Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct vocabulary, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetitions, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Also correct the food name ("spaghetti"). Aim for 2–3 sentences, natural phrasing, and varied vocabulary.

예시: My favourite food is spaghetti because I love Italian cuisine. For example, I enjoy the combination of tomato sauce and herbs, and I often eat it several times a week because it is simple and comforting.

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence and avoid hesitations. If you cannot remember much, state that briefly then give a clear example and a short reason. Use linking words to connect ideas and eliminate repeated words.

예시: I don't remember much of my childhood, but I do recall liking butter chicken. I liked it because the sauce was rich and mildly spiced, and my family often cooked it for special occasions.

제안: Answer directly, use a clear structure and specific examples of seasonal foods. Avoid vague statements and repetitions. Use linking words such as "for example" or "in summer" to make the answer coherent and include 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer salads and fruits like watermelon, while in winter I eat more soups and stews because they are warming.

제안: Give a direct answer and explain with one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words such as "because" or "since" to show cause and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood because I have tried many cuisines. For instance, I used to prefer rich, creamy dishes, but now I enjoy lighter and spicier foods like Thai salads.

× Uh, my favorite food is probably spa tea is what it is my favorite one because I really like uh, Italian cuisine and it, it's just really, really good.

✓ Uh, my favorite food is probably spaghetti; I really like Italian cuisine and it's just really, really good.

The sentence contains unclear wording and repetition. 'spa tea' is a mispronunciation/spacing error for 'spaghetti'. Also 'is what it is my favorite one' is redundant and awkward. Simplify to 'my favorite food is probably spaghetti' and remove repeated filler words. Use punctuation to separate ideas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I mean, like I eat it almost everyday and so.

✓ I mean, I eat it almost every day.

Use the adverb 'every day' as two words when referring to frequency. Remove unnecessary fillers ('like', 'and so'). Keep present simple tense for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I mean, it's really hard to say because I don't really remember my childhood, but if, if I can I, if I can remember, I think the best, like the favorite food I I like when I was a child is uh, butter chicken.

✓ It's hard to say because I don't really remember my childhood, but if I can remember, I think my favorite food as a child was butter chicken.

Multiple tense and word-order issues. Use past tense 'was' for a childhood preference. Remove repeated fillers and duplicate words ('if, if I can I, if I can remember', 'I I'). Use 'as a child' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yeah, of course, because like the food has its seasons.

✓ Yes, of course, because food has its seasons.

Definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'food' when speaking generally. 'Like' is filler and can be removed for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:22

× So I cannot eat like the food that doesn't have in summer for for example like we we don't have.

✓ So I cannot eat the foods that are not available in summer; for example, we don't have them then.

Incorrect structure and missing verb. Use 'available in summer' instead of 'doesn't have in summer'. Correct plural 'foods' and add auxiliary 'are' to form passive/adjectival phrase. Remove repeated words and add a clearer clause 'we don't have them then.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yeah, because I I try a lot of foods and my taste becomes different.

✓ Yes, because I tried a lot of foods and my tastes became different.

Referring to past experiences, use past tense 'tried' and 'became'. Also 'taste' in this sense is better as plural 'tastes' or 'my taste preferences' to indicate variety. Remove duplicated 'I'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× So I think that that my favorite food, it has my my taste has changed a lot and and probably.

✓ So I think my favorite food has changed a lot because my tastes have changed.

The original sentence has redundancy and broken structure ('that that my favorite food, it has my my taste has changed'). Simplify to a clear main clause and reason: 'my favorite food has changed a lot because my tastes have changed.' Remove filler 'and probably' or complete the thought. Grammar problem type ID:26