Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep your answer direct and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, fix verb agreement and reduce fillers (uh). Add one specific detail about Tom Yum (ingredients or when you eat it) and use a linking phrase to connect ideas. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is Tom Yum soup. I like its spicy and sour flavors, especially when it contains shrimp and mushrooms. Because it is both refreshing and warming, I often eat it with rice or noodles for a comforting meal.

제안: Answer directly with correct tense and sentence order. Use a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g., 'were'→'was', 'farm fries' unclear).

예시: When I was young, I liked French fries because they were easy to make. I often cooked them at home and ate them while watching movies or after playing outside.

제안: Keep answers chronological and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct statement, then give specific examples using linking words (for example, later, then). Correct verb tenses and phrasing (e.g., 'when I was young', 'as a teenager'). Limit to 3–4 sentences and be specific about traditions or reasons.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, when I was young I used to have Tom Yum soup on my birthday; as a teenager I celebrated with pizza; now as an adult I prefer a home-cooked rice meal for family gatherings.

제안: Answer clearly with correct negation and structure. Use a topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Fix grammar (e.g., 'hasn't changed', 'since I was a child', 'I like pizza', 'pizza has a lot of flavours'). Avoid vague phrases like 'many taste that I never.'

예시: No, my favourite food has not changed since I was a child; I have always liked pizza. I enjoy pizza because it has many flavours and toppings, such as cheese, pepperoni and vegetables, and I often order it for weekend meals.

× My favorite food is Tom Yum because Tom Yum have a good taste such as uh, sour, sour flavor and spicy.

✓ My favorite food is Tom Yum because Tom Yum has a good taste, such as sour and spicy flavors.

The verb 'have' should agree with the singular noun 'Tom Yum', so use 'has' (subject-verb agreement; Grammar problem type ID 27). Also 'flavor' should be plural 'flavors' when listing more than one, and the adjectives 'sour' and 'spicy' should be presented as adjectives describing 'flavors' (combine issues: incorrect use of plural and adjective/adverb use; IDs 1 and 13). Suggestion: ensure the verb matches the subject number and make nouns plural when referring to multiple items.

× The combination made me taste so yummy and delicious such as the combination with seafood almost.

✓ The combination makes it taste very delicious, especially when combined with seafood.

Tense and wording issues: 'made me taste so yummy' is unnatural; use 'makes it taste' to describe a general fact (present tense; Grammar problem type ID 6). 'Yummy' is informal and redundant with 'delicious' (incorrect use of adjectives; ID 13). 'Such as the combination with seafood almost' is ungrammatical — use 'especially when combined with seafood' (sentence structure and preposition use; IDs 26 and 11). Suggestion: keep present tense for general statements and use clear linking words like 'especially'.

× The kind of food did I like when I were young is fun fries because farm fries is a easier food that I will do.

✓ The kind of food I liked when I was young was 'fun fries' because 'farm fries' were an easy dish for me to make.

Multiple errors: question-word order 'did I like' is incorrect in a statement — remove auxiliary for past tense statements (sentence structure; ID 26). 'Were' should be 'was' or 'were' depending on subject; here 'I was young' uses 'was' (subject-verb agreement/past tense; IDs 5 and 27). 'is a easier' should be 'was an easy' (article error and adjective form; IDs 22 and 13). Also 'I will do' is wrong for past habitual action — use 'I could make' or 'I would make' in past context (modal/past tense; IDs 4 and 5). Suggestion: use past simple for past preferences and ensure correct article 'an' before vowel sound.

× I will cook for it when I watch movie, uh, do exercise outdoor.

✓ I used to cook it when I watched movies or exercised outdoors.

Context requires past habitual tense 'used to' rather than 'will' (future/modal misuse; IDs 7 and 4). 'Watch movie' should be 'watched movies' (plural and past tense; IDs 1 and 5). 'Do exercise outdoor' should be 'exercised outdoors' — use past tense and adverb 'outdoors' (present participle and adverb placement; IDs 10 and 20). Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habitual actions and correct verb forms and adverb placement.

× Yes, I eat different food at different times of the year.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Plural is needed: 'different foods' rather than 'different food' when referring to multiple types (singular/plural issue; ID 1). 'Eat' in present simple is acceptable for habitual action (present tense; ID 6). Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when referring to various kinds.

× Such as when I young I eat soaked Tom Yum soup for my birthday, but when I become a teenager I eat Pizza Hut to celebrate my birthday and when I'm adult I eat rice.

✓ For example, when I was young I ate soaked Tom Yum soup for my birthday; when I became a teenager I ate at Pizza Hut to celebrate my birthday; and now as an adult I eat rice.

Use past tense for past periods: 'was young' and 'ate' (past tense errors; ID 5). 'Become' should be 'became' (past tense; ID 5). 'Eat Pizza Hut' is incorrect — 'ate at Pizza Hut' uses correct preposition (preposition error; ID 11). 'When I'm adult' should be 'as an adult' or 'when I'm an adult' (article and phrase structure; IDs 22 and 26). Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when describing past habits and use correct prepositions and articles.

× Nope, my favorite food, no change since I was type it is pizza.

✓ No, my favorite food has not changed since I was a child; it is pizza.

Colloquial 'Nope' can be 'No'. Sentence needs present perfect 'has not changed' to describe a change from past until now (tense issue; ID 7/5 — specifically present perfect not listed but falls under tense issues; use ID 6 for present tense? Use ID 5 for past; choose closest: past tense ID 5). 'Since I was type' is incorrect — should be 'since I was a child' (wrong word choice/pronoun; ID 12). Also punctuation and clause structure need fixing (sentence structure; ID 26). Suggestion: use 'has not changed since I was a child' and a semicolon or separate sentence to state 'It is pizza.'

× I'm very like pizza because pizza have a lot of flavor and give me many taste that I never.

✓ I really like pizza because pizza has a lot of flavor and gives me many tastes I have never experienced before.

'I'm very like pizza' is ungrammatical; use 'I really like pizza' (incorrect use of adjective/adverb and verb; IDs 13 and 26). 'Pizza have' should be 'pizza has' (subject-verb agreement; ID 27). 'Give me many taste that I never' is incomplete and incorrect — use 'gives me many tastes I have never experienced before' (verb tense and sentence structure; IDs 5 and 26). Suggestion: use correct collocations ('like' not 'be like') and ensure verbs agree with singular subjects and complete comparative clauses.