Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse est claire mais manque de fluidité et de précision. Améliorez la structure en commençant par une phrase thème concise, puis ajoutez deux détails spécifiques (variantes, ingrédients ou occasions) en utilisant des mots de liaison (par exemple 'for example', 'also'). Évitez les répétitions et les hésitations et corrigez les erreurs comme 'the onion white sauce' par 'a white onion sauce'.

예시: My favourite food is couscous because it is simple to prepare and very flavorful. For example, I often eat it with spicy tomato sauce or a creamy white onion sauce, and sometimes with roasted vegetables. I also like couscous because it can be adapted for special occasions or quick weekday meals.

제안: La réponse est pertinente et bien organisée, mais contient des répétitions ('used to like' plusieurs fois) et des formulations maladroites ('food diet'). Variez le vocabulaire, utilisez une liaison logique (par exemple 'because' ou 'so') et donnez un détail concret (fréquence ou souvenir).

예시: When I was young I often craved junk food, especially pizza and hamburgers, because my parents rarely allowed them. For instance, I remember begging for pizza at birthday parties, so I associated it with treats and fun.

제안: La réponse répond à la question mais manque de précision et contient des hésitations et des répétitions ('those warm those warm'). Donnez des exemples concrets de plats pour chaque saison et utilisez des phrases plus fluides avec des liens ('for example', 'in contrast'). Evitez les fins incomplètes comme 'and easy'.

예시: Yes, I change my meals with the seasons. For example, in winter I often have hearty soups like lentil or chicken noodle, while in summer I prefer light meals such as mixed salads or grilled vegetables.

제안: La réponse est honnête mais incomplète et contient des erreurs grammaticales et une phrase inachevée ('for example salads and.'). Clarifiez ce que vous mangez maintenant en donnant deux exemples précis, expliquez brièvement la raison du changement et utilisez des liaisons ('because', 'so').

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed: I ate a lot of junk food as a child, but now I prefer healthier options because I want to stay fit. For example, I typically eat salads with grilled chicken or steamed vegetables with brown rice.

× My favorite food actually is couscous.

✓ My favorite food actually is couscous.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Keep word order: 'actually' is fine after subject.

× I like it because it is very easy to make and it is very tasty.

✓ I like it because it is very easy to make and very tasty.

Combine adjectives with a single 'it is' to avoid redundancy. Remove the repeated 'it is' for conciseness.

× You can have it with a variety of sauces, for example tomato sauces or the onion white sauce.

✓ You can have it with a variety of sauces, for example tomato sauce or white onion sauce.

Use uncountable form 'tomato sauce' for general reference and correct adjective order 'white onion sauce'. 'The' is unnecessary before a general type of sauce.

× I think it is very you have a lot of options to eat couscous with so I like it.

✓ I think you have a lot of options for what to eat with couscous, so I like it.

Original is fragmented and contains misplaced words. Reorder to 'you have a lot of options for what to eat with couscous' to make a clear, grammatical sentence.

× When I was a child, I used to like junk food very much.

✓ When I was a child, I used to like junk food very much.

Sentence is correct: 'used to' properly expresses past habitual action.

× I used to like pizza and hamburgers.

✓ I used to like pizza and hamburgers.

Correct use of 'used to' for past habits; no change needed.

× My family was really strict about the food diet, so it was forbidden for me to eat that kind of junk food.

✓ My family was really strict about my diet, so I was forbidden from eating that kind of junk food.

Use 'my diet' rather than 'the food diet'. 'Forbidden from eating' is the common collocation in English; 'forbidden for me to' is unnatural.

× So I think I was craving it because I didn't have it much as a child.

✓ So I think I craved it because I didn't have it much as a child.

Use simple past 'craved' rather than 'was craving' for a general past tendency, and keep tense consistent.

× Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year depending on the season.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year depending on the season.

Sentence is correct; present simple appropriately describes habitual action.

× For example during winter I usually eat soups or like those warm those warm type of food.

✓ For example, during winter I usually eat soups or other warm types of food.

Remove repeated phrase 'those warm those warm' and use 'other warm types of food' for clarity and grammatical number agreement.

× Unlike in summer I just like salad and easy.

✓ In summer, on the other hand, I just like salads and easy meals.

Use 'on the other hand' or 'in contrast' rather than 'unlike' at clause start; 'salad' should be plural 'salads' for general preference and 'easy meals' completes the idea.

× Actually yes, my food taste has changed.

✓ Actually, yes, my taste in food has changed.

Use the noun phrase 'taste in food' or 'food tastes' rather than 'food taste'. Present perfect 'has changed' is correct.

× I used to like more junk food when I was a child, but then when I grew up I realized that it is not the right diet we should have as an adult.

✓ I used to like junk food more when I was a child, but when I grew up I realized that it is not the right diet for an adult.

Move 'more' after the object for natural word order: 'like junk food more'. Use 'for an adult' rather than 'we should have as an adult' for clarity and correctness.

× So I just follow the strict diet, for example salads and.

✓ So I now follow a strict diet, for example salads and other healthy options.

Use present simple 'follow' with adverb 'now' to indicate current habit; add 'other healthy options' to complete the sentence and avoid trailing 'and'.