Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers and repetitive words; use correct grammar (e.g., plural forms, articles) and name examples clearly.

예시: My favourite food is potatoes. They are very filling and versatile, so I can enjoy them in many forms. For example, I often eat French fries for a snack and mashed potatoes with dinner, which makes them a convenient and tasty choice.

제안: Clarify the meaning and use a simple structure: state what you liked, then give one or two clear reasons or examples. Avoid unclear words and vocabulary errors. Use linking words like 'because' or 'when'.

예시: When I was young, I liked simple home-cooked meals. I often enjoyed dishes with rice and soy sauce because my family cooked them every day, and I liked the familiar flavours.

제안: Answer directly and expand with one specific reason and an example. Use correct tense and grammar, and avoid repeated words. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

예시: No, I usually eat the same types of food all year. In my country, rice is a staple, so we eat rice for breakfast, lunch, and dinner most days because it is inexpensive and widely available.

제안: Give a direct yes/no answer, then explain why with specific details and a linking word. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (use 'Canada' context properly). Mention a clear comparison to show change.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. After I visited Canada last year, I discovered fried potatoes and now I prefer them to rice because they taste crispy and satisfying, especially as a snack.

× My favorite food is potato because potatoes, uh, potatoes very filling and very variation, many variation, a lot of variation of the food and uh, for example, pota, uh, French fries, uh, hash the pot.

✓ My favorite food is potatoes because they are very filling and very versatile; there are many variations of potato dishes, for example, potatoes, French fries, and hash browns.

Errors: incorrect singular/plural and articles ('potato' should be plural 'potatoes' when speaking generally); missing subject and verb ('potatoes very filling' needs 'they are very filling'); incorrect word choice ('variation' should be plural or use 'versatile' and 'variations'); misspelling ('hash the pot' should be 'hash browns'). Suggestion: Use plural when referring to a food in general, include the subject and appropriate verb, choose correct nouns and adjectives ('versatile' for adaptability), and use common dish names correctly.

× My kind of food is alarming when I was young, I was young because loving is very a lot of barriers, uh, variety and the soil, soy sauce and the tongues.

✓ The kind of food I liked when I was young included many flavors and sauces, such as soy sauce and various seasonings.

Errors: tense and meaning are confused ('is alarming when I was young' mixes present and past); incorrect word choices ('loving is very a lot of barriers' unclear; 'the soil' and 'the tongues' are incorrect). Suggestion: Use past tense 'liked' for preferences in childhood, simplify and use correct nouns like 'flavors', 'sauces', and 'seasonings', and express examples clearly.

× No, I didn't. My country is very Fremantle rice. And rice is every eat, Yeah, every eat every time. And uh, breakfast, lunch and dinner, yeah.

✓ No, I didn't. In my country we eat a lot of rice. People eat rice at every meal: breakfast, lunch, and dinner.

Errors: incorrect tense and awkward phrasing ('My country is very Fremantle rice' incorrect word order and word choice); missing article or quantifier ('eat a lot of rice'); repetition and wrong verb forms ('every eat'). Suggestion: Use the simple present to describe habitual actions ('we eat'), use quantifiers ('a lot of'), and list meals clearly.

× I, I went to the Canada last year, but uh, Canada is very many anytime, a very, uh, every time the fried potatoes and I like fried potatoes better than rice.

✓ I went to Canada last year, and they eat fried potatoes very often there. I like fried potatoes better than rice.

Errors: article misuse ('to the Canada' should be 'to Canada'); awkward phrasing and tense consistency ('Canada is very many anytime' unclear); missing verb forms and adverbs ('eat fried potatoes very often'). Suggestion: Use correct country name without 'the', use past tense to state travel ('went'), and use simple present to describe general habits in a place ('they eat... often').