Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and provide a short reason or detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using a linking word. Avoid repeating the same phrase.

예시: I really like pasta, especially spaghetti with tomato sauce. For example, I enjoy it because it’s quick to cook and comforting after a long day.

제안: Use correct sentence order and grammar. Begin with a topic sentence stating what you liked, then give two specific examples and a brief reason. Use linking words like “for example” or “because”.

예시: When I was young I liked fast food and pizza. For example, I often ate hamburgers and drank milk because they were tasty and my parents bought them as a treat.

제안: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific seasonal examples. Use linking words (e.g. “in winter”, “in summer”) and avoid filler words. Limit to two to three short sentences.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. In winter I prefer warm dishes like pasta and soup, while in summer I often eat ice cream and salads because I want something cool and refreshing.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear comparison between past and present tastes. Use linking words like “when I was a child” and “now” and provide a reason for the change.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. When I was young I mainly liked pizza and fast food, but now I prefer healthier meals because I care more about my diet.

× My kind of food did I like when you when I were young, is a pizza and the fast food and the hamburger and the milk because I I want young.

✓ When I was young, the kinds of food I liked were pizza, fast food, hamburgers and milk.

Original sentence has incorrect word order, unnecessary repetition, wrong verb form for 'was', and plural/singular mismatches. Use correct past tense 'was' for first person singular, place time expression 'When I was young' at the start, use 'kinds of food I liked' for plural foods, and use plural verb 'were' to agree with plural subject. Remove extraneous words and list items with commas.

× My favorite food is pasta. I like pasta.

✓ My favorite food is pasta; I like pasta.

No major grammar content error besides sounding repetitive; technically correct. Keep noun 'pasta' singular/uncountable as used. Suggest combining sentences to sound more natural.

× Yes, I eat different food at different time of the year. For example, I eat in the in the snow, uh, or pasta and the summer I like uh, ice cream. I like eat fast food something.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I eat pasta, and in summer I like ice cream. I also sometimes eat fast food.

Errors: plural/singular (foods, times), incorrect word order and filler words, incorrect seasonal preposition phrasing. Use plural 'foods' and 'times' because multiple items are implied. Specify seasons with 'in winter' and 'in summer'. Use 'I also sometimes eat' for natural adverb placement. Remove extraneous fillers.

× Yes, when I. Has a child I uh. I don't like some food I like. Pizza. I don't like healthy food.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I didn't like some foods. I liked pizza and I didn't like healthy food.

Original uses incorrect auxiliary and tense ('Has a child' incorrect). Use past tense 'was a child' and past negative 'didn't like'. Match plural 'foods' for general items. Clarify that pizza was liked using past tense 'liked'. Keep consistent past tense throughout.