Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 표현을 자연스럽게 고치고 더 구체적인 정보를 추가하세요. 예를 들어 음식 이름(예: 비빔밥)을 정확히 말하고, 맛과 재료, 어떻게 먹는지 등을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이면 좋습니다. 또한 ‘taste good’ 대신 ‘tastes great’ 등 자연스러운 표현으로 고치세요.

예시: My favourite food is bibimbap, a traditional Korean dish. It combines rice with seasoned vegetables, sliced meat, and a spicy gochujang sauce, so it tastes great and is quite healthy.

제안: 문법(과거 표현)과 어휘 선택을 고치고 이유를 구체적으로 덧붙이세요. ‘I used to like’로 시작하고, 어떤 디저트를 구체적으로 말한 뒤 왜 지금은 건강한 음식을 선호하는지 간단히 설명하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

예시: When I was young, I used to like sweet desserts such as chocolate and cakes. However, now I prefer healthier options because I pay more attention to nutrition and my overall well-being.

제안: 계절 음식과 축제 관련 표현을 정확히 하고 음식 이름과 이유를 명확히 하세요. ‘Samgyetang’과 ‘Tteokguk’(떡국) 같은 정확한 이름을 사용하고, 이유를 연결어로 자연스럽게 설명하세요. 문장 구조를 단순화하면 더 명확합니다.

예시: Yes. In Korea we have seasonal dishes like samgyetang in summer and tteokguk at New Year. I especially like tteokguk at New Year because it is traditional, comforting, and believed to bring good luck.

제안: 시제와 어휘를 정확히 사용하고 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하세요. ‘I used to love’로 시작해 경험이 취향에 어떤 영향을 미쳤는지 상세히 말하면 좋습니다. 또한 ‘it's changing’ 대신 ‘it has changed’로 마무리하세요.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. I used to love fried chicken when I was a child, but after working in a chicken restaurant for a while, I lost my appetite for it, so now I prefer healthier dishes.

× My favorite food is cooked up that the traditional food of Korea.

✓ My favorite food is the traditional cooked food of Korea.

The sentence uses awkward word order and incorrect adjective placement. 'Cooked up' is a phrasal verb meaning 'invented' and is not appropriate. Use 'cooked' as an adjective after 'traditional' or 'traditional cooked food'. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'traditional' to specify the category. Suggestion: Place adjectives before nouns in a natural order and avoid phrasal verbs that change meaning.

× It contains some meat and vegetables, so it is not only taste good but also very healthy.

✓ It contains meat and vegetables, so it is not only tasty but also very healthy.

The phrase 'some meat and vegetables' is acceptable but 'some' is unnecessary here. 'Taste good' is incorrect because an adjective (tasty) should follow 'is', not a verb phrase. Use 'tasty' to describe the food. Also keep parallel structure with 'not only tasty but also very healthy.' Suggestion: Use adjectives to describe nouns and maintain parallel structure after 'not only... but also'.

× I was like some sweetie dessert like chocolate or cakes in my childhood, but now I prefer some food for healthy.

✓ I liked sweet desserts like chocolate or cakes in my childhood, but now I prefer healthy food.

'I was like' is incorrect for expressing preference; use past tense 'I liked.' 'Sweetie' is the wrong form; use 'sweet' as an adjective and 'desserts' plural. 'In my childhood' is acceptable but 'when I was a child' or 'in my childhood' both work; keep 'in my childhood.' 'Prefer some food for healthy' is incorrect; say 'prefer healthy food.' Suggestion: Use correct verbs for preferences ('like/liked/prefer') and pair adjectives with nouns ('sweet desserts', 'healthy food').

× Yes, in Korea there are many of seasoned food like Samgyetang or Takku.

✓ Yes, in Korea there are many seasoned dishes like samgyetang or tteokguk.

'Many of seasoned food' is ungrammatical. Use 'many seasoned dishes' or 'many types of seasoned food'. 'Dishes' fits better than 'food' for countable examples. Also correct romanizations: 'Samgyetang' is fine but 'Takku' seems intended as 'tteokguk' (rice cake soup). Suggestion: Use 'many' with countable plural nouns and 'like' to introduce examples.

× I especially I like Takuku when we eat the New Year's come because it is very healthy and taste good.

✓ I especially like tteokguk when we celebrate the New Year because it is very healthy and tastes good.

There is a duplicated subject 'I especially I' — remove the extra 'I'. 'Takuku' likely meant 'tteokguk'. 'When we eat the New Year's come' is ungrammatical; use 'when we celebrate the New Year.' 'Taste good' should be 'tastes good' to agree with singular 'it'. Suggestion: Avoid duplicate subjects, use correct verbs for events ('celebrate'), and ensure subject-verb agreement ('it tastes').

× Yes, the favorite food when I was young was chicken, but after I worked the chicken restaurant, I don't like that so much.

✓ Yes, my favorite food when I was young was chicken, but after I worked at a chicken restaurant, I didn't like it so much.

Missing possessive 'my' before 'favorite food'. Use 'worked at a chicken restaurant' (preposition 'at') rather than 'worked the chicken restaurant'. Tense mismatch: speaking about past change, use past tense 'didn't like' rather than present 'don't like'. Replace vague 'that' with 'it' referring to chicken. Suggestion: Use possessive adjectives for personal preferences, correct prepositions with 'work', and keep past tense consistent when referring to past experiences.

× So yeah, it's changing.

✓ So yeah, it changed.

The speaker refers to a change that occurred from past to present; in context they describe how their preferences changed in the past, so use past tense 'changed'. 'It is changing' implies an ongoing change which conflicts with previous past context. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the timeframe being discussed; use simple past for completed changes.