Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答自然且内容充实，但可略作精简并增加衔接词以更连贯。注意避免部分冗余表达（如“tall buildings”重复过多），并在最后一句用更具体的感受或例子来丰富内容。

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. Because I live in the city, my neighborhood is dominated by high-rise apartments and office towers, and there’s even a shopping mall housed in a skyscraper. From my window I can see these buildings, which makes the area feel lively and modern, especially at night when the lights are on.

제안: 答案直接且内容相关，但可以将句子合并以形成更完整的主题句并使用衔接词连接原因与例子。此外增加具体例子（如某个城市或建筑）会更有说服力。

예시: I usually only take photos of buildings when I'm traveling. In new cities I’m drawn to interesting designs or historical sites, so I’ll photograph places like old cathedrals or modern landmarks; in my daily life I rarely notice nearby buildings, so I seldom take pictures of them.

제안: 回答很清晰且具体，表达了理由和期待。可以用一两个衔接词增强流畅度，并补充一个具体想参观的地点或活动（如某个殿或博物馆展览）以更具体。

예시: Yes, I would love to visit the Forbidden City in Beijing. Although I’ve seen it often in photos and textbooks, seeing it in person would be different; I’m especially curious about its history and the scale of places like the Hall of Supreme Harmony.

제안: 回答思路明确，但结尾不完整且有语法错误（遗漏词语）。建议补全句子并给出更多具体原因或对比（如通勤、噪音、社区）。使用连接词使句子更连贯并控制在最多五句内。

예시: It depends on my situation. If I worked in the city, I might prefer a tall building for the convenience and shorter commute. However, if I had a family I would choose a house with a garden because it offers more space, privacy and a better environment for children.

× Yes, there are quite a few tall buildings close where I live.

✓ Yes, there are quite a few tall buildings close to where I live.

句中缺少介词“to”。短语“close to”表示“靠近……”，正确固定搭配是“close to somewhere”。建议记住常见地点短语的固定介词搭配，例如：close to, near, next to。

× The view from my window includes several tall buildings which makes the area feel really lively and modern.

✓ The view from my window includes several tall buildings, which make the area feel really lively and modern.

“which”指代复数名词“several tall buildings”，因此从句动词应与复数主语一致，使用“make”而不是“makes”。建议注意关系代词指代的先行词是单数还是复数，以决定谓语动词的单复数形式。

× Mostly when I'm traveling.

✓ Mostly when I'm traveling, I take photos.

原句为不完整句，缺少谓语，造成句子结构错误（尽管此条归类为过去分词问题列表中无完全匹配，但按允许类型必须选择列表内的项，这里视为需要补全谓语）。建议确保每个句子有主语和谓语，尤其在口语答题中避免片段句。

× In daily life I barely noticed the buildings around me, let alone take photos of them.

✓ In daily life I barely notice the buildings around me, let alone take photos of them.

句子时态不一致。前半句描述一般习惯，应使用一般现在时“notice”，而原句使用过去时“noticed”。建议根据句子语境（习惯性动作用一般现在时）统一时态。

× I've seen it so many times and in photos and textbooks, but walking through in person feels completely different.

✓ I've seen it so many times in photos and textbooks, but walking through it in person feels completely different.

原句中“and”放置位置导致结构混乱，且短语“walking through in person”缺少宾语“it”，使句子不完整。应把“in photos and textbooks”与“seen”连在一起，并为“walking through”补上宾语“it”。建议理清并保持并列结构一致，确保不省略必要的宾语。

× Yes, I'd really like to visit the Forbidden City in Beijing.

✓ Yes, I'd really like to visit the Forbidden City in Beijing.

该句语法正确，无需修改。保持原句。

× If I worked in the city I might want to live in the tall building for convenience.

✓ If I worked in the city, I might want to live in a tall building for convenience.

需要在“city”后加逗号表示条件句分隔，并且“the tall building”不确指，改为不定冠词“a”。建议条件句从句与主句之间使用逗号，并根据是否特指选择冠词。

× But if I had a family I prefer a house with garden so I have more space and the.

✓ But if I had a family, I would prefer a house with a garden so I would have more space and privacy.

原句存在多处问题：1) 条件句第二类条件应用“would prefer”而非现在时“prefer”；2) “a house with garden”缺少冠词，应为“a house with a garden”；3) 句尾“and the.”不完整，推测作者想表达“and privacy/and the space”，需补全为“and privacy”或类似名词。建议使用正确的虚拟语气形式并补充缺失成分，注意冠词使用和句子完整性。