Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời khá tự nhiên nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp, ngắt câu và sử dụng từ liên kết để mạch lạc hơn. Cụ thể: sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (“it delicious” → “it’s delicious”), tránh lặp từ (“delicious and sweet” có thể gộp), và giữ tối đa 4–5 câu. Bạn cũng nên thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ vị quế trong bánh hoặc hoàn cảnh ăn) để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: My favourite food is apple cake because it’s sweet and comforting. I especially enjoy it on cold days, when the warm spice flavour—like cinnamon—makes me feel relaxed. I often have a slice with a cup of tea in the evening.

제안: Nội dung rõ ràng và đủ chi tiết nhưng cần chỉnh vài lỗi nhỏ và câu nối cho mạch lạc. Loại bỏ từ thừa (“although” thừa khi đã có “so”), dùng liên từ phù hợp và giữ số câu hợp lý. Có thể bổ sung một ví dụ cụ thể về món ăn hoặc một kỷ niệm ngắn để phong phú hơn.

예시: When I was young, I loved sweet and simple foods, such as fried chicken and ice cream. I had a real sweet tooth, so I often chose cakes and chocolates for dessert. I wasn’t very adventurous, so I usually ate the same familiar dishes at home.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi khiến người nghe bối rối: lỗi danh từ số nhiều/sai từ (“hearty dish dishes”), câu không hoàn chỉnh (“hot baths” sai nghĩa), và câu hỏi cuối cùng không cần thiết. Hãy sửa lỗi từ vựng, gộp các ý tương tự, dùng ví dụ cụ thể về món ăn theo mùa và tránh câu thừa. Giữ 3–4 câu đầy đủ, liên kết bằng “while” hoặc “whereas”.

예시: Yes, my diet changes with the seasons. In summer I prefer lighter, refreshing foods like fresh fruits and salads, while in winter I enjoy warm, hearty meals such as vegetable soup or stews. Seasonal weather definitely influences my food choices.

제안: Ý chính rõ, nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lựa từ: sửa “when it was a child” → “when I was a child”; tránh cấu trúc thừa (“so as I've grown older” có thể đơn giản thành “as I’ve grown older”). Bạn nên kết hợp câu bằng liên từ và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về món ăn hiện tại để tăng tính thuyết phục.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. When I was a child, I loved sweets like ice cream and cakes, but now I prefer savoury and healthier options such as grilled salmon and roasted vegetables. My tastes have become more mature as I’ve grown older.

× My favorite is apple cake. I love it because it delicious and sweet and I prefer to eat it when I'm feeling relaxed, especially on a cold day.

✓ My favorite is apple cake. I love it because it is delicious and sweet, and I prefer to eat it when I'm feeling relaxed, especially on a cold day.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before the adjective 'delicious' (linking verb needed). Also two independent clauses should be joined with a comma and conjunction 'and'. Suggestion: include the linking verb 'is' and use proper punctuation to connect clauses.

× When I was young I was really into sweet and simple foods, especially fried chicken and ice cream.

✓ When I was young, I was really into sweet and simple foods, especially fried chicken and ice cream.

The sentence is grammatically correct in tense but missing a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: add a comma after 'When I was young' to improve clarity.

× I had quite a sweet tooth, so I also loved cakes and chocolates.

✓ I had quite a sweet tooth, so I also loved cake and chocolate.

'Sweet tooth' implies liking sweets in general; 'cakes and chocolates' is grammatically acceptable but using uncountable nouns 'cake' and 'chocolate' is more natural here. Suggestion: prefer uncountable form when speaking generally about types of food.

× I wasn't very adventurous with food back then although, so I tended to stick to things I was familiar with.

✓ I wasn't very adventurous with food back then, so I tended to stick to things I was familiar with.

The word 'although' is unnecessary and creates a faulty structure when combined with 'so'. Remove 'although' and add a comma before 'so' to link clauses correctly.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

This sentence is correct. No change needed. Preposition 'at' is appropriate for 'times of the year'.

× My diet tends to change with the seasons.

✓ My diet tends to change with the seasons.

Sentence is correct. No change needed.

× In the summer I usually go for lighter and more refreshing foods such as fruits and salads, whereas in the winter I prefer warm and hearty dish dishes.

✓ In the summer I usually go for lighter and more refreshing foods such as fruit and salads, whereas in the winter I prefer warm and hearty dishes.

Use 'fruit' as an uncountable noun when speaking generally, and remove the duplicated word 'dish' to make 'dishes' plural. Suggestion: use 'fruit' and 'dishes' correctly.

× Hearty dishes like soup or hot baths.

✓ Hearty dishes include soup or hot broths.

Original fragment 'Hearty dishes like soup or hot baths.' is a fragment and 'hot baths' is incorrect contextually. Make it a full sentence and replace 'hot baths' with 'hot broths' or 'hot stews'. Suggestion: ensure complete sentence with a verb and correct noun.

× I think season changes naturally affect what?

✓ I think seasonal changes naturally affect what we eat.

The original ends with an isolated question mark and incomplete object. Use adjective 'seasonal' and complete the object to clarify meaning. Suggestion: complete the sentence to indicate what is affected.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Sentence is correct. Auxiliary 'has' with past participle 'changed' is appropriate for present perfect; no change needed.

× Quite a lot, actually. When it was a child, I had a sweet tooth and mostly enjoyed things like ice creams, cakes and fried chicken.

✓ Quite a lot, actually. When I was a child, I had a sweet tooth and mostly enjoyed things like ice cream, cake and fried chicken.

Use 'I' not 'it' for the subject referring to the speaker. Also use uncountable forms 'ice cream' and 'cake' when speaking generally. Suggestion: replace 'it' with 'I' and prefer uncountable nouns for general food references.

× These days, though, I tend to prefer more savory and healthier food, such as grilled meats and vegetables.

✓ These days, though, I tend to prefer more savory and healthier foods, such as grilled meats and vegetables.

Use plural 'foods' or keep uncountable 'food' consistently; here 'foods' fits with the plural examples. Suggestion: match noun number to following examples.

× I guess my tastes have become more sophisticated so as I've grown older.

✓ I guess my tastes have become more sophisticated as I've grown older.

The phrase 'so as' is incorrect here. Use 'as' to indicate the time relationship. Suggestion: remove 'so' to form 'as I've grown older'.