Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접 대답한 후 문장을 간결하게 정리하세요. 음식 이름이 정확하지 않거나 발음이 부정확한 것 같으니 정확한 음식명을 확인하고 설명하세요. 중복 표현(예: I can customize diverse ingredients and I can add as much as I wanted)을 줄이고 연결어를 사용해 이유를 더 자연스럽게 이어주세요. 예를 들어 음식의 기원, 주요 재료, 맛의 특징을 한두 문장으로 정리하면 좋습니다.

예시: My favourite dish is a Chinese spicy hot pot called 'malatang'. It has a strong, numbing spiciness and you can choose various ingredients like meat, vegetables and noodles. Because you can customize it, I enjoy trying different combinations every time.

제안: 문법과 문장 구조를 바로잡고 불필요한 반복을 피하세요. 과거와 현재를 구분해 말하고, 특정 음식에 대해 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이세요. 질문에 맞춰 'when I was young'을 중심으로 한 과거 시제를 사용하고, 주장 뒤에 이유나 설명(예: 맛, 추억)을 연결어로 이어 주세요.

예시: When I was young, I loved spicy food because my family often cooked strong-flavored dishes. For example, I enjoyed jjamppong, a Korean-Chinese noodle soup, for its rich, spicy broth, and I also liked tacos because of their crunchy texture and bold seasonings.

제안: 문장을 더 명확하게 조직하고 연결어를 사용해 계절별 차이를 분명히 하세요. 음식 이름의 발음과 표기를 정확히 하고, 문장을 끝까지 완성해 이유를 제시하세요(예: it makes me feel refreshed / warm). 문장은 두세 개로 나누어 간결하게 말하세요.

예시: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer cold dishes, such as naengmyeon, because they are refreshing and help me cool down. In winter I usually eat hot soups and stews because they keep me warm and are very comforting.

제안: 과거 시제와 현재 시제를 정확히 사용하고 발음과 문장 연결을 자연스럽게 하세요. 'sticky texture' 대신 더 적절한 표현을 쓰고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 마지막 문장에서는 'alcohol soda' 대신 정확한 음료명을 사용하거나 술과의 조합을 설명하세요.

예시: When I was a child, I disliked raw fish because its texture seemed strange to me. However, now I love sashimi and sushi because they offer a variety of delicate flavours and pair well with a glass of chilled sake or beer.

× My favorite food is Marathon.

✓ My favorite food is Marathon.

The sentence is acceptable but 'Marathon' seems to be a dish name; if it is a common noun (a type of dish) it should take an article: 'My favorite food is the Marathon' or 'My favorite food is Marathon (a dish)'. Determine whether 'Marathon' is a proper noun. If it is not a proper name, add 'the' before it. Improve by clarifying whether 'Marathon' is the dish's proper name or a type of dish.

× It's kind of Chinese dishes.

✓ It is a kind of Chinese dish.

Mismatch between singular 'it' and plural 'dishes'. Use 'a kind of' with a singular noun. Suggestion: 'It is a kind of Chinese dish' or 'They are a kind of Chinese dish' depending on intended meaning.

× I like it because it has very special and distinct spicy flavor, and also I can customize diverse ingredients and I can add as much as I wanted.

✓ I like it because it has a very special, distinct spicy flavor, and I can customize various ingredients and add as much as I want.

Multiple issues: missing article before 'very special', adjective order and comma use, 'diverse' is better as 'various' or 'different' when modifying 'ingredients', and tense consistency: 'as much as I wanted' should be present 'as much as I want' because this describes a general preference. Improve by adding 'a', reordering adjectives, and keeping present tense for habitual facts.

× When I was young I loved spicy food and I'm still loves it.

✓ When I was young I loved spicy food, and I still love it.

Subject-verb agreement and tense mix: 'I'm still loves it' is ungrammatical. Use simple present 'I still love it' for current habitual liking. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity.

× Loves them too.

✓ I love it too.

Sentence fragment missing subject and incorrect pronoun number. Use subject 'I' and refer to 'spicy food' or the specific food with 'it' singular: 'I love it too.' Alternatively, 'I love them too' if referring to plural foods, but maintain subject.

× Especially I like jampung which is a Korean Chinese combination food and noodles in there and also I love Taco because of.

✓ Especially, I like jjamppong, which is a Korean-Chinese dish with noodles, and I also love tacos because of their flavors.

Multiple structural problems: missing commas, incorrect name spelling 'jjamppong', awkward phrase 'noodles in there'. 'Taco' should be plural 'tacos' if speaking generally, and 'because of' needs an object: 'because of their flavors' or 'because of the taste'. Improve by specifying the reason and fixing punctuation and noun forms.

× Yes I'm quite a lot because in summer I enjoy cold food like ningmen is kind of Korean cold noodles and also I enjoy mil mian as well.

✓ Yes, I eat quite a lot because in summer I enjoy cold foods like naengmyeon, which is a kind of Korean cold noodle dish, and I also enjoy milmyeon.

Original lacks verb 'eat' after 'Yes'; 'quite a lot' needs context. 'Ningmen' likely refers to 'naengmyeon' and 'mil mian' to 'milmyeon'—use standard names. Use plural 'foods' for general category and add relative clause 'which is' for clarification. Maintain present tense for habitual actions.

× However in winter I prefer to eat hot soup because it makes.

✓ However, in winter I prefer to eat hot soup because it warms me up.

Sentence is incomplete: 'because it makes' needs a complement. Provide a logical result such as 'warms me up' or 'makes me feel warm.' Add comma after 'However'.

× When I was a little I hate raw fishes because I felt strange because of its sticky texture.

✓ When I was little I hated raw fish because I felt strange about its sticky texture.

Tense mismatch: describing past feelings requires past tense 'hated' not 'hate'. 'A little' is unnatural; use 'little'. 'Raw fishes' is incorrect—use uncountable 'raw fish' or 'raw fishes' only for species. 'Felt strange because of' should be 'felt strange about'. Ensure consistent past tense throughout.

× However, nowadays I'm really into in sashimi and sushi which is my favorite food because it gives me a variety of flavor and also the combination with alcohol soda is perfect.

✓ However, nowadays I'm really into sashimi and sushi, which are my favorite foods because they give me a variety of flavors, and the combination with an alcoholic drink or soda is perfect.

Subject-verb agreement and noun number: 'sashimi and sushi' are plural, so use 'are my favorite foods' and 'they give'. 'Variety of flavor' should be plural 'variety of flavors'. Remove extra preposition 'in' after 'into'. 'Alcohol soda' is unidiomatic; use 'an alcoholic drink or soda' for clarity.