Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more accurate and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (origin, ingredients, why you like it). Avoid uncertain phrases and incorrect facts (e.g., biryani origin). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep sentences short (max 5).

예시: My favourite food is biryani because of its rich flavours. It is a mixed rice dish from South Asia, typically cooked with fragrant spices and meat such as chicken, lamb or sometimes eggs. When I'm busy I order it from a restaurant once a week, because its strong aroma and spices are very satisfying.

제안: Open with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give specific examples and reasons. Correct grammar (use past tense: liked, used to) and reduce redundancy. Use linking words (for example, often, usually) to structure details.

예시: When I was young, I mostly liked the meals my mother cooked because they were very tasty. She used to make Nepali dishes during the week, and on weekends she often prepared Indian or Indo-Chinese food, which our family really enjoyed.

제안: Be specific and logical: answer directly, then give one or two clear examples of seasonal foods and reasons. Remove fillers (um, uh) and unclear phrases ("taste birds"). Use linking words (for example, in summer, during winter) and keep sentences concise.

예시: Yes, I do. I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and fruits, while in winter I enjoy warm soups and stews because they are comforting and provide more energy.

제안: Answer directly, then explain specific reasons and give an example. Use correct tense and vocabulary ("used to", "eat out", "busy with work/studies"). Avoid unfinished sentences and fillers. Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

예시: Yes, it has changed. I used to prefer home-cooked meals made by my mother, but now I often eat out because I am busy with work and don’t have time to cook. For instance, I frequently order biryani or noodle dishes from nearby restaurants during the week.

× Biryani is my favorite food and I prefer to eat at least once in a week.

✓ Biryani is my favorite food and I prefer to eat it at least once a week.

Use present simple correctly and include the object 'it' after 'eat'. Also 'in a week' is non-idiomatic; use 'a week' or 'per week'. Suggestion: Say 'I prefer to eat it at least once a week.'

× If I'm too busy then I will order from the restaurant.

✓ If I'm too busy, I will order from a restaurant.

Use future simple correctly; include a comma after the conditional clause and use the indefinite article 'a' for non-specific restaurants. Suggestion: 'If I'm too busy, I will order from a restaurant.'

× Whereas the biryani has come from the Islamic region like Arabic.

✓ Biryani comes from Islamic regions such as the Arab world.

'Whereas' is a contrasting conjunction and is inappropriate here. 'Has come from' is awkward; use simple present for general facts. Use 'such as' for examples and correct noun phrase 'Arab world'. Suggestion: 'Biryani comes from Islamic regions such as the Arab world.'

× It's a mixture of rice and then Curry.

✓ It's a mixture of rice and curry.

Do not capitalize 'curry' and avoid unnecessary 'then'. Use simple coordination 'rice and curry'. Suggestion: 'It's a mixture of rice and curry.'

× The Curry can be of any meat such as like egg bake, lamb.

✓ The curry can be made with any meat, such as chicken, egg, or lamb.

Use 'made with' to describe ingredients. 'Such as like' is redundant; choose 'such as'. Replace unclear 'egg bake' with 'egg' or 'egg curry' and include 'chicken' as a common example. Suggestion: 'The curry can be made with any meat, such as chicken, egg, or lamb.'

× I prefer to eat off my mom's hand.

✓ I prefer to eat food prepared by my mom.

'Eat off my mom's hand' is unnatural and literal; use 'food prepared by my mom' or 'my mom's cooking'. Maintain present simple 'prefer'. Suggestion: 'I prefer to eat my mom's cooking.'

× She prepares very tasty food and she also know a lot of cuisine like India and Nepali and Indochinese.

✓ She prepares very tasty food and she also knows many cuisines, like Indian, Nepali, and Indochinese.

Subject-verb agreement: 'she' requires 'knows'. Use 'many cuisines' (plural) and correct adjective forms 'Indian' rather than 'India'. Suggestion: 'She knows many cuisines, such as Indian, Nepali, and Indochinese.'

× Most of the time she prepares the Nepali food at home and often on the weekend she prepares the Indian as well as Indochinese and we really enjoy.

✓ Most of the time she prepares Nepali food at home, and often on weekends she prepares Indian and Indochinese dishes, which we really enjoy.

Use present simple for habitual actions. Remove unnecessary definite article before 'Nepali food', pluralize 'weekend' to 'weekends', and make sentence structure clearer by adding 'which' to link enjoyment. Suggestion: 'Most of the time she prepares Nepali food at home, and often on weekends she prepares Indian and Indochinese dishes, which we really enjoy.'

× Yes, I do. I prefer to eat the different kind of food at different times of the year.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer to eat different kinds of food at different times of the year.

Use plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types and remove unnecessary definite article 'the'. Suggestion: 'I prefer to eat different kinds of food at different times of the year.'

× Umm, generally if I see in a day, uh, I prefer to eat different kind of food because it doesn't make me more boring and which also give a new taste to my taste birds so.

✓ Generally, during the day I prefer to eat different kinds of food because it prevents boredom and gives variety to my taste buds.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Use 'during the day' for time expression, plural 'kinds', correct verbs 'prevents' and 'gives', and 'taste buds' not 'taste birds'. Remove filler words. Suggestion: 'Generally, during the day I prefer to eat different kinds of food because it prevents boredom and gives variety to my taste buds.'

× Yes, it has changed from my childhood.

✓ Yes, it has changed since my childhood.

Use 'since' to indicate change from a past time to the present. 'From my childhood' is understandable but 'since my childhood' is more natural. Suggestion: 'Yes, it has changed since my childhood.'

× Before I use to eat of my mom's hand and she normally prepares the food at the home.

✓ Before, I used to eat my mom's food, and she normally prepared food at home.

Use 'used to' (past habit) not 'use to'. Remove 'of' after 'eat' and use past tense 'prepared' for past routine; 'at home' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: 'Before, I used to eat my mom's food, and she normally prepared food at home.'

× But now, uh, the thing has totally changed.

✓ But now things have totally changed.

'The thing has totally changed' is awkward; use plural 'things' to refer to overall situation. Maintain present perfect 'have changed'. Suggestion: 'But now things have totally changed.'

× Because I'm walking and steady, I don't have enough time to cook at the home, so I prefer to eat at the.

✓ Because I'm working and busy, I don't have enough time to cook at home, so I prefer to eat out.

'Walking and steady' is incorrect; likely meant 'working and busy'. Use 'cook at home' (no article) and 'eat out' to indicate eating at restaurants. Complete the sentence; 'at the' was incomplete. Suggestion: 'Because I'm working and busy, I don't have enough time to cook at home, so I prefer to eat out.'