Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите более грамотно и связно: начните с простого предложения-темы, затем добавьте один-два конкретных поддерживающих факта. Избегайте повторов («new year» и «vibe» подряд) и исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, «I have loved» → «I love» или «I have loved them since childhood»). Используйте связки: because, for example, which reminds me of….

예시: My favourite food is American cookies. I love them because they remind me of family celebrations; for example, we always bake or buy them at New Year, which makes the holiday feel special.

제안: Упрощайте и уточняйте мысли: давайте одно четкое утверждение и одно объяснение. Избегайте заиканий и повторов, исправьте порядок слов и окончания (например, «has specially really sweet taste» → «has a very sweet taste»). Добавьте связку (because, so) и конкретный пример или последствие (например, «because my mother worried about my teeth»).

예시: When I was young I loved eating chocolate because it has a very sweet taste. However, my mother rarely let me eat it because she was worried about my teeth and health.

제안: Сделайте ответы более слаженными и конкретными: начните с общего утверждения, затем приведите два конкретных примера с временными словами. Уберите короткие фрагменты без глагола («Some sweets») и исправьте артикли («in the winter»). Используйте связки: for example, in contrast, during.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, in the winter I prefer hearty New Year salads and cookies because they feel festive, while in the autumn I often drink coffee and enjoy cookies as a cosy snack.

제안: Упрощайте грамматику и сделайте причину ясной: используйте правильные времена и порядок слов (например, «hasn't changed since I was a child»). Дайте одно объяснение и при необходимости один пример. Избегайте бессвязных фраз («from my health childhood and at at these days»).

예시: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since I was a child because I have always loved chocolate and sweets; for example, I still enjoy chocolate bars and candy on special occasions.

× My favorite food is American Cookies.

✓ My favorite food is American cookies.

The word 'cookies' is a common noun and should not capitalize 'Cookies'. Also 'American cookies' does not require a definite article here; use lowercase and treat it as a general food name. Use consistent capitalization rules: only proper nouns and start of sentence are capitalized.

× I have loved this food because it gives me a lot of memories from my family.

✓ I have loved this food because it brings back many memories of my family.

The original uses 'gives me a lot of memories' which is unnatural in English. 'Bring back memories' is the correct idiom and 'many memories of my family' is clearer. Use present perfect 'have loved' to indicate enduring feeling; keep verb 'brings back'.

× Nostalgic memories about new year and new year vibe.

✓ It brings nostalgic memories of New Year and the New Year vibe.

The original is a sentence fragment (no finite verb). Add a verb and articles: 'It brings nostalgic memories of New Year and the New Year vibe.' Capitalize 'New Year' as a holiday and include 'the' before 'New Year vibe' for clarity.

× When I was young, I liked to eat a lot of chocolate because chocolate has specially really sweet taste.

✓ When I was young, I liked to eat a lot of chocolate because chocolate has a particularly sweet taste.

Use 'particularly' rather than 'specially really' to modify 'sweet'. Add the article 'a' before 'particularly sweet taste'. Maintain past tense 'liked' for the time reference.

× And I remember when I was young, my mom didn't give me gave me a lot of chocolate because it can be, it could, could be.

✓ And I remember that when I was young, my mom didn't give me a lot of chocolate because it could be unhealthy.

Original contains repetition and incorrect verb forms 'didn't give me gave me' and unclear phrasing 'it can be, it could, could be.' Use 'didn't give me a lot of chocolate' and provide a clear reason: 'because it could be unhealthy.' Use 'remember that' to introduce the clause.

× For example, on the winter I prefer to eat New Year salads or cookies.

✓ For example, in winter I prefer to eat New Year salads or cookies.

Use preposition 'in' with seasons, not 'on the winter'. Also 'winter' generally doesn’t need 'the'. Keep 'New Year salads or cookies' as object; ensure correct preposition use.

× Some sweets.

✓ I also eat some sweets.

Original is a fragment. Add subject and verb to form a complete sentence: 'I also eat some sweets.' This fits the conversation context.

× In the autumn I prefer I like to drink coffee and cookies.

✓ In autumn I prefer to drink coffee and eat cookies.

Remove redundant verbs 'prefer I like'. Use parallel structure: 'drink coffee and eat cookies.' Also 'in autumn' without 'the' is more natural.

× No, my favorite food didn't change since I were was a child because from my health childhood and at at these days I prefer and like to eat a lot of chocolate and candy.

✓ No, my favorite food hasn't changed since I was a child because, throughout my childhood and even now, I have preferred and still like to eat a lot of chocolate and candy.

Use present perfect 'hasn't changed' with 'since' to connect past and present. Correct subject-verb 'I was' (not 'I were'). Remove duplicate words 'was' and 'at at'. Use consistent phrasing: 'throughout my childhood and even now' and 'have preferred and still like' to show continuity.