Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail (e.g., a favorite dish or why you like it) using a linking word. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: My favourite foods are noodles and other types of pasta. For example, I especially enjoy spaghetti with a tomato-based sauce because it’s comforting and easy to prepare.

제안: Reduce hesitations and repetition. Give a clear topic sentence, then explain briefly why you liked it with a specific detail and a linking word. Aim for fluency by practicing the sentence before speaking.

예시: When I was young, my favourite food was burgers and fries. I enjoyed them because my family often ate out together, and those meals felt fun and special.

제안: Give a direct answer first, then support it with a clear reason and an example. Avoid contradictory fragments. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to structure the reply.

예시: Not really, I don’t change my diet by season. Instead, I choose food based on cravings; for example, I might want ice cream in winter or a light salad in summer depending on my mood.

제안: Provide a concise direct answer, then add a specific reason for the change using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'. This shows development and gives the examiner more content without repeating previous lines.

예시: Yes, it has changed; I used to like burgers and fries, but now I prefer noodles and pasta because I appreciate lighter, more varied flavours and they’re easier to cook at home.

× When I was young, I, my favorite food was my favorite food was, uh, burgers and fries because I, I was going out with my parents, uh, most of the time, so I really enjoy.

✓ When I was young, my favorite food was burgers and fries because I used to go out with my parents most of the time, so I really enjoyed it.

The original sentence has redundancy and incorrect pronoun use ('I, my favorite food was my favorite food was') and mixed tenses. Use 'my favorite food was' once. Replace 'I was going out' with 'I used to go out' to express a habitual past action (Past tense issue, ID 5). Use past tense 'enjoyed' to match 'was' and add the object pronoun 'it' to refer to the food. Also remove filler words for clarity.

× My favorite food is noodles and any type of pasta. I really really enjoy eating this.

✓ My favorite food is noodles and any type of pasta. I really enjoy eating them.

Pronoun and number agreement: 'noodles and any type of pasta' are plural/uncountable, so refer to them as 'them' not 'this' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). Also avoid repeating 'really' twice for naturalness. Use present tense 'enjoy' which is correct for current preference.

× I'm not actually. I eat different food at different time when I crave it. Not at and at any time of the year. Yeah, when I crave something, I go to eat it.

✓ Not really. I eat different foods at different times when I crave them. Not at any particular time of the year. When I crave something, I go and eat it.

Multiple issues: 'I'm not actually' is unnatural — 'Not really' is appropriate (Sentence structure, ID 26). Use plural 'foods' and plural 'times' for general habits (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Use 'them' to agree with plural 'foods' (Pronoun use, ID 12). 'Not at and at any time' is ungrammatical; change to 'Not at any particular time of the year.' Finally, 'go to eat it' is awkward; 'go and eat it' is natural for describing the action.

× Yes, it has changed. As I said, my childhood favorite food was burgers and fries, and now it changed to noodles and any kind of pasta.

✓ Yes, it has changed. As I said, my childhood favorite food was burgers and fries, and now it has changed to noodles and other kinds of pasta.

Mixed tense: 'now it changed' is incorrect because 'now' requires present perfect or present simple. Use present perfect 'has changed' to link past and present (Past tense issue, ID 5 and Present tense issue, ID 6). Also adjust 'any kind of pasta' to 'other kinds of pasta' for naturalness and agreement with 'noodles' (Singular and plural/word choice, ID 1 and 13).