Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct errors, avoid redundancy, and add one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep under five sentences. Also correct vocabulary (kangkong, not 'kangkong water') and grammar (e.g., 'is very comforting', finish the final clause).

예시: My favourite food is sinigang, a Filipino sour soup made with tamarind, pork and kangkong. I love it because the hot, tangy broth is very comforting, especially on rainy days, and it’s a healthier option compared with fried dishes.

제안: Clarify vocabulary errors and use past tense for childhood. Begin with a clear topic sentence (I liked ...), fix word choice ('sopas' not 'soap'), and correct grammar. Provide one or two specific supporting details with linking words and avoid repetition.

예시: When I was young, I liked sopas, a Filipino creamy chicken soup with pasta, cabbage, carrots and garlic. It was comforting because my mother always made it on cold days, and the warm, creamy broth would cheer me up when I had cravings.

제안: Give a direct answer and explain briefly with specific examples. Avoid hesitations and mixing languages; use linking words (for example, in summer or during festivals). Keep it to one or two clear sentences.

예시: Yes. For example, in summer I prefer light meals like salads and grilled fish, but during the rainy season I usually choose soups such as sinigang or sopas because they are warming and satisfying.

제안: This is clear and mostly correct; improve by fixing small grammar errors, adding a linking word and one specific detail to sound more natural. Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since childhood. I still love pizza because I grew up eating it with my family, and the taste always reminds me of home and family gatherings.

× My favorite food is Sinigang, a Filipino sour soup made with tamarind, pork and kangkong water. I love it because it's healthy with broth, is every comforting, special on rainy days and it always.

✓ My favorite food is Sinigang, a Filipino sour soup made with tamarind, pork and kangkong. I love it because it's healthy, has a comforting broth, is especially nice on rainy days, and I always enjoy it.

The sentence has awkward adjective/adverb use and redundant or incorrect phrasing. 'kangkong water' is incorrect; 'kangkong' is an ingredient so list it without 'water'. 'healthy with broth' is improper; use 'has a comforting broth' to describe the soup. 'is every comforting' is incorrect; the intended adverb is 'very' or better 'especially' for emphasis. 'and it always' is incomplete; complete as 'and I always enjoy it.' Suggestion: simplify noun lists, use correct adjective/adverb forms, and complete clauses. Grammar problem type ID:13

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? Student: I like soap as a Filipino creamy chicken soup with pasta, cabbage, carrot, onion and garlic.

✓ When I was young, I liked sopas, a Filipino creamy chicken soup with pasta, cabbage, carrots, onion, and garlic.

The question asks about past preference, so the student should use past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. Also 'soap' is a misspelling of 'sopas' (the Filipino dish), and 'carrot' should be plural 'carrots' when listing ingredients. Suggestion: use past tense for past-time questions, correct dish name, and make ingredient number agreement consistent. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I love it because it warm and comforting my comforting me when my mother made it for me on cold or rainy days.

✓ I love it because it was warm and comforting and comforted me when my mother made it for me on cold or rainy days.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses and contains redundant/incorrect phrases. 'it warm' needs a verb 'was warm' for past description. 'comforting my comforting me' is ungrammatical and redundant; use 'and comforted me'. Maintain past tense because 'when my mother made it' is past. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and remove redundancy. Grammar problem type ID:6

× It depends on me when I have cravings.

✓ It depends on my cravings when I want it, or I eat it when I have cravings.

The original sentence 'It depends on me when I have cravings' has incorrect sentence structure and unclear meaning. 'Depends on me' is not the right collocation; better is 'It depends on my cravings' or rephrase to clarify that eating the dish depends on whether the speaker has cravings. Suggestion: use clear subject and noun phrases ('my cravings') and state the condition explicitly. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yeah, because sometimes I feel what did you call umm Nasasawa? Oh my.

✓ Yeah, because sometimes I feel, what do you call it, umm, 'nasasawa' (getting tired of something).

This is a spoken hesitation; grammatically it mixes past and present and uses 'what did you call' incorrectly in the clause. For present feelings, use present 'what do you call it'. Include commas to set off hesitation fillers and add a brief translation for the Tagalog word. Suggestion: use present tense when describing current feelings and structure the parenthetical comment. Grammar problem type ID:26

× No, my favorite food hasn't changed since I was child. I still love pizza because I grew up eating with my family and the flavor still remind me of home.

✓ No, my favorite food hasn't changed since I was a child. I still love pizza because I grew up eating it with my family and the flavor still reminds me of home.

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