Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は内容が明確で親しみやすいですが、発話の繰り返しや文法ミスがあり、流暢さと正確さを改善する必要があります。具体的には：1) 繰り返し（“I I”, “I I'm”など）を避ける。2) 過去と現在を表す表現を正しく使う（“I couldn't cook well before, but now I can.” 等）。3) 文を簡潔にし、1〜3文で完結にまとめる。4) 語彙を少し増やし、”especially”の後で理由を付け加えると良い。

예시: My favourite food is Italian, especially pasta and spaghetti. I usually cook them for my family, and although I couldn't cook well before, I can make several pasta dishes confidently now.

제안: 答えは具体的ですが、繰り返しや語順の乱れが目立ちます。改善点：1) 繰り返しや不要な語を省く。2) 過去の習慣を表す適切な表現を使う（“used to”や“I often”）。3) 補足として理由や頻度を付けると内容が豊かになる。

예시: When I was a child, I used to love tuna and salmon. I often went to sushi restaurants and usually ordered only tuna and salmon dishes because they were my favourites.

제안: 内容は季節ごとの食習慣を述べようとしていますが、言葉の選択や不明確な語（“navel”, “so many noodle”）が問題です。改善点：1) 単語を正確に使う（冬は“nabe”＝鍋料理、または“hot soup”など）。2) 繰り返し・填補の音（uh, I I）を減らす。3) 文を論理的に接続するために接続詞を使う。4) 具体例（好きな鍋の具や夏の麺の種類）を加える。

예시: Yes. In winter I often eat nabe (Japanese hot pot) because it warms me up, while in summer I enjoy cold noodles such as somen or cold soba because they are refreshing.

제안: 考えは明確ですが時制や表現の誤り、繰り返しが多いです。改善点：1) 過去の否定は過去形で表現する（“I didn't like”）。2) 繰り返しや冗長な語を避ける。3) 変化の理由や具体例を加えるとより良い。4) “really into”は口語的で良いが、1文で理由を述べてスムーズに結ぶ。

예시: Yes, it has changed. I didn't like meat when I was a child, but now I'm really into beef and chicken because I learned to enjoy different flavours, although I still eat less pork than before.

× I usually cook them for my family.

✓ I usually cook them for my family.

No change needed; present simple is correct for habitual action. Ensure 'them' correctly refers to 'Italian dishes' mentioned earlier.

× I I cannot I couldn't cook well before but listen.

✓ I couldn't cook well before, but now I can.

The original sentence mixes present and past negatives and includes filler 'listen'. Use a single past negative 'couldn't' to describe ability in the past and contrast with present ability using 'now I can'.

× But now I I'm good at cooking them.

✓ But now I'm good at cooking them.

Remove the repeated subject 'I' to form a grammatically correct contraction 'I'm'. This keeps the present state description clear.

× When I was a child, I liked tuna and salmon.

✓ When I was a child, I liked tuna and salmon.

Correct past simple usage for preferences in childhood; no change needed.

× I I usually went to sushi restaurant and I ate I only ate tuna and salmon dishes.

✓ I usually went to a sushi restaurant and I only ate tuna and salmon dishes.

Remove duplicate words and add the article 'a' before 'sushi restaurant'. Use past simple 'went' and 'ate' consistently to describe habitual past actions.

× Yes, of course in winter I, I often eat navel, which makes me, which makes me hot and in summer I I like to eat, uh, so many noodle, which is very delicious.

✓ Yes, of course. In winter I often eat navel oranges, which make me feel warm, and in summer I like to eat many noodles, which are very delicious.

Several issues: remove repeated words and filler sounds. Specify 'navel oranges' rather than 'navel'. Use plural verbs with plural nouns ('oranges... make'). 'Many noodles' is a better quantifier; use plural agreement 'noodles... are'. Keep tense and meaning consistent.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

This is the examiner's question; tense is correct (present perfect) to ask about change since the past. No change needed.

× Yes, when I was a child I don't like meat such as beef and beef, chicken and pork.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I didn't like meat such as beef, chicken, and pork.

Use past simple negative 'didn't like' to match 'when I was a child'. Remove duplicate 'beef' and add commas for list clarity.

× But now I really really into beef and chicken but I don't like pork as as well as before.

✓ But now I'm really into beef and chicken, but I don't like pork as much as before.

Use 'I'm really into' (be + -ing or 'be into') to express current preference. Replace 'as as well as before' with 'as much as before' for correct comparative expression. Remove duplicate words.