Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 의미 전달은 되지만 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많습니다. 먼저 핵심 문장(topic sentence)을 명확히 하고, 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요. 예를 들어 ‘so far’나 ‘folk fork’같이 모호한 표현 대신 정확한 음식 이름을 사용하고, 이유를 말할 때는 연결어(and, because, when)를 자연스럽게 쓰세요. 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 제한하고 시제와 주어-동사 일치를 확인하세요.

예시: My favourite food is fried chicken. I especially like it when it is served with fresh salad and a spicy sauce because the combination of crispiness and freshness is very satisfying.

제안: 어렸을 때를 설명할 때는 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고 이유나 감정은 구체적으로 설명하세요. 또한 ‘people surprised’ 같은 문장은 누가 왜 놀랐는지 명확히 해야 합니다. 연결어(when, because, so)로 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하고, 불필요한 반복을 피하세요.

예시: When I was young, I mainly ate meat and rice because my parents preferred simple meals. People often found it surprising since they expected children to like sweets or snacks more than plain dishes.

제안: 계절이나 해마다 바뀌는 식습관을 말할 때는 구체적인 예시(계절, 축제, 계절 재료)를 제시하세요. ‘concentrate some food in years’ 같은 표현은 의미가 불분명하니 피하고, 간단한 연결어로 이유를 덧붙이세요. 문장은 2~3문장으로 정리해 자연스럽게 흐르도록 하세요.

예시: Yes, I do. In winter I usually eat more soups and stews because they are warming, while in summer I prefer salads and cold dishes. This year I’ve been enjoying tacos a lot because they are quick and full of fresh vegetables.

제안: 변화에 대해 말할 때는 과거와 현재를 비교하는 명확한 구조(topic sentence + supporting detail)를 사용하세요. ‘fork’와 같은 단어 선택 오류를 바로잡고, 시제(used to + 동사원형, now + 현재) 일관성을 유지하세요. 이유(예: 자주 먹어서 질림)를 간단히 설명하되 문장을 반복하지 마세요.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. I used to eat fast food like burgers a lot when I was tired, but now I avoid it because I ate it too often and got tired of it, so I prefer healthier options.

× My favorite food is so far it is made by folk fork.

✓ My favorite food so far is something made with a folk fork.

The sentence has incorrect word order and choice of prepositions; 'so far' should follow 'favorite food' and 'made by folk fork' is unclear. Use 'made with' for the utensil and 'something' to clarify. 개선 제안: 문장 어순을 고치고 적절한 전치사와 표현을 사용하세요.

× It is so delicious when it with vegetables and sauce so I like it.

✓ It is very delicious when it is served with vegetables and sauce, so I like it.

Missing verb 'is' after 'it' and awkward adverb 'so' used twice. Use 'very' and the passive construction 'served with' to show accompaniment. 개선 제안: 주어 다음에 동사를 넣고 수동 표현과 적절한 부사를 사용하세요.

× I like any meat, when I was young I usually only eat meat and rice.

✓ I liked any meat; when I was young, I usually ate only meat and rice.

Tense inconsistency: 'I like' should be past 'I liked' to match 'when I was young.' Also 'eat' should be past 'ate.' 개선 제안: 과거 상황 설명에는 동사를 과거형으로 맞추세요.

× These two things so many people surprised it because there is not taste good where those.

✓ Many people were surprised by these two things because they did not taste good there.

Awkward structure and incorrect pronoun/reference. Use passive 'were surprised by' and 'they did not taste good there' to express meaning. 개선 제안: 주어와 동사의 연결을 명확히 하고 적절한 대명사를 사용하세요.

× Yes I do, I usually concentrate some food in years so it is changed year by year.

✓ Yes I do. I usually focus on certain foods each year, so my preferences change from year to year.

Incorrect verb 'concentrate some food' and tense/phrase issues. Use 'focus on certain foods' and 'change from year to year.' 개선 제안: 'focus on'과 'from year to year' 같은 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요.

× This year I love to eat tacos.

✓ This year I love eating tacos.

Use 'love eating' as a stative/preference expression for the present period; 'to eat' is not wrong but 'love eating' is more natural here. 개선 제안: 선호를 나타낼 때 'love' 다음에 동명사를 사용하세요.

× Yes I have. I usually like fork when I was tired, but nowadays I ate.

✓ Yes, it has. I usually liked forks when I was tired, but nowadays I don't eat them.

Several issues: 'Yes I have' unclear—referent is favorite food, so 'it has' is better; tense mismatch 'usually like... when I was tired' should be past 'liked'; 'nowadays I ate' wrong tense and form—use 'don't eat them' for present negative. 개선 제안: 대명사 일관성 유지, 과거와 현재 시제 구분하세요.

× I eat this so many times, so I tired of eating forks, so nowadays I don't eat it.

✓ I ate it so many times that I became tired of eating forks, so nowadays I don't eat them.

Pronoun and tense issues: 'this'/'it'/'forks' inconsistent; use past 'ate' for completed actions and 'became tired' to show result; keep pronouns consistent ('them' for plural forks). 개선 제안: 대명사의 수(단수/복수)와 시제를 일치시키고 결과 표현을 명확히 하세요.