Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more fluent, reduce fillers (uh, umm), correct grammar, and give one or two specific reasons or details. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: My favourite food is spaghetti. I especially enjoy it with a rich tomato and basil sauce called Marinara because the flavours are fresh and comforting. I often cook it at home for friends, which makes it a social and tasty meal.

제안: Answer directly with past tense, remove repetition and fillers, and give specific examples or a brief reason. Use linking words to list items coherently.

예시: When I was young, I loved fried rice and traditional curries because my family cooked them often. I also enjoyed spaghetti and noodles, especially on special occasions or when eating out.

제안: Clarify the meaning (seasonal differences vs trying new places) and use accurate vocabulary and grammar. Remove hesitations and quantify clearly. Add a linking phrase to explain why.

예시: Yes, I do. I tend to try seasonal dishes and visit new restaurants about three times a month because I enjoy discovering different flavours with friends and family.

제안: Use past and present tenses correctly, avoid repetition and fillers, and give a clear reason for the change with one supporting detail. Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, it has changed. As a child I ate a lot of rice and curry, but now I prefer trying new dishes because I enjoy experimenting with different flavours and international cuisines.

× I love eating spaghetti which taste very yummy.

✓ I love eating spaghetti, which tastes very yummy.

Subject-verb agreement: 'which' refers to 'spaghetti' (singular) so the verb should be 'tastes' not 'taste'. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause. Use 'very tasty' or 'very yummy' as an adjective describing spaghetti.

× Umm, it is a Italian food, uh, but I really love to eat it with uh, sauce, Mayani sauce.

✓ Umm, it is an Italian food, but I really love to eat it with sauce, Mayani sauce.

Article use: 'Italian' begins with a vowel sound so the correct indefinite article is 'an' not 'a'. Remove extra commas and filler words for clarity.

× Uh, when I, when I was young, I love to eat, uh, fried rice, rice and curries, spaghetti, a few of them.

✓ When I was young, I loved to eat fried rice, rice and curries, spaghetti and a few other dishes.

Tense consistency: the question asks about the past ('when you were young') so use past tense 'loved' not present 'love'. Also 'a few of them' is vague; 'a few other dishes' is clearer.

× And also I love to eat, uh, traditional foods as well, uh, on top of that, noodles also, uh, like I like to eat.

✓ I also loved to eat traditional foods and noodles.

Tense consistency: still referring to childhood, so use past tense 'loved'. Remove redundant phrases and fillers for clearer sentence structure.

× Of course, I love to try out different kinds of food when I work, when I go for a different types of restaurants, cafes as well.

✓ Of course, I love to try different kinds of food when I go to different types of restaurants or cafes, especially when I work in those areas.

Preposition and noun phrase: 'go for a different types of restaurants' is incorrect. Use 'go to different types of restaurants'. Match singular/plural: 'types' requires no 'a'. Clarify timing 'when I work' with additional context if needed.

× So like, uh, at least uh thrives a month.

✓ So, I go out at least three times a month.

Plural and lexical error: 'thrives' is incorrect; likely meant 'three times'. Use correct plural 'times' with 'a month'. Ensure clear subject and verb.

× I'm going out with my friends or family to try different types of food.

✓ I go out with my friends or family to try different types of food.

Tense/usage: present simple is more natural for habitual action ('I go out'). 'I'm going out' suggests a current plan; either can be correct but consistency with previous sentence prefers habitual form.

× Yes, of course when I was a child, I loved to eat, uh, rice and Curry, but when I was growing up, when I were growing up now I don't like to eat that much of rice and Curry.

✓ Yes, of course when I was a child I loved to eat rice and curry, but as I grew up I didn't like to eat that much rice and curry anymore.

Tense and agreement: 'were growing up' is incorrect with singular subject; use 'was'. Maintain tense consistency: 'as I grew up' (past) and 'didn't like' for past change. Also avoid unnecessary capitalization in 'curry' and extra words like 'of' after 'much'. Clarify timeline.

× I love to try new dishes, uh, which makes me feel very, uh, yummy when it's eat when I.

✓ I love to try new dishes, which make me feel very happy when I eat them.

Verb agreement and form: 'which' refers to 'dishes' (plural) so use 'make' not 'makes'. 'Yummy' describes food, not feelings; use 'happy' or 'satisfied'. 'When it's eat when I' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'when I eat them'.