Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: state the favourite food clearly, give one or two specific reasons or examples, and avoid awkward phrasing. Use linking words for coherence. Keep responses under five sentences.

예시: My favourite food is sushi because I love the fresh flavors and delicate presentation. For example, I often choose salmon nigiri for its soft texture, and I enjoy trying different rolls at Japanese restaurants.

제안: Use correct tense and clear structure: start with a topic sentence about the past, then give specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid repetition and unnatural adjectives.

예시: When I was young I liked pasta a lot, especially spaghetti with tomato sauce. I also enjoyed seafood variants with squid and shrimp because my family often cooked them at home.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear, specific example of seasonal changes. Use linking words (for example, in winter/during summer) and correct tense. Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, in winter I prefer hearty stews and hot soups, while in summer I eat more salads and grilled seafood because the weather is warmer.

제안: Give a clear comparison between past and present with concise reasons and correct tenses. Use linking words such as 'whereas' or 'now' and avoid confusing phrasing like 'recommended'.

예시: Yes, it has changed. Whereas I used to prefer pasta with various sauces as a child, now I prefer sushi because I appreciate the subtle flavors and the cultural experience of Japanese cuisine.

× My favorite food is specially sushi.

✓ My favorite food is especially sushi.

The student used 'specially' incorrectly. 'Especially' is the correct adverb to indicate preference or emphasis. Use 'especially' when highlighting something in particular; 'specially' often means 'for a special purpose.' Replace 'specially' with 'especially.'

× It is a significantly cultural thing, identifying the Japanese culture and my favorite taste of food as well.

✓ It is a culturally significant food that represents Japanese culture and is also my favorite flavor.

The phrase 'significantly cultural thing' is ungrammatical. Use the adjective 'culturally significant' to describe a food's cultural importance. 'Identifying the Japanese culture' is awkward; use 'represents Japanese culture.' Rephrase to make a clear, natural sentence structure and correct adjective/adverb forms.

× When I'm young, my taste is absolutely distinctive.

✓ When I was young, my taste was very distinctive.

The question asks about the past, so use past tense. 'When I'm young' (present) conflicts with describing past preferences. Use 'when I was young' and match verb tense 'was.' Also 'absolutely distinctive' is awkward; 'very distinctive' is clearer.

× Between now and when I'm young, I like I liked pasta, especially tomato sauce with it, and some squids and shrimp inside as well.

✓ Between then and now, I liked pasta, especially with tomato sauce and some squid and shrimp as well.

Mixed tenses and redundant words create confusion. 'When I'm young' should be 'when I was young' or rephrased 'between then and now.' Use past tense 'liked.' 'Squids' is uncommon; the plural 'squid' is typically used. Remove duplicate 'I like I liked.' Ensure tense consistency.

× Yes I did, the food will change during the season 4 seasons and every year, every time it's a different new taste for me and an enjoyable event for me as well.

✓ Yes, it does. The food changes with the four seasons and every year; each time there is a different taste for me and it is an enjoyable experience.

Mixed past and future ('did' then 'will') and awkward phrasing. Use present simple 'does' and 'changes' for habitual seasonal changes. 'Season 4 seasons' is incorrect; use 'the four seasons.' 'Different new taste' is redundant; use 'a different taste.' Clarify 'enjoyable event' to 'enjoyable experience.'

× Yes, it did change a lot for me.

✓ Yes, it has changed a lot for me.

Use present perfect 'has changed' to describe a change from childhood to now. 'Did change' (simple past) can be used but present perfect is more natural when linking past change to the present state.

× I significantly recommended pasta with different sauce when I'm young and now I like sushi more than pasta.

✓ I strongly preferred pasta with different sauces when I was young, and now I like sushi more than pasta.

'Recommended' is wrong here; the student means personal preference, so use 'preferred.' 'Significantly' is an odd modifier; 'strongly' or 'much' fits better. Match past tense 'was young.' Use plural 'sauces' for variety.

× When I'm older, I enjoy more Japanese culture for sushi.

✓ As I grew older, I became more interested in Japanese culture because of sushi.

'When I'm older' is present/future but speaker refers to change over time; use 'as I grew older' or 'as I got older.' 'Enjoy more Japanese culture for sushi' is unidiomatic; express interest 'became more interested in Japanese culture because of sushi.' This corrects tense and clarifies meaning.