Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clearer direct topic sentence and then add a brief reason or example. Avoid vague phrases like “whatever it is.” Use linking words to make it coherent and natural. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I don't have a single favourite food. I enjoy a variety of dishes because I like trying new flavours, for example sushi or grilled chicken, depending on my mood.

제안: Use correct tense and a clearer structure: state the topic sentence in past tense, then add a specific reason or memory with a linking word. Replace vague phrases like “famous” with a short explanation. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: When I was young, I loved eating spaghetti. I liked it because it was sweet and commonly served at birthday parties, so it reminds me of family celebrations.

제안: Respond more formally and directly, using complete sentences and linking words. Specify examples tied to seasons or occasions if possible, and avoid fillers like “kinda” and “uh.” Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, I prefer hot soups and ramen in the winter, while I eat more salads and light pasta dishes during the summer.

제안: Use consistent past tense and a clear contrast with linking words. Start with a topic sentence that answers directly, then give a specific reason or example of what changed. Keep it concise and avoid tense errors.

예시: Yes, it has changed. When I was a child I disliked many vegetables, but as an adult I eat them regularly because I understand they are healthier and make me feel better.

× Honestly, I don't have a favorite food. I eat whatever it is.

✓ Honestly, I don't have a favorite food. I eat whatever it is.

No correction needed. Sentence is grammatically acceptable. 'It' refers to 'food' and is used informally; however, more natural phrasing could be 'I eat whatever is available.' This is a style suggestion rather than a grammar error.

× When I was young, I like to eat spaghetti because it is a famous food here in the Philippines, especially for kids.

✓ When I was young, I liked to eat spaghetti because it was a popular food here in the Philippines, especially for kids.

Use past tense to match 'When I was young.' 'Like' should be 'liked' (past). Also 'is a famous food' should be 'was a popular food' to keep past-time consistency. 'Popular' is more natural than 'famous' in this context.

× Yeah, kinda. I like to try different dish like uh, ramen, salad, pasta, Korean food and the like.

✓ Yeah, kind of. I like to try different dishes like, uh, ramen, salad, pasta, Korean food and the like.

'Different dish' should be plural 'different dishes' because multiple items are listed (singular/plural mismatch). 'Kinda' is informal; 'kind of' is clearer in speaking transcripts. Commas added for clarity.

× Definitely. When I was child I don't like to eat some vegetables, but now that I am grown up, I'd like to eat vegetables because it is healthy.

✓ Definitely. When I was a child I didn't like to eat some vegetables, but now that I am grown up, I like to eat vegetables because they are healthy.

Multiple errors corrected: 'When I was child' needs the article 'a child' (article error). The past negative should be 'didn't like' not 'don't like' to match past time (past tense issue). 'I'd like to eat' implies conditional; simple present 'I like to eat' or 'I enjoy eating' is better for current habits. 'It is healthy' should be 'they are healthy' because 'vegetables' is plural (singular/plural issue) and subject-verb agreement must match.