Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Mejora la fluidez y la precisión: evita repeticiones, corrige titubeos y organiza la respuesta en 2–3 oraciones claras. Usa conectores breves para añadir detalles (por ejemplo, "also" o "for example") y vocabulario preciso como "ginger" y "savory". Practica la pronunciación de palabras problemáticas y elimina muletillas como "um" o repeticiones innecesarias.

예시: My favourite food is sushi because it tastes fresh and light. For example, I often dip it in soy sauce and add a little pickled ginger to balance the savory flavor and reduce any fishiness.

제안: Clarifica tiempos verbales y estructura: usa el pasado para hablar de la infancia y organiza la respuesta con una oración principal y 1–2 detalles específicos. Evita frases inconclusas y repeticiones; reemplaza muletillas con conectores como "for example" o "because" correctamente.

예시: When I was young, I loved sweets, especially chocolate cake and cheesecake. For example, I would eat cheesecake until my mother told me to stop because I couldn’t resist it.

제안: Mejora la corrección gramatical y el registro: evita muletillas y expresiones informales o inapropiadas. Usa estructuras claras para explicar preferencia estacional (por ejemplo "I prefer spicy food in summer because...") y emplea vocabulario más neutro en lugar de frases coloquiales como "sweating as a pig".

예시: Not really, but I prefer spicy food in the summer because it makes me sweat and helps me feel cooler. For instance, I often choose spicy soups or curries during hot weather.

제안: Corrige coherencia y tiempos: decide si el gusto ha cambiado y exprésalo con claridad. Evita repeticiones y asegurate de usar presente perfecto o pasado según corresponda. Mantén la respuesta en 2–3 oraciones con detalles específicos.

예시: My favourite food hasn’t changed much — I have loved lemon ice cream since I was a child. I still enjoy it today because I like its refreshing, tangy taste.

× Well, my favorite food is sushi. Even though it's Japanese food, I really enjoy it because it tastes so fresh. And yeah, you can dip it to dip it into soy sauce, or sometimes you can add some fermented ginger to cut to taste the sav, the savory, the savory, and to make it not too fishy.

✓ Well, my favorite food is sushi. Even though it's Japanese food, I really enjoy it because it tastes so fresh. And yeah, you can dip it into soy sauce, or sometimes you can add some pickled ginger to cut the savory taste and make it not too fishy.

The original contains a repeated phrase 'dip it to dip it' and awkward fragments like 'fermented ginger to cut to taste the sav, the savory, the savory'. These are problems with word form and filler repetition rather than tense. Use 'dip it into' (correct prepositional verb + object) and 'pickled ginger' is the correct common term. Remove redundant words and rephrase to 'cut the savory taste and make it not too fishy' to produce a clear present-participial phrase that modifies the result. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use established noun phrases (pickled ginger) and concise clauses.

× When I was young, I really enjoy eating dessert such as and chocolate cake or cheese pie because and for example for like cheese pie, I really enjoy eating so much.

✓ When I was young, I really enjoyed eating desserts such as chocolate cake or cheese pie; for example, I enjoyed eating cheese pie so much.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past context 'When I was young' with present tense verbs 'I really enjoy'. Use past tense 'enjoyed' to match the time reference. Also fix plural 'desserts' for general examples and remove filler words 'and', 'for like'. Suggestion: match verb tense to time adverbials and remove fillers for clarity.

× I remember binge eating it until my mom was like, oh girl, you should stop eating it. You eat.

✓ I remember binge-eating it until my mom said, 'Oh girl, you should stop eating it.'

Mixing 'was like' (colloquial) with reported speech is acceptable in conversation, but the written correction should use past reporting verb 'said' to match past narrative. Hyphenate 'binge-eating' as a compound verb and remove the fragmented 'You eat.' Suggestion: use past tense verbs consistently and avoid sentence fragments.

× Not really, but I really love umm eating spicy foods when it hot.

✓ Not really, but I really love eating spicy foods when it's hot.

Missing auxiliary verb 'is' in the clause 'when it's hot' creates an ungrammatical clause. Use contraction 'it's' or 'it is' to form correct present simple description. Suggestion: include the verb 'to be' in time/weather clauses.

× I don't know it's it sounds really weird but umm I enjoy eating spicy foods because it can just.

✓ I don't know, it sounds really weird, but I enjoy eating spicy foods because they can make you sweat a lot.

The original ends abruptly with 'because it can just.' This is an incomplete clause and uses 'it' incorrectly to refer to 'spicy foods' (plural). Use plural pronoun 'they' and complete the clause: 'they can make you sweat a lot.' Also replace casual simile 'sweating as a pig' with neutral phrasing. Suggestion: ensure pronoun agreement and complete subordinate clauses.

× You will be like sweating as a pig.

✓ You will be sweating a lot.

The simile 'sweating as a pig' is colloquial and unidiomatic; also mixing 'will be like sweating' is awkward. Use present-future continuous 'will be sweating' or simple 'you will sweat' and avoid offensive or imprecise similes. Suggestion: use clear verb forms and neutral expressions.

× I would say that I I've really changed my favorite food.

✓ I would say that I have really changed my favorite food.

The contraction 'I I've' is incorrect duplication. Use present perfect 'have changed' to indicate a change that has relevance to the present. 'Would say' is a hedging modal and can remain. Suggestion: remove duplicated pronoun and use correct present perfect construction.

× Like for example, I really enjoy eating lemon ice cream since I was since I was young and right now I'm I'm living it.

✓ For example, I have really enjoyed eating lemon ice cream since I was young, and right now I still love it.

Use present perfect 'have enjoyed' with 'since' to link past to present. Remove duplicated 'since I was' and 'I'm I'm' repetition. 'Living it' is incorrect informal phrase; replace with 'still love it.' Suggestion: match tense with 'since', eliminate duplications, and use idiomatic expressions.

× I will not change it. It's has been and always been and will be my favorite ice cream.

✓ I will not change it. It has been, is, and will be my favorite ice cream.

'It's has been' is ungrammatical (extra 's'). Use 'It has been, is, and will be' or 'It has always been and will remain my favorite ice cream' to convey continuity. Ensure correct use of present perfect 'has been' and present 'is'. Suggestion: remove extra auxiliary and choose a concise expression to show past, present, and future continuity.