Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rành mạch và ngắn gọn hơn; sửa ngữ pháp (chủ-động từ, số ít/nhì) và dùng từ chính xác. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: khoảng cách, loại tòa nhà). Tránh từ thừa như “like” lặp lại.

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. I live in the city centre, so high-rise offices and apartment blocks surround my street, while a few low-rise shops are scattered nearby.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, tránh tiếng lặp (uh, like) và sửa ngữ pháp. Nên nêu lý do cụ thể và có thể thêm một ví dụ ngắn nếu cần. Giữ tối đa 3 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

예시: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because their designs seem quite ordinary to me. For example, most office blocks here look very similar, so I rarely feel motivated to photograph them.

제안: Cần dùng từ chính xác (không dùng “cattle”). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu rõ tòa nhà bạn muốn thăm, rồi cung cấp lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Tránh từ đệm và giữ cấu trúc mạch lạc bằng liên từ như “for example” hoặc “such as”.

예시: Yes, there are several types of buildings I'd like to visit, such as the city museum and local art galleries. I haven't been to these places before, so I'm interested in seeing the exhibitions and learning about the city's history.

제안: Trả lời rõ ràng (Yes/No) rồi giải thích ngắn gọn. Sửa lỗi phát âm từ viết (skyscraper) và ngữ pháp (it makes me feel). Nên nêu 1-2 lý do cụ thể (view, tiện ích) và có thể một bất lợi để cân bằng ý kiến.

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a skyscraper because it offers great views and modern amenities. However, I might be concerned about noise or limited outdoor space compared with living in a house.

× Absolutely yes, because like my house located in the heart of the cities so there are many tall buildings surrounding.

✓ Absolutely yes, because my house is located in the heart of the city, so there are many tall buildings surrounding it.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' for the clause 'my house is located', and 'the cities' should be 'the city' to match the meaning. Also add the pronoun 'it' after 'surrounding' for clarity. Use 'in the heart of the city' as the correct prepositional phrase.

× In addition, you still have some short buildings.

✓ In addition, there are also some short buildings.

The original uses 'you still have' which incorrectly addresses the listener and causes subject-verb mismatch with the context. Use 'there are' to state existence of buildings. 'Also' is more natural than 'still' here.

× Uh, maybe not because like those putting not attract me a lot.

✓ Uh, maybe not because those buildings do not attract me much.

'Those putting' is incorrect; the intended noun is 'buildings'. 'Do not attract me a lot' is awkward; use 'do not attract me much'. Correct verb form 'do not attract' is needed.

× Like it's not make me feel impressed.

✓ It does not make me feel impressed.

'It's not make' is ungrammatical; use 'does not make' for negation with 'it' as subject. Remove 'like' at sentence start or use as filler sparingly.

× So I think I don't have any reason to take photos because it looks so normal and so tedious.

✓ So I think I do not have any reason to take photos because they look so ordinary and tedious.

Pronoun 'it' should refer to 'buildings' (plural), so use 'they'. 'Normal' is better replaced with 'ordinary'. Maintain consistent negative form 'do not'.

× Absolutely, yes. Some cattle building that I would like to visit such as a mall, a historical museum or art galleries because, uh, those of them I have never visited before, so I want to visit that.

✓ Absolutely yes. Some notable buildings I would like to visit are a mall, a historical museum, or art galleries because I have never visited them before, so I want to go.

'Cattle building' is incorrect word choice; probably 'certain' or 'notable' buildings intended. Use plural agreement 'are' and list items with commas. Replace 'those of them I have never visited before' with 'I have never visited them before'. Use 'go' rather than 'visit that' for natural phrasing.

× Maybe yes because I want to live in a skycrappers because I can see all the views surround me clearly and it's make me feel uh, more luxury and like modern.

✓ Maybe yes because I want to live in a skyscraper where I can see the surrounding views clearly and it makes me feel more luxurious and modern.

Use singular 'a skyscraper' or plural 'skyscrapers' correctly; 'skycrappers' is misspelled. Replace 'all the views surround me' with 'the surrounding views'. Use 'it makes me feel' for correct verb agreement and 'more luxurious' as the adjective; 'luxury' is a noun.