Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, chính xác và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lỗi phát âm/viết (ví dụ từ 'FAR' có vẻ không đúng tên món ăn) và rút gọn câu thừa. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn nêu tên món ăn, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để nối ý, giới hạn trong tối đa 4 câu. Ví dụ: nêu rõ món ăn, miêu tả hương vị, và một kỷ niệm ngắn liên quan.

예시: My favourite food is fried rice. I love it because it tastes savory and comforting, and I often eat it with my family at the weekend. For example, we usually cook a big pan and share stories while eating, which makes it special.

제안: Cần thống nhất thì và ngữ pháp (dùng quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ). Rút gọn, tránh lặp từ và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ loại đồ ngọt, tần suất). Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Giới hạn trong 3–4 câu.

예시: When I was young, I loved sweet snacks, especially fried ice cream and candy. They tasted delicious and made me happy, and my parents sometimes gave them to me as a treat. For example, I often shared fried ice cream with my friends after school.

제안: Trả lời rõ ràng, dùng thì hiện tại đơn phù hợp cho thói quen. Sửa lỗi chính tả/viết sai ('offer' → 'often') và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn. Thêm liên từ để nối ý và cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể cho mỗi mùa. Giữ 3–4 câu tối đa.

예시: Yes, I do. In summer I eat more fruits and cold dishes because it's hot, so I often have watermelon and cold noodles. In winter I prefer hot soups and stews; for example, I usually eat chicken soup more often to keep warm.

제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn, cần mở rộng bằng cách giải thích lý do và cung cấp ví dụ để làm phong phú nội dung. Dùng 2–3 câu: khẳng định + lí do + ví dụ ngắn. Giữ tự nhiên và tránh trả lời một từ.

예시: No, it hasn't changed. I still enjoy the same dishes because they remind me of family meals, and I often prepare them on weekends. For example, we still make the same fried rice that I loved as a child.

× I like it because it's tasty and quite comforting, and it reminds me of how, for example, I often eat with it with my family at the weekend.

✓ I like it because it's tasty and quite comforting, and it reminds me of how, for example, I often eat it with my family at the weekend.

The sentence uses the pronoun 'it' twice in a way that causes a word-order error: 'eat with it' is incorrect. The verb 'eat' takes a direct object (what is eaten), so the correct order is 'eat it' or 'eat it with someone'. Suggestion: place the object directly after the verb ('eat it') and then add the prepositional phrase for the company ('with my family').

× Well, I enjoy sweet snacks when I was young.

✓ Well, I enjoyed sweet snacks when I was young.

Tense inconsistency: 'when I was young' places the action in the past, so the verb should be past simple ('enjoyed') not present simple ('enjoy'). Suggestion: match the verb tense to the time expression.

× I like them because they taste good and they make me happy, and my parents sometimes gave me as a treat.

✓ I liked them because they tasted good and they made me happy, and my parents sometimes gave them to me as a treat.

Multiple issues: pronoun and tense. 'When I was young' requires past tense verbs ('liked', 'tasted', 'made'). Also 'gave me as a treat' is missing the object: the parents gave 'them' (the snacks) to me, so use 'gave them to me'. Suggestion: use past tense and include the direct object and preposition 'to' for clarity.

× For example, I often ate fried ice cream after school with my friends.

✓ For example, I often ate fried ice cream after school with my friends.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The past simple 'ate' correctly matches the past time frame 'when I was young', and word order and objects are correct. No change needed.

× Yes I do. In summer I eat more fruits and cold foods because it's hot so I often have watermelon and cold noodles.

✓ Yes, I do. In summer I eat more fruit and cold foods because it's hot, so I often have watermelon and cold noodles.

'Fruits' is often used as an uncountable noun 'fruit' when speaking generally. Also punctuation: add commas after 'Yes' and before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'fruit' for general statements and add commas to separate clauses.

× In winter I prefer hot soups and stews. For example, I eat chicken soup offer more often.

✓ In winter I prefer hot soups and stews. For example, I eat chicken soup more often.

Typographical or word choice error: 'offer' is incorrect; the intended word is 'more'. Also 'eat chicken soup more often' correctly places 'more often' after the verb phrase. Suggestion: remove 'offer' and ensure adverb placement after the verb phrase.

× No, I haven't.

✓ No, my favourite hasn't changed.

The original short answer 'No, I haven't.' is grammatically acceptable as a response to 'Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?' but it is a clipped answer. For clarity and completeness, a fuller response 'No, my favourite hasn't changed.' is preferable. Suggestion: give a full sentence when possible for exam responses.