在完成时或现在完成进行时（"I've been interested" 或 "I've been interested in"），并且名词修饰语顺序应为"buildings with different designs"。建议使用现在完成时表持续状态。

× So when I see some innovative high buildings I can't help to taking photos.

✓ So when I see some innovative tall buildings I can't help taking photos.

固定短语是"can't help doing"，后面接动名词而非不定式。因此应使用"can't help taking"。另外"high buildings"不自然，改为"tall buildings"。

× Yes, I do want to visit a famous building in the big cities, Shanghai.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit a famous building in the big city of Shanghai.

句子中"big cities, Shanghai"表达不当且数不一致。上海是单一城市，应使用单数短语"the big city of Shanghai"或"the big city Shanghai"。另外口语中用"would like"比"do want"更自然。

× I heard from my colleagues that that beauty is so tall and so famous.

✓ I heard from my colleagues that that building is very tall and very famous.

原句将"beauty"用作名词描述建筑物不合适，应使用"building"。此外，双重"that"可合并为一个或表指代时保留一个"that building"，并将"so"替换为更标准的"very"。建议注意名词选择和指代。

× So I hope one day, if I have opportunity, I would go to visit.

✓ So I hope that one day, if I have the opportunity, I will go to visit.

条件从句和主句时态不一致。与现实可能性或计划搭配应使用"will"而非虚拟语气的"would"，并且需要冠词"the opportunity"。建议在条件句中保持时态一致："if I have the opportunity, I will..."。

× Yes, I hope to live in a tall building because I always live in houses so I think if living in tall buildings they would be different experience.

✓ Yes, I hope to live in a tall building because I've always lived in houses, so I think living in a tall building would be a different experience.

原句时态、语序和冠词使用混乱。表示过去到现在的经历应用现在完成时（"I've always lived"）；虚拟或推测时用"would be"可以，但要结合正确主语和不定式/动名词结构（"living in a tall building would be a different experience"）。添加不定冠词"a"在"a different experience"。

× I hope one day I can move to a whole buildings.

✓ I hope one day I can move to a whole building.

"buildings"复数与前方表达不一致；短语"a whole building"也不自然，应该直接说"move to a whole building"或更自然地"move into a whole building"。建议使用单数或改为"move into a building"并注意介词使用。