Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response clearer and more natural. Begin with a direct topic sentence naming the food, correct cultural references (e.g., "typical Nepali"), and give one or two concise supporting details. Use linking words like "and" or "also" correctly and avoid extra words. Pronunciation and word order issues should be fixed (e.g., "lentil soup and rice", "flatbread with spiced vegetables").

예시: My favourite food is a typical Nepali dish: lentil soup (dal) served with rice. I also enjoy flatbread with spiced vegetables sometimes, because the flavours are comforting and nutritious.

제안: Use past tense consistently and make the reason specific. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one concrete reason using a linking word like "because". Fix grammar: "I liked", "it was healthy and nutritious."

예시: When I was young, I liked typical Nepali food such as lentil soup and rice because my family thought it was healthy and nutritious. For example, dal and rice provided protein and energy for my daily activities.

제안: Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Answer directly, then give a brief supporting detail with correct tense and clearer wording. Use linking words such as "but" or "however" correctly and correct vocabulary ("flatbread", "lentil").

예시: No, I usually eat the same kinds of meals throughout the year. I normally have lentil soup and rice every day, but on weekends we sometimes eat flatbread with spiced vegetables.

제안: Give a direct, grammatical response and one clear supporting detail. Use present perfect or past simple correctly ("hasn't changed" or "didn't change") and avoid unrelated words. Keep the answer within 2–3 sentences and explain briefly why it hasn't changed.

예시: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since childhood. I still enjoy lentil soup and rice because my family has always prepared it and we believe it is healthy and nutritious.

× My favorite food is Nepal typical Istanbul food of lentil soup and rice, and I also like to eat sometimes flat bread with spiced vegetable.

✓ My favorite food is typical Nepali food: lentil soup and rice, and I also like to eat flatbread with spiced vegetables sometimes.

The sentence has incorrect adjective forms and word order. 'Nepal typical Istanbul food' is wrong; use 'typical Nepali food' (adjective form 'Nepali' and correct order). 'Flat bread' is usually one word 'flatbread'; 'spiced vegetable' should be plural 'spiced vegetables'. Place adverb 'sometimes' at the end for natural word order. Improve punctuation by using a colon to list the foods.

× When I was young, I like typical Nepali food of lentil soup and rice, and we believe that it is a healthy and have a good nutrition value.

✓ When I was young, I liked typical Nepali food such as lentil soup and rice, and we believed that it was healthy and had good nutritional value.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. The clause 'When I was young' requires past tense 'liked' and 'believed' and 'was'. 'Have a good nutrition value' is ungrammatical; use 'had good nutritional value'. Also use 'such as' or 'like' instead of 'of' when listing examples.

× No I don't. I usually eat a follow the frame routine for eating my daily meals. So I eat typical Nepali meal of rental soup and rice. However, on the weekends we also ate plain bread with spiced vegetable.

✓ No, I don't. I usually follow a fixed routine for my daily meals. I eat a typical Nepali meal of lentil soup and rice. However, on weekends we also eat plain bread with spiced vegetables.

Several issues: 'eat a follow the frame routine' is incorrect structure; use 'follow a fixed routine'. 'Typical Nepali meal of rental soup' has wrong word 'rental' and article use; correct to 'lentil soup'. Tense inconsistency: use present 'eat' for habitual actions. 'On the weekends' can be 'on weekends'. 'Spiced vegetable' needs plural 'spiced vegetables'.

× No, we haven't change our pool since I was a child dealt with for we ate similar foods often typical Nepali food of little soup and rice and we believe that it have a good healthy and good nutritious value and my parents.

✓ No, our preferences have not changed since I was a child because we often ate similar foods, typically Nepali food like lentil soup and rice, and we believed it was healthy and nutritious like my parents did.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and disordered. Use present perfect 'have not changed' to show a change (or lack of) from past to present. Clarify 'because' to explain reason. Replace 'little soup' with 'lentil soup'. Use past 'believed' to match 'when I was a child' context or keep 'we believe' if stating current belief. Use 'nutritious' rather than 'good nutritious value' and correct the mention of parents to 'like my parents did' for clarity.