Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Nên trả lời trực tiếp ngay đầu (topic sentence) nêu rõ món ăn yêu thích, tránh lặp từ và tiếng ì (hesitation). Dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn (1-2 câu) và đưa thêm 1 lý do cụ thể với từ nối phù hợp như "because" hoặc "so". Chú ý phát âm từ like "fast" và sử dụng trạng từ đúng ("quickly" nếu cần).

예시: My favourite food is a ham and cheese sandwich. I eat it every morning before school because it's convenient and saves me time.

제안: Cải thiện: Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I liked...), dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán, tránh lỗi động từ (use "enjoyed" not "very enjoy"). Giải thích cụ thể hơn khi nào và tại sao, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "for example". Chú ý dùng tính từ/ trạng từ đúng vị trí ("quickly" đặt sau động từ).

예시: When I was young, I enjoyed eating fast food. For example, I often had it at birthday parties because it was easy to prepare and my friends liked it.

제안: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời khá rõ nhưng cần mạch lạc hơn và loại bỏ tiếng ậm ừ. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn (Yes/No + brief), sau đó dùng linking words như "for example", "in summer"/"in winter" để trình bày chi tiết. Thêm một câu kết ngắn để tóm tắt.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer cold treats like ice cream, while in winter I often choose hot dishes such as soup to stay warm.

제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề (Yes, it has/No, it hasn't). Giải thích rõ ràng nguyên nhân thay đổi và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ậm ừ, dùng thì quá khứ và hiện tại đúng ("I enjoyed" vs "I now prefer").

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. I used to prefer fast food because it was quick, but now I prefer healthier options like vegetables and fruit because I'm more concerned about my health.

× The food I really enjoy eating is so I I always eat it in in every morning when I go to school because it's convenient and fastly.

✓ The food I really enjoy eating is... I always eat it every morning when I go to school because it's convenient and fast.

The original sentence has disfluent phrases ('is so I I', repeated words, and 'in in every morning') and an incorrect adverb form 'fastly'. Fix by removing filler words, eliminating repetitions, using 'every morning' (no 'in'), and using the adjective 'fast' as part of a reduced clause 'because it's convenient and fast'. Suggestions: pause to plan sentence, avoid fillers, and choose correct word forms.

× When I was a kid, I very enjoy eating fast food.

✓ When I was a kid, I really enjoyed eating fast food.

Mixes past-time marker 'When I was a kid' with present tense 'enjoy'. Use past tense 'enjoyed'. Also 'very' is not natural with 'enjoy' in this context; use 'really'. Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions and prefer adverb collocations like 'really enjoyed'.

× I sometimes eating in some special occasions such as birthday party because it's convenient and quick quickly to prepare.

✓ I sometimes ate it on special occasions such as birthday parties because it's convenient and quick to prepare.

'I sometimes eating' lacks auxiliary/finite verb — should be 'I sometimes ate'. Use past because context is childhood. Preposition 'on special occasions' and plural 'birthday parties' are natural. 'Quickly' (adverb) is incorrect modifying 'to prepare'; use adjective 'quick' or phrase 'quick to prepare'. Suggestion: ensure finite verb form, correct prepositions, and use appropriate adjective/adverb forms.

× Just I do the food I eat.

✓ I just mean the food I eat.

Phrase is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Just I do the food I eat' needs rephrasing to 'I just mean the food I eat' to convey intent. Suggestion: use simple structures like 'I just mean...' to clarify.

× MMM depends on the seasons of the years.

✓ It depends on the seasons of the year.

Unnecessary filler 'MMM'. Use 'It depends on the seasons of the year' or simply 'It depends on the season'. 'Years' plural is redundant with 'seasons'. Suggestion: remove fillers and use singular 'year' or phrase 'the seasons'.

× In summer I prefer eating cold foods such as ice cream.

✓ In summer I prefer to eat cold foods such as ice cream.

After 'prefer' with a general statement, both 'prefer eating' and 'prefer to eat' are possible, but 'prefer to eat' is more natural here. Suggestion: use 'prefer to eat' for clarity in spoken answers.

× In the winter, it's suitable for me to eat hot foods such as soup.

✓ In the winter, I prefer to eat hot foods such as soup.

'It's suitable for me to eat' is grammatical but awkward in this context; 'I prefer to eat' matches the discussion about choices and is more natural. Suggestion: use 'prefer' to talk about habitual choices by season.

× MMM yes it says when it was a try.

✓ Yes, when I was younger.

Original contains filler and ungrammatical phrase 'it says when it was a try'. Use 'when I was younger' to respond simply. Suggestion: avoid fillers and use clear age-related phrases.

× I enjoy eating fast food because it's convenient and quick to prepare.

✓ I enjoyed eating fast food because it was convenient and quick to prepare.

Context refers to childhood, so past tense 'enjoyed' and 'it was' are required. Suggestion: align tense with time frame indicated by context.

× But when I get older I I focus.

✓ But when I got older, I focused on my health.

Mixes present with past narrative. Use past tense 'got' and 'focused' to continue past time frame. Also 'I I focus' has repetition and incomplete thought; include object 'on my health'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and complete the clause.

× I need to focus on my health so I MMM usually it MMM healthy foods such as vegetable and fruit.

✓ I needed to focus on my health so I usually ate healthier foods such as vegetables and fruit.

In past narrative use past tense 'needed' and 'ate'. 'Healthy' should be comparative/adverb 'healthier' to show change, and plural 'vegetables'. Remove fillers 'MMM' and extraneous 'it'. Suggestion: use comparative 'healthier' when comparing past and present, correct plural nouns, and maintain past tense.