Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접 답한 후 관련 세부 정보를 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다. 문법(시제, 단수/복수, 관사)과 어휘 사용이 부정확합니다. 간결하고 자연스러운 문장(최대 3문장)으로 다음 요소를 포함하세요: 주제문, 장소 설명, 이유 또는 한 가지 구체적 사실. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끈하게 이어주십시오. 예: 'Yes. I live in Yongsan, Seoul, and there are several tall buildings nearby because the area is a major transport hub.'

예시: Yes. I live in Yongsan, Seoul, and there are several tall buildings nearby because the area is a major transport hub. For example, the district has large office towers and the train station, which bring a lot of development.

제안: 답에는 명확한 이유와 구체적 예시가 필요합니다. 모호한 표현과 반복(umm, MMM)을 피하고, 단어 선택(복수형, 명사 형태)을 정확히 하세요. 연결 표현으로 이유와 예시를 자연스럽게 이어 주십시오. 예: 'Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings because they have interesting shapes and details; for example, some are rectangular while others have curved facades.'

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing buildings because they have interesting shapes and details; for example, some are simple and rectangular while others have curved or decorative facades that catch my eye.

제안: 의도를 분명히 하고 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이세요. 'Especially' 대신 자연스러운 연결어 사용하고 건물의 이름과 방문하고 싶은 이유(전망, 디자인 등)를 한두 문장으로 설명하세요. 예: 'Yes. I would like to visit the Lotte World Tower because it is the tallest building in Korea and offers great views from the observation deck.'

예시: Yes. I would like to visit the Lotte World Tower because it is the tallest building in Korea and offers panoramic views from the observation deck. I’m also interested in its modern architecture and the restaurants at the top.

제안: 답변은 간단히 의견을 밝힌 후 구체적 이유와 예시를 제공하세요. 문법(전치사, 어순), 어휘(‘nervous’ 대신 다른 표현 가능)과 문장 연결을 개선하세요. 두 문장 내에 이유와 구체적 상황(예: 엘리베이터, 바람, 화재 우려)을 포함하면 더 설득력 있습니다. 예: 'No, I wouldn’t, because I feel nervous at great heights and worry about emergencies like fires or elevator problems.'

예시: No, I wouldn’t. I feel nervous at great heights and I would worry about emergencies such as fires or being stuck in an elevator, so I prefer living in a low-rise building.

× Yes there are.

✓ Yes, there are.

The sentence needs a comma after 'Yes' for natural written English. The phrase 'there are' is correct for existence, so only punctuation is fixed. Suggestion: include commas after introductory words like 'Yes'.

× I live in Yongsan in Seoul.

✓ I live in Yongsan, Seoul.

The phrase 'in Yongsan in Seoul' is grammatically acceptable but redundant. Better style is 'in Yongsan, Seoul' using a comma to separate locality and city. Suggestion: use a comma for location apposition.

× It was very merely mincy tea of Korea so it have has big station.

✓ It was a very small district of Korea, so it has a big station.

Original contains unclear words and mixed verb forms. 'Very merely mincy tea' is incorrect; likely intended 'very small district'. 'It have has' mixes tenses and auxiliary forms. Use singular subject 'it' with present simple 'has' to state a general fact. Suggestion: choose clear adjectives and use correct present-tense verb 'has' for possession.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Add comma after 'Yes' for clarity. The verb form 'do' is correct for first person. Suggestion: punctuate introductory answers.

× I like to take pictures of building because it is very umm various shape like MMM rectangular ismus and also have.

✓ I like to take pictures of buildings because they have various shapes, like rectangular ones.

Multiple issues: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' when speaking generally (singular/plural issue), 'it is' should be 'they have' to match plural, and 'various shape' should be 'various shapes'. Also 'rectangular ismus' is incorrect; use 'rectangular ones'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and match verbs and pronouns in number.

× Yes, there is.

✓ Yes, there is.

Answer to 'Is there a building that you would like to visit?' is correct; keep comma after 'Yes'. No grammatical change needed.

× Especially I will go to the rotate tower which is the highest building in Korea.

✓ In particular, I would like to visit the Rotating Tower, which is the tallest building in Korea.

Original 'Especially I will go to' is awkward. Use 'I would like to visit' to express preference. 'Rotate tower' likely means 'Rotating Tower' as a proper noun and 'highest' can be replaced by 'tallest' for buildings (comparative/superlative nuance). Also include commas and capitalization for proper nouns. Suggestion: use polite conditional for desire ('would like to') and correct superlative adjective 'tallest'.

× No I don't because when I in auto building I feel nervous because high the highest floor is very dangerous I think.

✓ No, I don't, because when I'm in a high building I feel nervous; I think the highest floors are very dangerous.

Multiple issues: missing contraction 'I'm' for 'I am' and missing article 'a' before 'high building'. 'High the highest floor' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'the highest floors'. 'Is' should agree with plural 'floors' -> 'are'. Punctuation needed to separate clauses. Suggestion: use 'I'm' or 'I am', include articles, ensure subject-verb agreement and clear clause separation.