Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 注意句子更自然的表达和连贯性，避免口语填充词和数字序号的非正式写法。可以用一到两句主题句，然后用连接词列出理由并补充具体细节或例子。控制在最多五句。

예시: My favourite food is hot pot because I enjoy spicy flavours and the variety it offers. In addition, hot pot allows me to cook vegetables and meat together, which makes it a balanced meal. I also like sharing it with friends, as it creates a lively and social dining atmosphere.

제안: 注意动词时态和表达自然性，减少重复。可用一两句主题句并用连接词补充具体例子或频率词，句子控制在五句以内。

예시: When I was young, I loved sweets such as puddings, candies and cakes. Whenever my parents took me out, I would always ask them to buy a treat, so desserts were a regular part of my childhood outings.

제안: 注意语法小错误和连接词使用，使表达更流畅。可以用对比连接词（for example, whereas, while）并给出更具体的例子或频率。保持回答简洁且逻辑清晰。

예시: Yes, I do. In summer I usually eat lighter dishes such as salads and sandwiches because it feels too hot for heavy meals, whereas in winter I often prefer spicy hot pot because it helps me stay warm.

제안: 注意时态和习惯表达的正确使用，避免双重否定或不自然短语。用一到两句清晰对比过去与现在，并说明原因或频率。

예시: Yes, my preferences have changed. As a child I preferred sweet desserts, but now I much prefer hot pot because I enjoy spicy flavours and social meals; I still eat desserts occasionally, but not as often as before.

× Well, it's a difficult question for me.

✓ Well, it's a difficult question for me.

句子本身时态正确，无需改动。只是作为礼貌用语可以保持原句。

× I love all kinds of food, but if I have to choose one, I pick hot pot for two reasons.

✓ I love all kinds of food, but if I have to choose one, I would pick hot pot for two reasons.

句子涉及虚拟或假设语气，主句使用一般现在时的“if I have to choose”后，表示在不确定或假设情况下的选择，常用“would”表示更自然的礼貌或假设语气。建议在类似情景下用情态动词“would”使语气更符合英语习惯。

× First is I love spicy food and 2nd I can eat vegetables and meat in one meal and it's a good choice with friends.

✓ First, I love spicy food; second, I can eat vegetables and meat in one meal, and it's a good choice with friends.

原句连接词和序数表达不标准；需要用逗号或分号分隔列举项，并将“2nd”改为“second”。同时在列举项之间保持并列连词的正确位置。建议使用逗号/分号和拼写完整的序数词以增强正式性。

× When I was a kid I loved dessert so much, like puddings, candies and cakes.

✓ When I was a kid, I loved desserts so much, like puddings, candies, and cakes.

“dessert”在此处指一类多样食品，应使用复数“desserts”。此外在列举项之间加逗号，句首从属时间状语后加逗号更符合书面语。建议注意可数名词在表示类别时用复数。

× Whenever my parents took me out, I always want them to buy me some desserts.

✓ Whenever my parents took me out, I always wanted them to buy me some desserts.

句中时间状语为过去（Whenever my parents took me out），主句应使用过去时与之保持一致，所以“want”应改为过去式“wanted”。建议在叙述过去经历时保持时态一致。

× Yes I do, in summer I will choose some lighter food like salad and sandwiches because it's too hot for have heavy meal.

✓ Yes, I do. In summer I choose lighter foods like salads and sandwiches because it's too hot to have a heavy meal.

句中时态和表达需调整：关于季节性习惯用一般现在时“choose”；“food”在这里指多种食物应用复数“foods”或在后文具体名词用复数“salads”；短语“too hot for have”结构错误，应为“too hot to have”；并且“a heavy meal”前加不定冠词。建议注意习惯性动作用一般现在时，修正不定式和冠词用法。

× In winter I will absolutely choose spicy hot pot because it can keep me warm.

✓ In winter I always choose spicy hot pot because it keeps me warm.

谈论季节性常态时用一般现在时：将“will absolutely choose”改为“一般现在时+always choose”；“it can keep me warm”更自然的陈述结果用一般现在时“it keeps me warm”。建议用一般现在时描述常态或习惯。

× Yes, sweet dessert was my favorite when I was a child but now I prefer hot pot much more.

✓ Yes, sweet desserts were my favorite when I was a child, but now I prefer hot pot much more.

表示过去的一类食物应使用复数“desserts”或改为“sweet dessert”前加限定；同时逗号用以分隔复合句。建议可数名词表示类别时用复数。

× But I will still eat desserts but not used to be more often.

✓ But I still eat desserts, though not as often as I used to.

原句混合将来时和错误结构“not used to be more often”。应使用现在情况对比过去频率："still eat"（现在情况）+"not as often as I used to"（与过去频率比较）。建议学习比较频率的常用表达“not as often as I used to”。