Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 注意减少口头禅（如"umm","uh"）和重复（如"want to want to"），并在回答开头有明确主题句。回答可保持在3–4句内，使用衔接词使句子流畅，例如 because, for example, and. 另外结尾尽量完整表达意图，避免中断句子。

예시: My favourite food is hot pot because I can cook a variety of ingredients like meat, vegetables and noodles in one meal. It is also a social dish, so I often enjoy it with family and friends, which makes the experience more fun and memorable.

제안: 修正语法时态和主谓一致（例如 use 'liked' not 'like' for past），减少填充词，句子更简洁并给出具体细节如喜欢的面条种类或做法。用连词（for example, because）连接原因和例子。

예시: When I was young I liked noodles because they were soft and easy to eat, which was gentle on my stomach. For example, my mother often made a simple chicken noodle soup for me after school.

제안: 纠正词汇错误（如"zones"应为"zongzi"），避免含糊表达并提供清晰具体的信息。用一句主题句回答，再用一两句举例说明节日与食物的关系，注意发音和流利度。

예시: Yes, we do. Chinese people have special foods for different festivals. For example, during the Dragon Boat Festival we eat zongzi, which are sticky rice parcels wrapped in bamboo leaves, to commemorate the poet Qu Yuan.

제안: 注意词汇准确（'taster'应为'taste'），使用正确时态和结构（例如 'I have travelled and eaten out'），减少重复和语音停顿。回答可明确比较过去与现在并举例说明具体食物变化。

예시: Yes, my taste has changed. After travelling and eating out a lot, I now prefer spicier dishes like Sichuan hotpot, whereas before I used to enjoy sweet snacks such as cookies and candy.

× So I choose hot pot because I can uh, through everything in the pot, uh, such as meat, vegetables or some noodles.

✓ So I choose hot pot because I can put everything in the pot, such as meat, vegetables, or noodles.

句中“through everything”用词不当，應使用动词“put”表示把食物放进锅里；原句也有多余的填充词“uh”。建议用简单明确的动词短语“put everything in the pot”。

× And also I think hot pot is a social meal. I enjoy the hot pot with my family and friends, so that one night we.

✓ Also, I think hot pot is a social meal. I enjoy having hot pot with my family and friends, so we often eat it together in the evenings.

原句“so that one night we.”不完整，缺少谓语和完整的句子结构；“enjoy the hot pot”搭配常用“enjoy having hot pot”或直接“enjoy hot pot”。建议补全句子，说明经常一起吃的时间（e.g. in the evenings）。

× Well, uh, when I was young, I really like noodles and because it's, uh, because it's a soft and easy to eat, so it's gentle for my stomach.

✓ Well, when I was young, I really liked noodles because they were soft and easy to eat, so they were gentle on my stomach.

描述过去习惯应使用过去时态，原句使用现在时“like/it's”与时间状语“when I was young”不一致。并且“a soft and easy to eat”结构错误，需用复数代词“they”并用形容词短语“soft and easy to eat”。建议把动词和代词改为过去时和复数形式。

× And my mom always, uh, makes the delicious noodles, uh, after my school.

✓ And my mom always made delicious noodles after school for me.

短语“after my school”不地道，通常说“after school”或“after I got home from school”；同时描述过去习惯应用过去时“made”。建议用“after school”为常用搭配，或更完整地说“after I got home from school”。

× Umm for example, we always eat zones in the Dragon Boat festival to commemorate the points Juan and uh, Jones is a sticky rice in the bamboo leaves.

✓ For example, we always eat zongzi at the Dragon Boat Festival to commemorate Qu Yuan; zongzi are sticky rice wrapped in bamboo leaves.

原句单词错误“zones/points Juan/ Jones”应为“zongzi/Qu Yuan”；此外“is a sticky rice in the bamboo leaves”语法和冠词使用不当，需用复数“zongzi are”并用短语“wrapped in bamboo leaves”。建议改正专有名词并用被动或完成短语说明制作方式。

× Umm, it's not only a symbol of the uh.

✓ It's not only a symbol of the festival, but also has other cultural meanings.

原句不完整，缺少后半部分说明“not only ... but also ...”结构。建议补全后半句，阐明其他意义或情感。

× Yes, of course, uh, my taster has changed, umm, because I've, uh, I've traveling and uh, eat out, uh, for a long time.

✓ Yes, of course, my taste has changed because I've been traveling and eating out for a long time.

“taster”用词错误，应为“taste”。“I've traveling and eat out”语法不正确，應使用现在完成进行时或现在完成时的完成式“I've been traveling and eating out”。建议使用“been traveling and eating out”或“traveled and eaten out”以符合现在完成时结构。

× So, uh, nowadays I prefer the spicier food rather than the uh, sweet snacks I like before.

✓ So nowadays I prefer spicier food to the sweet snacks I liked before.

比较结构用法不当，英语中通常用“prefer A to B”而不是“prefer A rather than B”在这种对比中；此外“sweet snacks I like before”涉及过去习惯应使用过去时“liked before”。建议使用“prefer ... to ...”并将后项改为过去时。