Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., “One of my favourite foods is pasta”), avoid redundancy, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is pasta because it’s quick and versatile. For example, I often add chicken or sausage and try different sauces like tomato or pesto to make a new dish. Also, it’s convenient to cook on busy days.

제안: Use correct tense and a clearer structure: open with a past-tense topic sentence, then give specific examples and reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and finish sentences fully.

예시: When I was young, I liked fried foods, especially fried chicken and French fries. I liked them because they tasted delicious and were easy to eat, and I enjoyed sharing them with friends and family.

제안: Be specific about seasonal differences and use linking words to organize ideas. Correct awkward or incomplete phrases and avoid listing without context. Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

예시: Yes, I do. In winter I prefer hearty European dishes like stews, while in summer I enjoy lighter Asian salads and sushi. Trying different cuisines throughout the year helps me appreciate new flavours.

제안: Clarify contrast between past and present with correct tenses and smoother linking. State past preference, then contrast with current tastes, giving specific examples and reasons. Avoid hesitations and unfinished phrases.

예시: Yes, it has changed. As a child I preferred fried foods and sweets, but now I enjoy spicier and more complex flavours, such as spicy curries and bitter greens, because I appreciate variety and balance in my meals.

× One of my favorite food is pasta.

✓ One of my favorite foods is pasta.

The phrase 'one of my favorite' requires the noun to be plural ('foods') because it refers to one item among many favorites. Use plural after 'one of' to match the implied set; also maintain singular verb 'is' for the singular subject 'one'. Suggestion: change 'food' to 'foods' when used with 'one of my'. Keep 'is' as the verb.

× I can add chicken or sausage to and different sauces so I can make a new dish almost every time.

✓ I can add chicken or sausage and different sauces so I can make a new dish almost every time.

The original sentence has a misplaced conjunction and an extra preposition 'to' that interrupts the list. Removing 'to' and placing 'and' correctly joins the items in the list. Also ensure parallel structure: 'add chicken or sausage and different sauces.' Suggestion: remove the stray 'to' and keep items parallel in the list.

× I like fried foods when I was young, like fried chicken, fried potato chips, anything that is fried because it's delicious and easy to eat and also.

✓ I liked fried foods when I was young, like fried chicken and fried potato chips, anything that was fried because it was delicious and easy to eat and I could share it with people.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I like' with past time reference 'when I was young.' Use past tense 'liked' and past forms 'was' and 'was' for consistency. Also improve cohesion by completing the final clause 'and I could share it with people.' Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent with the time reference (past tense for past habits) and connect ideas clearly.

× I eat Asian food, Indian food, European Food or American food.

✓ I eat Asian food, Indian food, European food, or American food.

Inconsistent capitalization ('Food') is incorrect; 'food' should be lowercase. Also add a comma before 'or' in a list for clarity (Oxford comma optional but acceptable). Ensure consistent formatting of items in the list. Suggestion: use consistent lowercase for 'food' and separate list items with commas.

× It's good to have a different food to eat, to experience the different cuisines and different tastes. Yes, I every year.

✓ It's good to have different foods to eat, to experience different cuisines and tastes. Yes, I do every year.

The phrase 'a different food' is awkward; 'different foods' fits better when speaking generally. Also 'Yes, I every year' is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' for the short answer. Use 'do' to form the affirmative short response. Suggestion: pluralize 'food' and include the auxiliary verb 'do' in the short answer.

× Yes, when I was younger I like fried food and sweets but now when I now I'm older I like the spice, the different tastes and also the the only sweetest but the bitterness it but.

✓ Yes, when I was younger I liked fried food and sweets, but now that I'm older I like spicy food and different tastes, not only sweet things but also bitter flavors.

This sentence mixes tenses and contains repetition and unclear phrasing. Use past tense 'liked' for childhood preferences and present tense 'like' for current preferences. Remove repeated words ('now' and 'the') and rephrase 'the only sweetest but the bitterness' to a clear contrast: 'not only sweet things but also bitter flavors.' Suggestion: keep past for past habits and present for current habits, eliminate repetitions, and express contrasts clearly.