Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and complete the sentence. Avoid ending with “and uh,” and add a specific reason or description. For example, explain what you like about couscous, such as its flavour, ingredients, or connection to family traditions.

예시: My favourite food is traditional Tunisian food, especially couscous. I love it because it is full of flavour and usually contains vegetables, meat, and a delicious spicy sauce. My family often prepares it for special occasions, so it also reminds me of home.

제안: Use the past tense consistently: “I liked,” not “I like.” Avoid the vague phrase “like this” and give one or two specific examples with a reason or personal detail. Use a linking word such as “especially” or “because.”

예시: When I was young, I particularly liked sweet food, especially chocolate cake and biscuits. I had a sweet tooth, so I often asked my parents to buy me something sugary as a treat after school.

제안: Organize the answer around the seasons or specific occasions instead of listing unrelated foods. Correct “a lot different foods” to “a lot of different foods,” and avoid repetition. Clarify the unclear phrase “sells food”; if you mean “salty food,” say so. Include a specific seasonal example and use linking words such as “in summer” and “during winter.”

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the time of year. In summer, I prefer light meals such as salads and fruit because the weather is hot. In winter, I usually eat hearty dishes like couscous or spicy soup because they keep me warm. During religious or family celebrations, I also enjoy traditional Tunisian sweets.

제안: State clearly that your favourite food has not changed, and use the correct phrase “My food preferences have not changed.” The expression “I don't have a chance” is not appropriate here. Explain what you liked as a child and what you still enjoy now, using a contrast such as “although” or “even though.”

예시: No, my favourite food has not really changed since I was a child. I have always enjoyed sweet and spicy food, especially traditional Tunisian dishes and chocolate desserts. Although my tastes have become a little more varied, these flavours are still my favourites.

× My favorite food is uh, traditional Tunisian food like couscous and uh.

✓ My favorite food is traditional Tunisian food, such as couscous.

The sentence ends with and, so it is incomplete. Remove the unnecessary conjunction and use such as to introduce an example more clearly.

× When I was young, I like uh, sweet food like cake, chocolate like this.

✓ When I was young, I liked sweet foods such as cake and chocolate.

The phrase When I was young refers to a finished period in the past, so the past-tense form liked is required instead of like.

× I eat many, a lot different foods.

✓ I eat a lot of different foods.

The quantifier a lot must be followed by of before a noun phrase. Do not use many and a lot together. The correct structure is a lot of different foods.

× Spicy food, sweet food, uh, sells food, uh, to be honest, Indian food, it's mixed between all the kind of foods, like couscously it's spicy food. Uh, yes, spicy food.

✓ I eat spicy food and sweet food. To be honest, Indian food includes many kinds of flavors. For example, couscous can be spicy.

Several parts of the original response are fragments or are joined in an unclear way. Complete sentences need a subject and a verb. The correction uses I eat to form a complete sentence and separates the ideas clearly.

× Indian food, it's mixed between all the kind of foods.

✓ Indian food includes all kinds of food.

After all, a plural noun is needed because the sentence refers to multiple types. Therefore, kind must become kinds. The phrase all kinds of food is the natural plural expression.

× Indian food, it's mixed between all the kind of foods.

✓ Indian food is a mixture of many kinds of food.

Mixed between is not the appropriate expression for describing the variety of food. Use a mixture of to show that something contains different types or elements.

× like couscously it's spicy food.

✓ For example, couscous can be spicy.

The original clause is not connected grammatically to the preceding idea. Start the example with For example and use the complete structure couscous can be spicy.

× A food change.

✓ My food choices have not changed.

A food change is a noun phrase, not a complete sentence, because it does not contain a verb. Use have not changed to make a complete answer and to describe a situation continuing up to the present.