Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers like "umm" and correct verb/grammar errors (e.g., "they contain a lot of protein").

예시: My favourite food is boiled eggs because they are high in protein and low in carbohydrates. For example, I often eat two boiled eggs for breakfast to stay full and energetic until lunch.

제안: Open with a clear topic sentence and use correct quantifiers and capitalization. Add a linking word to explain why you liked them and one brief specific example to make your answer richer.

예시: When I was young, I liked sweets and fast food. For instance, I often ate chocolate bars and French fries after school because they tasted good and were easy to buy.

제안: Give a direct answer first (Yes or No) and then explain briefly with a specific example. Avoid hedging phrases like "It's a very difficult question" and be coherent: use linking words such as "however" or "because" to connect ideas.

예시: No, I don't usually change my diet with the seasons because I prefer routine. For example, I eat similar meals year-round, such as boiled eggs and salad for breakfast, although I might add soups in winter.

제안: Give a clear, grammatical statement about the change and provide specific contrasting details with linking words (e.g., "when I was a child... but now..."). Correct vocabulary misuse ("raw food" vs "whole foods") and finish your sentence with a complete example.

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed. When I was a child I ate a lot of processed snacks like chocolates and nuggets, but now I prefer whole foods such as grilled chicken, fresh vegetables and fruit because they make me feel healthier.

× Umm, actually my favorite food is something healthy, for example boiled eggs because they are contain a lots of protein, umm, and very few carbs.

✓ Umm, actually my favorite food is something healthy, for example boiled eggs because they contain a lot of protein, umm, and very few carbs.

Error type 12: 'they are contain' uses an incorrect pronoun-verb combination. Plural pronoun 'they' should be followed directly by the base verb 'contain' (they contain), not 'are contain'. Also 'a lots of' is incorrect; use 'a lot of' or 'lots of'. Suggestion: Use 'they contain a lot of protein' to match plural subject-verb agreement and correct quantifier usage.

× Umm, actually my favorite food is something healthy, for example boiled eggs because they are contain a lots of protein, umm, and very few carbs.

✓ Umm, actually my favorite food is something healthy, for example boiled eggs because they contain a lot of protein, umm, and very few carbs.

Error type 14: 'a lots of' is ungrammatical. Use 'a lot of' for uncountable nouns like 'protein' or 'lots of' without 'a'. Suggestion: 'a lot of protein' is correct.

× Yeah, I used to like chocolates, sweets and a lots of fast foods like Nuggets, French fries.

✓ Yeah, I used to like chocolate, sweets and lots of fast food like nuggets and French fries.

Error type 1: 'chocolates' can be plural for individual items but when speaking generally about the food, 'chocolate' (uncountable) is preferred. 'a lots of' is incorrect; use 'lots of'. 'Fast foods' should be 'fast food' (uncountable) when referring to the category. Also capitalize consistently: 'nuggets' and 'French fries' as common nouns. Suggestion: Use uncountable nouns for general references: 'chocolate' and 'fast food'.

× It was my favorite type of food.

✓ It was my favorite type of food.

Error type 22: No correction needed but flagged because article use is acceptable. Keep as is.

× It's a very difficult question because it depends.

✓ It's a difficult question because it depends.

Error type 26: 'a very difficult question' is grammatical, but 'a' plus 'very' is wordy; better to say 'It's a difficult question' for naturalness. Suggestion: Omit 'very' or keep for emphasis depending on speaking style.

× For example, I can eat whatever I want, so I don't think I eat different food.

✓ For example, I can eat whatever I want, so I don't think I eat different foods.

Error type 6: 'different food' should be plural 'different foods' when referring to various kinds of food. Subject-verb tense is fine; adjust noun number for meaning.

× Actually, I'm very consistent at this type because I feel more confident with it.

✓ Actually, I'm very consistent in this type because I feel more confident with it.

Error type 12: Preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'this type'. Use 'in this type' or better 'with this kind'/'with this type of food'. Suggestion: 'consistent with this type' or 'consistent in this area' improves clarity.

× Yeah, of course when I was a kid I preferred more processed food and healthy food like chocolates and junk food.

✓ Yeah, of course when I was a kid I preferred processed foods and unhealthy food like chocolate and junk food.

Error type 5: 'preferred more processed food and healthy food like chocolates' is contradictory (processed vs healthy) and 'chocolates' better as 'chocolate' for general reference. Use plural 'processed foods' for variety. Suggestion: Clarify meaning: 'preferred processed and unhealthy foods such as chocolate and junk food'.

× But time passed and I I like more raw food, for example, Whole Foods, meat and.

✓ But time passed and now I like raw foods more, for example whole foods, meat, and vegetables.

Error type 26: Sentence has repetition 'I I', wrong tense/structure and is incomplete ('and.'). Use 'now I like' to show change over time and pluralize 'raw foods'. 'Whole Foods' as a supermarket name may be confusing; use 'whole foods' (unprocessed foods). Add a final item to complete the list. Suggestion: 'But time passed and now I like raw foods more, for example whole foods, meat, and vegetables.'