Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify the dish name and correct factual or phrasing errors; make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid contradictions like "very common" but "can't eat every day."

예시: My favourite food is Khao Soi, a northern Thai noodle dish. It has egg noodles in a rich coconut curry broth with tender pork and pickled vegetables, so I enjoy its spicy, creamy flavour. Because it's fairly rich, I usually eat it on special occasions or when I want something comforting.

제안: Use past tense consistently and give a clear topic sentence. Reduce filler words and add a specific reason or memory to enrich the answer. Use a linking word to connect the description and the reason.

예시: When I was young, I liked Hainanese chicken rice. It is steamed chicken with fragrant rice, and sometimes the chicken was fried. I loved it because the rice tasted delicious and my family always ate it together on Sundays.

제안: Make the answer coherent: state clearly whether you change your diet by season, then give a specific example. Remove hesitations, correct unclear phrases, and use linking words (for example, in summer…).

예시: Yes, I change my diet with the seasons. For example, in summer I prefer light, cooling foods such as papaya salad or cold noodle salads because they are refreshing and help me stay cool.

제안: Answer the question directly (yes/no), then explain why with a clear example. Correct the dish name and describe feelings specifically, avoiding vague phrases. Use linking words like however or because.

예시: Not really — I still enjoy most of the foods I liked as a child, but there are some exceptions. For instance, I still dislike pad pak (stir-fried green vegetables) with egg because the slimy texture and mild flavour are unpleasant to me, so I usually avoid it.

× My favorite food is Cortana.

✓ My favorite food is Cortana.

No change needed for this sentence. 'Cortana' as a dish name does not require an article. Keep as is.

× It's a Thai food, contains noodles with pork and vegetables, and it's very common in Thailand where we can't eat every day.

✓ It's a Thai dish that contains noodles with pork and vegetables, and it's very common in Thailand, although we can't eat it every day.

Problems: 'a Thai food' is incorrect; use 'a Thai dish' or just 'Thai food' (Article error / word choice). The relative clause needs 'that contains' or 'which contains' and the verb 'eat' requires an object 'it'. Add a comma before 'although' and use 'although we can't eat it every day' to show contrast. Suggestion: use 'a Thai dish' and include the object 'it' after 'eat' for clarity.

× When I was young, I like Harman Kai.

✓ When I was young, I liked Harman Kai.

Tense error: The time phrase 'When I was young' refers to the past, so the verb should be in the past tense 'liked' (Past tense issue). Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time expression.

× It's a Thai dish, uh, which contains umm, rice with chicken, uh, the chicken can be fried or boiled.

✓ It's a Thai dish which contains rice with chicken; the chicken can be fried or boiled.

Redundancy and punctuation: Remove filler words and connect clauses correctly. 'A Thai dish which contains rice with chicken' is fine; separate independent clause 'the chicken can be fried or boiled' with a semicolon or period. Suggestion: Remove fillers and use proper punctuation.

× I have to say I do change what I eat with the summers.

✓ I have to say I do change what I eat in the summer.

Preposition and noun number: 'with the summers' is incorrect. Use 'in the summer' or 'in summer' to indicate the season (Incorrect use of prepositions / Present tense issue). Suggestion: Use 'in the summer' and keep present simple 'I do change' if emphasizing habit.

× For example, during the summer I like to eat, umm, A flavorful the chess like some time or some uncle because it's flavorful.

✓ For example, during the summer I like to eat a flavorful dish like som tam or som tum because it's tasty.

Many problems: filler words, incorrect words 'the chess,' 'some time or some uncle' likely aiming at 'som tam' (Thai papaya salad). Use 'a flavorful dish' (article and noun), correct dish name 'som tam' or 'som tum', and 'tasty' instead of 'flavorful' repetition. This is sentence structure and vocabulary correction. Suggestion: Remove fillers, choose correct dish name, and use clear descriptors.

× I personally like to eat like everything except for your one ditch.

✓ I personally like to eat almost everything except for one dish.

Problems: 'like to eat like everything' has repetition and 'your one ditch' is garbled. Replace with 'almost everything' and 'one dish' (word choice and sentence structure). Suggestion: Remove redundant 'like' and use 'almost'.

× It's called for padkai and Thai.

✓ It's called phat kai in Thai.

Incorrect phrasing and article use: Dish name and language phrase should be 'phat kai in Thai' rather than 'for padkai and Thai.' Also correct romanization 'phat kai'. Suggestion: Use 'called phat kai in Thai'.

× It's a green vegetables which are like slimy with eggs and I don't like the taste and the texture.

✓ It's a green vegetable that is a bit slimy with eggs, and I don't like the taste or the texture.

Agreement and relative clause: 'a green vegetables' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a green vegetable' or 'green vegetables'. Use 'that is' when singular. Use 'a bit slimy' for hedging and 'taste or the texture' should use 'or' to show either reason. Suggestion: Ensure noun and article agree and choose 'or' when listing alternative reasons.