Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、句子更完整，并避免重复与与考官无关的表达（如“I love you very much”）。首先给出明确的主题句，然后用1–2个简短的支持细节说明原因并使用连接词，例如 because / so / and。注意发音与语法（例如“actually it’s a hamburger”或“hamburgers contain”）。

예시: My favourite food is hamburgers because they combine protein from the meat and some vegetables in the bun. For example, I often add lettuce and tomato, which makes them both tasty and convenient for a quick meal.

제안: 回答应更清晰并纠正语法错误。先简短回答（I liked sweets），然后用一两句具体细节说明行为或原因，用连接词如 because / so / but。避免不自然或不相关的动词搭配（例如“brought some sugars”应为“brought sweets”或“ate sweets”）。

예시: When I was young I liked sweets because they tasted very good. I often hid candies in my bag even though my mother told me not to eat too much sugar.

제안: 总体良好，有清晰的主题句和例子。但应更自然地使用复数/单数和准确短语（例如“in summer”而不是 “on summer”），避免重复词汇（“delicious, delicious”）。可用连接词进一步衔接对比（for example / however / while）。

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer watermelon because it is refreshing, while in winter I enjoy hot pot because it is warm and perfect for sharing with friends.

제안: 回答混乱且包含不相关或不礼貌的短语（如“I love you very much”）。应直接回答是否改变（Yes/No），然后用一两句具体说明变化或保持不变的原因，注意语法和词汇选择（例如“still like sweets”或“buy cakes after school”）。保持句子简短明确。

예시: My favourite food has not changed much — I still like sweet foods. For instance, I often buy cakes after school, although now I try to eat them less often for health reasons.

× Uh, actually is hamburger.

✓ Uh, actually my favourite is hamburger.

句子缺少主语和完整结构。面试问题在询问喜欢的食物，回答应包括主语和系动词结构，如“my favourite is...”。建议在回答中加上主语或完整的名词短语以使句子完整。

× I love you very much because I, I thought hamburgers will contain all the nutritions I need for some of the vegetables, the protein and umm uh, energies I need every day.

✓ I love hamburgers very much because I think hamburgers contain all the nutrients I need, such as vegetables, protein and energy every day.

原句中有代词使用错误（'I love you' 不合语境）且时态与词形不当。应使用正确代词指代食物（hamburgers）并用现在时表示普遍事实，同时将'nutritions'改为不可数名词'nutrients'，'energies'改为'energy'。建议多注意代词指代对象和名词的可数/不可数形式。

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? Student: Uh, I like the sugar because it tastes very good.

✓ Uh, I liked sweets because they tasted very good.

问句使用过去时，回答也应使用过去时。原句使用现在时（I like, tastes），要改为过去时（liked, tasted）。另外'sugar'在此语境下更自然用复数或集合名词'sweets'来指零食。建议根据提问时态一致使用时态。

× When I was young, uh, I always brought some sugars that helps when I was a kid, but my mother's always went me to eating too much sugar.

✓ When I was young, I always bought some sweets that helped me when I was a kid, but my mother always told me not to eat too much sugar.

原句中'bro ught'应为'bought'，'some sugars' 不自然，改为'some sweets'，动词一致和代词位置错误（'helps' 与主语不匹配，应为'helped me'），'my mother's always went me to eating' 完全不合语法，正确表达为'my mother always told me not to eat too much sugar'。建议注意动词形式、时态一致和常用表达方式。

× Uh, so I will boil it secretly.

✓ So I would eat them secretly.

原句使用'boil'（煮）与上下文不符且时态不合。应表达“我会悄悄吃它们”，使用过去习惯或虚拟语气用'would'更合适（或用'used to'）。建议根据语境选择正确动词并注意时态。

× For example, on summer, I prefer to eat watermelon because it's very delicious.

✓ For example, in summer, I prefer to eat watermelon because it's very delicious.

季节前应使用介词'in'而不是'on'。建议记住季节、月份前常用'in'，具体的星期用'on'。

× But on winter, I prefer to eat hot pot.

✓ But in winter, I prefer to eat hot pot.

同样季节前应使用'in'。此外'hot pot'前不需要冠词。建议注意季节前的介词用法并避免多余冠词。

× Uh, in China, hot pot is very famous because it has, uh, delicious, delicious plate provided to us.

✓ In China, hot pot is very popular because it offers many delicious dishes for us.

原句结构混乱，'famous'与后半句搭配生硬，'delicious plate provided to us' 不自然。改为'popular'和' offers many delicious dishes' 更贴切且语法正确。建议使用常见搭配并保持句子简洁。

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? Student: Uh, umm, I think other things there is a change because I love sweet foods very much and even now I use the rich order some dusters and sometimes I would like to buy some cakes after school.

✓ I think there have been some changes because I loved sweet foods very much as a child and even now I sometimes buy cakes after school.

问句使用现在完成时(since you were a child)，回答要用现在完成或现在完成进行表示从过去到现在的变化。原句'there is a change'时态和结构错误，应为'there have been some changes'，并把'love'在过去的习惯改为'loved'或说明持续性，用词如'dusters' 不明，应改为'pastries'或省略。建议使用合适的完成时态并使用准确词汇。

× I love you very much. I'm the true love of.

✓ I still really love sweets.

原句'I love you very much. I'm the true love of.' 与语境不符且代词使用错误，可能是想表达“我依然很喜欢甜食”。修正为'I still really love sweets.' 更符合语境并语法正确。建议注意代词指代对象并使句子完整。