Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cách trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn, ngắn gọn, chính xác ngữ pháp và từ vựng phù hợp. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (thừa từ như "it had to"), sai trật tự từ, và phát âm/word choice không chính xác (ví dụ dùng "ginger" sai ngữ cảnh). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ thích hợp. Hãy sửa lỗi về tính từ và danh từ (ví dụ "delicious" cần kèm chủ ngữ/động từ đúng), và thay "flavor" thành "flavourful" hoặc "good flavour".

예시: My favourite food is Vietnamese cuisine. I especially love pho because the broth is rich and fragrant. I often buy it from a favourite street stall where the broth is freshly made and the ingredients are affordable.

제안: Cần dùng thì quá khứ khi nói về sở thích trong quá khứ và tránh câu rườm rà. Sửa cấu trúc câu, dùng linking words để giải thích lý do và kết quả (e.g., "because", "so"). Đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể về loại junk food và phản ứng của cha mẹ để câu rõ ràng hơn.

예시: When I was a child, I liked junk food, especially burgers and fries, because they tasted great and often came with toys. However, my mother thought they were unhealthy, so she rarely allowed me to eat them.

제안: Cần sửa liên từ mở đầu (không dùng 'Yet' ở đây), dùng số nhiều/chủ ngữ-động từ phù hợp, và tránh lặp từ ("salad, salad, salad"). Dùng linking words để so sánh mùa và nêu ví dụ cụ thể, chú ý viết hoa không cần thiết (stew). Giữ trả lời trong 2-3 câu tối đa.

예시: I usually eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in winter and early spring I prefer hot, comforting meals like soups and stews because they warm me up, while in summer I eat more salads and seasonal fruits to stay cool.

제안: Cần dùng thì quá khứ cho quá khứ và thì hiện tại hoàn thành/hiện tại cho thay đổi kéo dài; sửa lỗi lặp từ ("I I"), ngữ pháp ("rarely ate vegetables"), và sự nhất quán về thì ("wanted" vs "want"). Thêm một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể nêu ví dụ về món ăn hiện tại để làm câu phong phú hơn.

예시: As a child I preferred junk food and rarely ate vegetables. As I grew up, I started choosing healthier meals because I wanted to feel more energetic, so now I enjoy salads and grilled fish.

× While it had to, I would say that it definitely Vietnamese food.

✓ I would say that it is definitely Vietnamese food.

The original sentence has unnecessary and incorrect phrase 'While it had to' and is missing the verb 'is' before 'definitely Vietnamese food'. Remove the irrelevant clause and use present simple 'is' to state preference. Suggestion: start with 'I would say that' followed by 'it is' + noun phrase.

× I am a big fan of this ginger because it not only delicious but also affordable.

✓ I am a big fan of it because it is not only delicious but also affordable.

The sentence uses 'this ginger' incorrectly and omits the verb 'is' after 'not only'. Replace 'this ginger' with 'it' or the correct noun, and include 'is' after 'it' to form 'it is not only... but also...'. Use parallel structure for the adjectives.

× I usually buy food from my favorite street store because the broth is fresh and flavor.

✓ I usually buy food from my favorite street stall because the broth is fresh and flavorful.

Use 'street stall' rather than 'street store' for small vendors. 'Flavor' is a noun; the adjective 'flavorful' or phrase 'full of flavor' is needed. Also maintain consistent noun/adjective forms.

× When I was a child, I like junk food because it tastes good and the packaging and toy were attached to children also mean.

✓ When I was a child, I liked junk food because it tasted good and the packaging and toys were aimed at children.

The context is past, so verbs should be in past tense: 'liked' and 'tasted'. 'Toy' should be plural 'toys', and 'were attached to children' is incorrect; use 'were aimed at children' to express marketing targeted at them.

× However, it wasn't healthy so my mother didn't let me eat it often.

✓ However, it wasn't healthy, so my mother didn't let me eat it often.

This sentence is mostly correct; add a comma before 'so' to improve clarity and maintain past tense consistently.

× Yet I usually eat different food depending on season.

✓ I usually eat different foods depending on the season.

'Yet' is unnecessary and unnatural here. Use plural 'foods' for varieties and include the definite article 'the' before 'season'.

× For example in winter and early spring I prefer hot comforting meal like soup and Stew because they warm me up.

✓ For example, in winter and early spring I prefer hot, comforting meals like soup and stew because they warm me up.

Add commas for readability, use plural 'meals' to match 'like', make 'comforting' an adjective and lowercase 'stew'. Use parallel noun form.

× While in summer I too like the food salad, salad, salad or seasonal fruit.

✓ In summer I also like salads or seasonal fruit.

'While' is unnecessary; 'also' is better placed after subject. Repeating 'salad' is incorrect—use plural 'salads'. Simplify to natural phrasing.

× When I was a child I I preferred junk food and rarely eat vegetable.

✓ When I was a child I preferred junk food and rarely ate vegetables.

Use past tense 'ate' to match timeframe. Remove duplicate 'I'. Use plural 'vegetables'.

× As I grew up I began to prefer a healthier diet because I want to stay healthy and feel refreshed.

✓ As I grew up, I began to prefer a healthier diet because I wanted to stay healthy and feel refreshed.

The main clause is past ('grew up', 'began'), so the reason clause should also use past tense 'wanted' to maintain tense consistency. Add comma after introductory clause.