Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and concise: state the dish name correctly, give one or two specific details (what it is, key ingredients or why you like it), and avoid repetition. Use a topic sentence then one supporting sentence connected with a linking word. Pronunciation of the dish name and grammar need attention.

예시: My favourite food is Biryani, a popular Bangladeshi rice dish. I love it because it is richly spiced with aromatic spices like cardamom and cinnamon, and the tender meat mixed with fragrant rice makes it very satisfying.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences, then give a specific example and reason using a linking word. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect grammar. Use correct names (e.g., ‘tikka’) and explain briefly how it related to your diet as a child.

예시: When I was young, I liked spicy foods such as chicken tikka and dishes with strong masala. Because we often ate kanji (rice porridge) with spicy condiments, I grew up enjoying those bold flavours.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence about seasonal or situational changes, then provide a concise specific example and a linking phrase to explain why. Improve grammar and sentence flow when mentioning living abroad and trying new cuisines.

예시: Yes, my food choices change depending on the season and where I live. For example, since I moved to Japan this year, I have been eating more Japanese dishes like sushi and tempura because they are fresh and available.

제안: Respond directly (yes/no) and then clarify with specific information. If your favourite has not changed, say so and then mention other cuisines you now enjoy, using correct names and linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘Bengali’ or ‘Bangladeshi’, ‘cuisine’) and grammar will help clarity.

예시: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed — I still prefer Bangladeshi cuisine like biryani. However, I also enjoy trying other cuisines such as Italian, German and Japanese when I can, especially dishes like pasta and tempura.

× Actually, my favorite food is spicy food.

✓ Actually, my favorite food is spicy food.

No change needed for this sentence; 'spicy food' as a general category does not require an article. Keep as is.

× Its name is Birdiani, it's a Bangladeshi food, it's a very famous and local foods.

✓ Its name is Biriyani; it's a Bangladeshi dish and a very famous local food.

Plural 'foods' is incorrect when referring to a single item; use singular 'food' or 'dish'. Also 'Birdiani' is likely intended as 'Biriyani'. Combine clauses for clarity and correct count nouns: 'a Bangladeshi dish' and 'a very famous local food'.

× There's I like to spice food.

✓ I like spicy food.

Sentence 'There's I like to spice food' has incorrect structure and unnecessary 'There’s'. Also 'to spice food' is incorrect; use adjective 'spicy' to describe the food. Simplify to 'I like spicy food.'

× Well, I like to spicy food and spicy tika and spicy masala is a very health for our Kanji.

✓ Well, I like spicy food, spicy tikka, and spicy masala; they are very healthy for our kanji.

Use parallel noun phrases and correct adjective form 'healthy' not 'health'. Use plural verb 'are' for multiple items. 'Tikka' spelling and capitalization adjusted; 'kanji' kept lowercase if referring to porridge.

× It's a very popular it's a very

✓ It is very popular.

The original repeats and trails off; condense to a complete sentence 'It is very popular.' Remove repetition and incomplete fragment.

× Yeah, different time and different culture the time I changed my favorite food because now I live in Japan.

✓ Yeah, at different times and in different cultures my favorite food has changed because now I live in Japan.

Use prepositions 'at' for time expressions and 'in' for cultures. Use plural 'times' and present perfect 'has changed' to indicate change up to now.

× I like the Japanese food, sushi, tempura, this year.

✓ I like Japanese food such as sushi and tempura this year.

Use uncountable 'Japanese food' without 'the' for general preference. 'Such as' links examples. Keep 'this year' at end for time reference.

× So different times is different.

✓ So my preferences change at different times.

Original is ungrammatical and vague. Rephrase to a clear subject and verb: 'my preferences change' and use 'at different times' for time expression.

× Well, actually no, I don't change different force, but I like the other scandy force, Italian force, German force and Japanese.

✓ Well, actually no, I haven't changed my favorite food, but I like other cuisines: Scandinavian, Italian, German, and Japanese.

'Don't change different force' is incorrect structure and vocabulary. Use present perfect 'haven't changed' to indicate no change since childhood. Use 'cuisines' instead of 'force' and correct 'Scandinavian'. List items clearly with commas and 'and'.

× But most of the time I like to banali foods.

✓ But most of the time I like Bengali foods.

'Banali' appears to be 'Bengali'. Use plural 'foods' only if referring to different Bengali dishes; otherwise 'Bengali food' (singular) could be used. Here corrected to 'Bengali foods' to match original plural intent.