Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không rõ ràng; cần nêu rõ món ăn, mô tả ngắn gọn lý do yêu thích và tránh lỗi phát âm/từ vựng. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (vị, kết cấu, kỷ niệm).

예시: My favourite food is banh mi, a Vietnamese sandwich. I love it because the crusty baguette contrasts nicely with savory grilled pork, fresh herbs and pickled vegetables, making it both flavorful and satisfying.

제안: Trả lời lặp lại, không trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi về “khi còn nhỏ” và có lỗi từ vựng/phát âm. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề nói rõ món đã thích khi nhỏ, sau đó giải thích nguyên nhân với ví dụ cụ thể và dùng liên từ hợp lý.

예시: When I was young, I loved simple snacks like rice cakes and fruit because they were easy to eat after school. For example, my mother often gave me sticky rice cakes which were sweet and filling, so I felt energetic for studying.

제안: Câu trả lời khó hiểu, ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai, thiếu thông tin cụ thể. Cần trả lời trực tiếp (có/không), giải thích sự khác biệt theo mùa với ví dụ về món ăn theo mùa và sử dụng liên từ để liên kết ý.

예시: Yes, I do eat different foods depending on the season. For instance, in summer I often eat mangoes and cold noodle dishes to stay cool, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to keep warm.

제안: Rất mơ hồ và thiếu tính mạch lạc; không nêu rõ có thay đổi hay không và lý do. Nên trả lời rõ ràng (yes/no), giải thích thay đổi hoặc không thay đổi với lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ, tránh ngắt quãng và từ ngữ lộn xộn.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. When I was a child I preferred sweet snacks, but now I enjoy more balanced meals like grilled fish with rice because I pay more attention to health and nutrition.

× My favorite food is Bang Me.

✓ My favorite food is Bang Mee.

The student likely intended a proper noun for a dish name; this is an article/word choice issue rather than grammar. Use the correct name 'Bang Mee' (or another intended dish name). Ensure proper capitalization and correct spelling for specific food names. Suggestion: confirm the exact dish name and spell it consistently.

× Yes, Make Me is the most popular food because it's convenient and delicious.

✓ Yes, when I was young I liked 'Make Me' because it was convenient and delicious.

The original reply does not answer 'What kind of food did you like when you were young?' and contains unclear structure. Change to past tense 'liked' to match 'when you were young' and use 'it was' for past description. Use a clear subject and temporal phrase. Suggestion: start with a time phrase ('when I was young') and use past tense verbs for past habits.

× Yes, I ate this fruit in time because chains.

✓ Yes, I used to eat this fruit at certain times of the year because it was in season.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'used to' for past habitual actions and 'at certain times of the year' or 'in season' to express seasonal eating. 'Because chains' is meaningless; replace with 'because it was in season' or 'because it was available.' Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb for habitual past actions and clear phrases for reasons.

× Yes, my favorite chance. Uh, same time.

✓ Yes, my favorite hasn't changed. It's still the same.

The student's reply is incomplete and ungrammatical. For 'Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?' use present perfect 'hasn't changed' to indicate from past to present. 'Same time' is incorrect; use 'still the same.' Suggestion: use present perfect to relate past to present (has/have + past participle) and complete the clause.