Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (taste, where you eat it, who cooks it). Avoid fillers (uh) and incorrect phrases. Use linking words for coherence.

예시: My favourite food is mutton biryani because I love its rich, spicy flavour. For example, my mother makes it on special weekends and I enjoy the tender meat and aromatic rice. I often eat it with a side of raita, which balances the heat.

제안: Use past tense consistently and provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Replace fillers and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'Dal Kolambu' or 'dal curry', 'asked my mum to make it'). Add a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: When I was young, I liked dal curry with rice. I often asked my mother to cook it and she served it with a spoonful of ghee, which made it very comforting. As a result, it became my go-to meal on cold evenings.

제안: Be accurate and organized: start with a clear topic sentence about seasonal changes (if any). If describing daily meals rather than seasonal changes, clarify that. Use correct meal names and avoid vague endings. Use linking words (for breakfast, for lunch, in the evening) to structure the answer.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer lighter breakfasts like idli or dosa, while in winter I eat hot porridge. For lunch I usually have rice with vegetables, and in the evening I prefer light meals such as soup or a salad.

제안: Use consistent tense and a clear comparison structure: state the past favourite and the current favourite, then give a reason for the change. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing. Use linking words like 'but now' or 'because'.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I loved dal because it was comforting and my mother cooked it often, but now I prefer foods like pizza and burgers because I enjoy their variety of flavours and convenience.

× My favorite food is mutton biryani. I love to eat every day.

✓ My favorite food is mutton biryani. I love to eat it every day.

Missing object pronoun 'it' after 'eat' causes sentence to lack a direct object; use 'eat it' to refer to the previously mentioned dish.

× Uh, my mom cook bills and I love my mom's cook and.

✓ Uh, my mom cooks biryani and I love my mom's cooking.

Subject-verb agreement: with singular subject 'my mom' the verb needs third-person singular 'cooks'. 'Bills' is likely a mistake for 'biryani'; use noun 'cooking' to refer to the act, not the verb form 'cook'.

× I like Dal Kolambu when I was young, uh, I often ask to my mom to cook Dal chutney.

✓ I liked Dal Kolambu when I was young. I often asked my mom to cook dal chutney.

Tense consistency: the first clause refers to the past so use past tense 'liked'. The second clause describes repeated past action, so use past 'asked' and omit unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'ask' when followed by a person (ask my mom to cook is correct but 'ask to my mom' is incorrect). Also use lowercase 'dal' for consistency.

× Uh, I love to eat daily with some ghee, uh.

✓ I loved to eat it daily with some ghee.

Tense consistency: when speaking about childhood habits use past tense 'loved'. Also include pronoun 'it' to specify what was eaten and keep word order 'eat it daily with some ghee'.

× Morning I will eat some lunch, idli, dosa, vada.

✓ In the morning I eat breakfast such as idli, dosa, and vada.

Time expression 'Morning' needs a preposition 'In the morning'. 'Will' is unnecessary for habitual action; use present simple 'eat'. 'Lunch' is incorrect for morning meal; replace with 'breakfast'. Use commas and 'and' before the last item.

× Lunch I will eat some veggies and some rice.

✓ At lunch I eat some vegetables and rice.

Use 'At lunch' for the time phrase and present simple 'eat' for habitual action. 'Veggies' is informal; 'vegetables' is more appropriate. 'Some' before 'rice' is optional; omit one 'some' for clarity.

× Dinner I will eat some light foods and some.

✓ For dinner I eat light food.

Clarify time phrase 'For dinner' and use present simple 'eat' for routine. 'Some light foods and some' is incomplete; simplify to 'light food' or specify items. Avoid trailing 'and some'.

× In my childhood I love to eat Dal, now I love pizza, burger, these kind of foods I love to eat now.

✓ In my childhood I loved to eat dal. Now I like pizza and burgers; I enjoy these kinds of foods now.

Tense consistency: 'In my childhood' requires past tense 'loved'. For current preferences use present simple 'like' or 'enjoy'. Use plural 'burgers' when speaking generally and 'kinds of' rather than 'kind of' when referring to multiple items.

× Umm, I have changed so many favorite foods that I was ate in my childhoods.

✓ Umm, my favorite foods have changed a lot since my childhood.

Incorrect tense and structure: 'I have changed so many favorite foods' is unnatural; use passive structure 'my favorite foods have changed' or 'my preferences have changed'. 'I was ate' is ungrammatical; 'ate' is simple past and does not fit with 'was'. 'Childhoods' should be singular 'childhood' when referring to one's own past.