Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid extra words. Add one or two specific details about why you like it (flavour, texture, memories) using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: My favourite food is kidney beans, especially when my mother cooks them. I love their rich, savoury flavour and creamy texture, and they remind me of family dinners from my childhood.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence saying what you liked, then give one or two concise reasons linked by a connector (because/so). Correct grammar and avoid filler words. Mention briefly whether you still like it.

예시: When I was young, I liked a simple potato dish cooked with onions because it was milder than other foods. However, I don't eat it much now because I prefer stronger flavours.

제안: Answer directly, then give a clear example with smooth linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., "in winter" not "in this winters"). Limit to 3–4 sentences and avoid hesitations. Describe why the seasonal food is suitable (taste, warmth, health).

예시: Yes, I eat different foods in different seasons. For example, in winter I often eat saag, a warm, leafy vegetable dish, because it is nutritious and helps me feel warm during cold weather.

제안: Give a clear statement about the change, then explain reasons using linking words (because/so). Use correct tense and concise language. End the sentence properly—avoid trailing off. Provide a specific example of the healthy food you now prefer.

예시: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. When I was a child I preferred Chinese or Italian dishes, but now I choose healthier options, such as grilled fish and salads, because I want to stay fit.

× Tell My most favorite food is kidney beans because I love its taste, specially made by my mother.

✓ My favourite food is kidney beans because I love their taste, especially when my mother makes them.

Pronoun agreement and reference: 'Tell My' is incorrect and unnecessary; start with 'My'. 'Kidney beans' is plural, so use the plural possessive pronoun 'their' not 'its'. 'Specially' is the wrong adverb here; use 'especially'. Word order and verb form: 'made by my mother' should be 'when my mother makes them' to sound natural and match tense. Suggestion: Use clear subject start, ensure pronoun agrees with noun number, and use 'especially' for emphasis.

× Well-being a people, I love to eat the potatoes sorted with some onions, uh, because that that is the only dish which used to be less spicy than other ones.

✓ When I was young, I loved to eat potatoes cooked with some onions because that was the only dish that used to be less spicy than the others.

Sentence structure and word choice: 'Well-being a people' is ungrammatical; replace with 'When I was young'. 'The potatoes sorted with some onions' is incorrect; use 'potatoes cooked with some onions'. Repetition 'that that' should be a single 'that'. Tense and reference: use past tense 'loved' and 'was' to match 'when I was young'. Use 'the others' for comparison. Suggestion: Use standard time clause 'When I was young', correct verb for food preparation, and avoid repeated words.

× So that's the reason I love that food the most.

✓ So that's the reason I loved that food the most.

Tense consistency: The student is describing a preference in childhood, so use past tense 'loved' rather than present 'love'. Suggestion: Keep past tense throughout sentences referring to childhood.

× But these days I don't like it having.

✓ But these days I don't like it anymore.

Ungrammatical verb phrase: 'I don't like it having' is incorrect. Use 'I don't like it anymore' to indicate a change in preference. Suggestion: Use 'anymore' with negative present to show change from past to present.

× Well, yes, of course, uh, different foods, uh, according in a year there are different seasons.

✓ Well, yes, of course; in a year there are different seasons.

Redundancy and incorrect preposition: 'according in a year' is incorrect and redundant. Use 'in a year there are different seasons' or 'according to the seasons' later. Remove filler words for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'in a year' or 'according to the seasons' but not both together.

× So according to the seasons, uh, I prefer different foods.

✓ So according to the seasons, I prefer different foods.

Filler removal: The sentence is acceptable but contains filler 'uh'; removing it makes the sentence clearer. Preposition usage 'according to the seasons' is correct. Suggestion: Omit fillers in spoken responses when writing.

× For example, in this winters there is uh, Indian special food called saag, which is made-up made, which is very healthy dish and most famous cuisine.

✓ For example, in winter there is a special Indian dish called saag, which is very healthy and a famous cuisine.

Article and noun form: Use 'in winter' (not 'in this winters'). Use 'a special Indian dish' (correct article and adjective order). 'Made-up made' is redundant and ungrammatical; remove it. Use 'very healthy' and 'a famous cuisine' or 'a popular dish'. Suggestion: Use singular uncountable 'winter', correct article 'a', and avoid redundant phrases.

× So I ate.

✓ So I ate it.

Completeness and object required: 'So I ate' is grammatically possible but sounds incomplete; add object 'it' to refer to the dish. Tense is past which may be okay if narrating. Suggestion: Include the object to make the sentence natural: 'So I ate it' or 'So I used to eat it.'

× Oh yes, being our people and now into their teenager age, I preferred In my childhood I used to prefer the food that is mainly Chinese or Italian but now I prefer to eat some healthy food so that I can be fit and.

✓ Oh yes. In my childhood I used to prefer foods that were mainly Chinese or Italian, but now I prefer to eat healthy food so that I can stay fit.

Sentence fragmentation and pronoun errors: 'being our people and now into their teenager age' is unclear and incorrect; replace with 'In my childhood'. Tense consistency: use past 'used to prefer' for childhood habits and present 'prefer' for current preference. Article and plurality: 'food that is mainly Chinese or Italian' -> 'foods that were mainly Chinese or Italian' or 'cuisines that were mainly Chinese or Italian'. Incomplete ending: finish with 'stay fit' rather than leaving 'and.' Suggestion: Separate ideas into clear clauses, maintain tense consistency, and complete the final clause.