Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct minor grammar (plural/singular, articles), and add one specific detail about a favourite type or memory. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use a linking phrase to connect ideas.

예시: My favourite food is dumplings because they remind me of family gatherings. For example, we make pork and chive dumplings together every New Year, which is fun and brings everyone closer. I also like that dumplings can have many fillings, so there’s always variety.

제안: Improve tense consistency and fluency: use past tense for childhood, remove filler words, and finish sentences fully. Provide a brief reason and one specific example of a favourite chocolate or memory to enrich the answer.

예시: When I was young, I loved eating chocolate because I had a big sweet tooth. Specifically, I preferred dark chocolate because I enjoyed its slightly bitter taste; I remember sneaking a square of cocoa-rich chocolate after school.

제안: Make the response more structured and specific: begin with a clear topic sentence, use linking words (for example, in summer/whereas in winter) and correct grammar (plural forms, articles). Give one concrete example of a summer and a winter dish to make it vivid.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer light salads with tomatoes and cucumber, whereas in winter I often cook hearty soups like chicken noodle soup and enjoy warm desserts such as baked apples.

제안: Be more fluent and precise: use clear comparison phrases (when I was a child; now), avoid filler and repetition, and provide a short reason why your preference changed plus one specific example of how you eat the new favourite.

예시: Yes, it has changed. When I was a child I loved fried rice, but now I prefer chapati because I find it more versatile and healthy. For instance, I often have chapati with spiced lentils or mixed vegetable curry for dinner.

× My favorite food is dumpling.

✓ My favorite food is dumplings.

The noun 'dumpling' should be plural because the student refers to dumplings in general, not a single dumpling. Use the plural form when speaking about a type or category of food. Suggestion: Use 'dumplings' for general references (countable plural).'

× You can put different kind of stuffing inside the dumpling like meat and vegetables and and it's a fun activity to make it with your friends or family.

✓ You can put different kinds of stuffing inside dumplings, like meat and vegetables, and it's a fun activity to make with your friends or family.

'Different kind' must be 'different kinds' to match plural 'stuffing types'. Also 'the dumpling' should be general plural 'dumplings'. Remove the duplicated 'and'. Suggestion: Use plural forms when referring to various types and ensure no repeated conjunctions.'

× When I was young, I like to eat, uh, chocolates because I have a sweet tooth and specifically I like dark chocolates because they taste.

✓ When I was young, I liked to eat chocolates because I had a sweet tooth, and specifically I liked dark chocolates because they tasted a little bitter.

The time frame 'When I was young' requires past tense verbs ('liked', 'had', 'liked', 'tasted'). Also complete the truncated clause by adding 'a little bitter'. Suggestion: Keep verbs consistent in past narrative and finish incomplete descriptions.'

× Yes, I eat different kind of food at different times of year.

✓ Yes, I eat different kinds of food at different times of the year.

Use 'different kinds' to indicate multiple types (plural). Also include the article 'the' before 'year' in this idiomatic expression. Suggestion: Use plural 'kinds' and 'the' with 'times of the year.'

× During summer I'm more of like vegetables salad type person and when the winter come I usually eat uh soups and some kind of salads and dessert also.

✓ During summer I'm more of a vegetable-salad-type person, and when winter comes I usually eat soups and some kinds of salads and desserts as well.

Several tense and agreement issues: use 'a' before compound noun phrase 'vegetable-salad-type person'; 'vegetables salad' should be 'vegetable salad' and hyphenate for clarity; 'when the winter come' needs present tense 'comes'; 'soups' plural is fine; 'some kind of salads' should be 'some kinds of salads' or 'some salads'; 'dessert also' is better as 'desserts as well'. Suggestion: Match subject-verb agreement and use plural forms consistently for lists.'

× My favorite food was fried rice when I was a child, but now it totally changed.

✓ My favorite food was fried rice when I was a child, but now it has totally changed.

The change happened over time, so present perfect 'has changed' (or 'has totally changed') is appropriate to link past to present. Simple past 'changed' without auxiliary sounds odd with 'now'. Suggestion: Use present perfect to describe a change from past to present.'

× Now I am more like chapati person.

✓ Now I am more of a chapati person.

The phrase needs the preposition 'of' in 'more of a chapati person' to be grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use 'more of a ... person' to describe preference.

× I eat, I can eat chapati with every, uh, every vegetable.

✓ I can eat chapati with every vegetable.

Redundant phrasing removed for clarity; 'every vegetable' is correct singular reference to each item in the category. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and keep the modal verb structure 'can eat' followed by the noun phrase.