Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Correct grammar (use past tense and articles) and keep to relevant details about the food now; add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is pizza. I love it because the crust is crispy and the toppings are very flavourful. For example, I often order a Margherita with fresh basil when I want something simple, and a meat-lovers pizza when I want a richer meal.

제안: Give a clear, relevant answer naming a specific dish you liked, and then add a brief, coherent reason or memory. Avoid unrelated words or names and use past tense for childhood. Use a linking word to connect the topic sentence and the detail.

예시: When I was young I liked a dish called Chandrachudu, which is a spicy rice and lentil dish. I liked it because my mother cooked it for family gatherings, and the strong spices make it very memorable.

제안: Answer directly and give specific seasonal examples. Use linking words (for example, in summer, in winter) and avoid irrelevant vocabulary. Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I eat more salads and fruits to stay cool, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews because they are comforting and warming.

제안: Answer the question directly and stay on topic (food, not sport). Use correct grammar: say 'No, it hasn't changed' and provide a short reason or example to support your answer. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, it hasn't changed; pizza is still my favourite food. I think my taste stayed the same because my family often ate pizza at weekend gatherings, so I grew up liking it and still enjoy it now.

× When I was child, I liked this food in India.

✓ When I was a child, I liked this food in India.

Missing definite article 'a' before singular count noun 'child'. Use 'a child' to indicate being one member of the class of children. Suggestion: include appropriate articles before singular count nouns (a/an/the) as needed.

× I like Chandrachudu. Bhaijaan is a Gallipoli also like Mongoose.

✓ I liked Chandrachudu. Bhaijaan, a Gallipoli, also likes Mongoose.

Tense mismatch and subject-verb agreement problems. The question asked about past likes ('when you were young'), so use past tense 'liked'. Also 'Bhaijaan' is third person singular and needs 'likes'. 'a Gallipoli' needs article if it is a noun phrase describing him. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame and ensure verbs agree with their subjects.

× Yes I do. I eat a different food in linear different types of beers like.

✓ Yes, I do. I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and contains irrelevant words ('linear', 'types of beers'). The examiner asked about seasonal variation, so use 'different foods' (plural) and the prepositional phrase 'at different times of the year'. Suggestion: remove unrelated words and use a clear plural noun plus correct preposition 'at' for time periods.

× No, there are no change. My favorite sport whenever I was a child.

✓ No, there has been no change. My favorite food has remained the same since I was a child.

'There are no change' is incorrect: 'change' is a singular noun so 'no change' should be used with 'has been' to indicate from past to present. Also the second fragment 'My favorite sport whenever I was a child' is unclear and uses wrong noun 'sport' and lacks verb. The question asked about favourite food changing, so correct to 'My favorite food has remained the same since I was a child.' Suggestion: use correct verb form with 'no change' and ensure sentences answer the question with the right nouns and complete verbs.