Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is mostly unintelligible and off-topic. Give a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then 1–2 short supporting details (why you like it and when you eat it). Keep sentences simple and natural, avoid irrelevant words. Use one or two linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: My favourite food is spaghetti because I love the tomato sauce and herbs. I often eat it on weekends when my family cooks together, so it feels like a special meal.

제안: Your answer mentions your mother cooking but lacks a clear statement about the foods you liked as a child and specific reasons or examples. Start with a clear topic sentence (what you liked). Then give one specific example and a reason, using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: When I was young I liked simple homemade foods, especially my mother's dumplings. For example, she always made them for my birthday because they were my favourite and reminded me of home.

제안: Your response is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Give a direct answer (yes or no), then briefly explain with one specific example of seasonal food or lack of change. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'however' and keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

예시: Not really, I usually eat the same kinds of food all year. However, last year I ate more seafood in the summer when it was fresh, for example grilled fish at the seaside.

제안: You attempted to say your tastes changed but the answer is confusing and contains many errors. State clearly whether your favourite food has changed, then give one or two specific contrasting examples (childhood vs now) and a reason, using linking words like 'when' and 'but'. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I preferred sweet snacks because they were easy to eat, but now I prefer savoury dishes like roasted garlic chicken because they taste more satisfying.

× To be honest, I impressed as manure, spaghetti and aborted many junk food if not used for but I want to use from studying to my lilac.

✓ To be honest, I used to eat spaghetti and many junk foods, but I no longer do; I want to focus on studying.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect word choices (impressed as manure, aborted), misplaced clauses, and unclear meaning. This falls under sentence structure errors (26). Correct by simplifying into clear clauses: 'I used to eat spaghetti and many junk foods' (correct plural 'junk foods') and contrast with 'but I no longer do; I want to focus on studying.' Use 'used to' for past habit and ensure logical connectors ('but'). ---

× When I was a young I would like to read my my mother cooking.

✓ When I was young, I liked to watch my mother cooking.

The sentence has redundant words and incorrect tense/modal usage; it's a sentence structure error (26). Use 'When I was young' (no article 'a') and past habit 'liked to watch' rather than 'would like to read'. Also remove duplicate 'my'. ---

× She is a chef.

✓ She was a chef.

Context refers to the past (when the student was young), so the pronoun 'She' is fine but the verb tense should match past time. This is an incorrect use of tense/pronoun context (12). Change present 'is' to past 'was' to maintain tense consistency with the rest of the sentence. ---

× I want to tell Liz everyday in especially for my birthday.

✓ I wanted to tell her every day, especially on my birthday.

This is a sentence structure error (26) with wrong tense and preposition. Use past tense 'wanted' to match context, replace 'Liz' with 'her' if referring to mother (or keep name if correct), use 'every day' as two words, and 'especially on my birthday' with correct preposition 'on'. ---

× Nowaday I feel not different time of the year because, uh, for example, the lesson year ago I used seafood some time and I used nor more menu.

✓ Nowadays I do not notice much difference at different times of the year; for example, a few years ago I ate seafood sometimes, but now I don't.

This sentence has incorrect adverb forms and awkward phrasing (20). 'Nowaday' should be 'Nowadays'; negative construction should be 'I do not notice'; 'different times of the year' is the correct phrase. 'The lesson year ago' is unintelligible; interpret as 'a few years ago'. Use 'ate seafood sometimes' for past habit and 'but now I don't' for contrast. Also correct pluralization 'seafood' context and phrasing. ---

× Fair yes my favorite food has shown since every Achilles.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed over time.

This is a sentence structure and vocabulary error (26). 'Fair yes' is incorrect filler; 'has shown since every Achilles' is unintelligible. Use 'has changed over time' to convey meaning. Keep present perfect 'has changed' to indicate change from past to present. ---

× I love sweet and fresh snacks when I was young because they treat farm and were easy to eat but not I prefer hitting this ripe garlic chicken and slurs because they make me feel better.

✓ I loved sweet, fresh snacks when I was young because they were easy to eat, but now I prefer spicy roasted garlic chicken and soups because they make me feel better.

Multiple errors: tense consistency, incorrect words ('treat farm', 'hitting', 'slurs'), and adjective order. This falls under incorrect use of quantifiers/adjectives and sentence structure (14 and 26). Use past tense 'loved' for childhood, 'were easy to eat'. Replace unclear words with plausible options 'spicy roasted garlic chicken and soups'. Ensure adjective order 'sweet, fresh snacks'. Use 'now' to indicate present preference. ---