Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, remove fillers (uh), correct word choice (offices, residential), and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes. I live in a large city surrounded by many skyscrapers. For example, most of them are office towers, but there are also a few residential high-rises near my apartment.

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid negative filler like 'unfortunately' unless you explain why. Use linking words (so, therefore) correctly and correct verb patterns (are worth photographing). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and give a brief reason.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings, so my phone storage fills up quickly. I find many of them worth photographing because of their unique architecture and detailed facades.

제안: Be specific and avoid hesitations. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the building, then add one or two supporting details (what you see there and why you like it) connected with linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep sentences concise.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Kyiv National Museum. It has many beautiful exhibitions and paintings, and I often go there with family and friends because the museum presents both historical artifacts and modern art.

제안: Clarify your idea and correct grammar. Begin with a clear statement, remove fillers, and explain reasons with specific details. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid unclear phrases (witness/foresee). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would give me great views of the sky and nearby parks. For example, I imagine having a balcony where I could watch sunsets and relax.

× Usually they are used uh, as an officers, but uh, there are couple of buildings that are used as a regular places to live.

✓ Usually they are used, uh, as offices, but, uh, there are a couple of buildings that are used as regular places to live.

Errors: 'an officers' uses plural noun with singular article and wrong form; should be 'offices'. 'there are couple of buildings' misses the article 'a' before 'couple'. Also 'a regular places' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'regular places' without 'a' or change to 'a regular place'. Suggestion: use correct article-noun agreement and plural forms: 'as offices' and 'there are a couple of buildings that are used as regular places to live.'

× Yes, unfortunately I do.

✓ Yes, unfortunately I do.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is acceptable. Marked here only to show no correction required for this phrase.

× So my iPhone storage is always full and I have to transfer my data very frequently.

✓ My iPhone storage is always full, so I have to transfer my data very frequently.

Original uses 'So' at sentence start after conjunction which is acceptable in speech but better to connect clauses clearly. Rearranged to '..., so ...' to show cause-effect. Also capitalize 'iPhone'. Suggestion: join clauses with a comma before 'so' for clarity and use correct capitalization.

× However, I would say that those buildings worth to take a photos.

✓ However, I would say that those buildings are worth taking photos of.

Errors: missing 'are' after 'buildings' (therebe/verb issue and subject-verb), incorrect infinitive 'worth to take'—'worth' is followed by gerund, and 'a photos' mixes singular article with plural noun. Correct structure: 'are worth taking photos of.' Suggestion: use passive/linking verb 'are', follow 'worth' with gerund, and match articles to nouns.

× Yes, in my city it is, uh, Kiev National Museum.

✓ Yes, in my city it is the Kiev National Museum.

Missing definite article 'the' before a named museum. Use 'the' for specific institutions: 'the Kiev National Museum.' Also the phrase 'it is, uh,' is awkward; keep 'it is the Kiev National Museum.' Suggestion: use definite article with unique buildings or institutions.

× It is a very beautiful place where a lot of exhibitions and paintings are presented.

✓ It is a very beautiful place where many exhibitions and paintings are displayed.

'presented' is not the usual collocation for exhibitions/paintings; 'displayed' or 'held' is better. 'a lot of' is informal; use 'many' in spoken formal responses. Suggestion: use correct collocations: 'exhibitions are held' or 'paintings are displayed.'

× And, uh, I go there with my family and friends very often.

✓ I go there with my family and friends very often.

No tense change needed; sentence is acceptable. Removed filler 'And, uh,' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid fillers for clearer speech.

× Yes, I would say so. I would love to live in place where I can see the sky or I just can't witness and, uh, foresee parks or allies and yeah.

✓ Yes, I would say so. I would love to live in a place where I can see the sky, or where I can easily see parks or alleys.

Multiple errors: missing article 'a' before 'place' (article error). 'I just can't witness and, uh, foresee parks or allies' is incorrect vocabulary and structure: 'witness' and 'foresee' are wrong verbs here; likely intended 'see' and 'view'. 'Allies' is a misspelling of 'alleys'. Simplify to 'where I can see the sky, or where I can easily see parks or alleys.' Suggestion: use 'a place', correct verbs like 'see' or 'view', and correct spelling 'alleys'.