Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and avoid filler sounds. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct verb forms and countable/uncountable usage (e.g., “cake” is uncountable when speaking generally).

예시: My favourite food is cake. I particularly enjoy chocolate cake because its rich flavour lifts my mood, and I often eat a small slice to relax after a stressful day.

제안: Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Give a short topic sentence in past tense, then add a specific detail about why you liked it, using a linking word like “because” or “so”. Fix article and plural mistakes (e.g., ‘ice cream’ not ‘the ice creams’).

예시: When I was young, my favourite food was ice cream because it was sweet and cold, which felt refreshing during summer, so I ate it almost every day.

제안: Be specific and accurate with vocabulary and seasons. Use linking phrases like “for example” and “in contrast” but give precise examples (correct fruit names) and explain briefly why you choose them. Avoid informal fillers.

예시: Yes, we eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer we prefer watermelon and mango because they are refreshing, whereas in winter we eat more apples and bananas since they store well and are warming.

제안: Answer directly with a clear contrast between past and present, using correct tense and linking words like “however” or “now”. Avoid repeating the same information; instead give a short reason for the change. Correct grammar (e.g., ‘changed’, ‘when I was a child’, ‘it changed as I grew older’).

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I loved ice cream, but now I prefer cake because I enjoy richer flavours and different textures as I have grown older.

× MMM that's so interesting question.

✓ MMM that's such an interesting question.

The phrase 'so interesting question' is missing the determiner 'an' and uses 'so' awkwardly before a noun. Use 'such an' before a noun phrase with an adjective: 'such an interesting question'. This fixes sentence structure and makes it natural.

× My favorite food is cake.

✓ My favorite food is cake.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no quantifier change is needed. Keep as is.

× Yeah, I really enjoy eating cakes.

✓ Yeah, I really enjoy eating cake.

When speaking about a food in general as a favorite, use the uncountable or singular form 'cake' rather than plural 'cakes'. Use singular/uncountable to indicate the category or type of food.

× Eating the high sugar cake make me feel happy and reduce stress.

✓ Eating high-sugar cake makes me feel happy and reduces stress.

Subject 'Eating high-sugar cake' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' and 'reduces'. Also use the adjective form 'high-sugar' before 'cake' and omit 'the' when speaking generally. Fixes subject-verb agreement and article/adjective use.

× Uh, when I was young, my favorite food is ice cream.

✓ Uh, when I was young, my favorite food was ice cream.

The time frame 'when I was young' is past, so the verb should be past tense 'was' not present 'is'. Use consistent past tense for past-time clauses.

× Uh, I really like eating ice cream when I was young.

✓ Uh, I really liked eating ice cream when I was young.

Mixing present 'like' with past time 'when I was young' is inconsistent. Use past tense 'liked' to match the past time reference.

× Yeah, it's, it's feel happy just eating the ice creams.

✓ Yeah, it just feels happy to eat ice cream.

Original has incorrect structure and pronoun use: 'it's feel' is ungrammatical. Use 'it feels happy' or better 'I feel happy' depending on meaning. 'Ice cream' as a general food should be uncountable; remove 'the' and plural. Preferred correction gives clear subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

This question sentence is correct as written; no change required.

× Yeah, we eat different food at different time of the year.

✓ Yeah, we eat different foods at different times of the year.

Use plural 'foods' and 'times' when speaking about multiple kinds and multiple occasions. Match plurality for natural English.

× For example, in the summer we can eat the water lemon.

✓ For example, in the summer we can eat watermelon.

'Water lemon' is not correct; the intended word is 'watermelon' (one word) and no definite article 'the' is needed when speaking generally. Use the correct noun form.

× In the winter, yeah, we eat more apples and bananas.

✓ In the winter, we eat more apples and bananas.

Add minor cleanup by removing filler 'yeah' for clarity. The sentence is otherwise correct; keep seasonal reference and plural fruits.

× My favorite change when I was a child, When I was a child, I my favorite food is ice cream.

✓ My favorite changed when I was a child. When I was a child, my favorite food was ice cream.

Use past tense 'changed' to describe a past change. The original also has word order and repetition errors; restructure into two clear sentences and use past tense 'was' for past preference.

× So now my favorite food is cake.

✓ So now my favorite food is cake.

This present-tense sentence is correct to describe the current preference; no change needed.

× So it's change follow my age.

✓ So it changed as I got older.

Original uses incorrect verb forms and word order. Use past tense 'changed' for the completed change and express the cause with 'as I got older' or 'as I grew older'. This fixes verb form and makes the causal relationship clear.