Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法ミスや冗長表現があり、語彙の選択も改善できます。具体的には：1) 主語・冠詞・時制の誤り（the the, I don't want to salty food）を直すこと、2) 冗長な表現を削り中心の文を明確にすること、3) 接続詞を使って文の流れを滑らかにすること、4) 「塩分を減らす」を適切な英語表現（reduce salt / cut down on salt）に置き換えること。練習方法：短く自然なトピック文（1文）を作り、続けて理由を1〜2文で補足し、具体例や頻度を1文で加える構成を守ると良いです。

예시: My favourite foods are Japanese and other Asian cuisines. I enjoy cooking at home because it is healthier and I can adjust the flavours. For example, I always reduce the amount of salt when I cook so the dishes are less salty.

제안: 回答は内容が具体的で親しみやすいですが、文法や語順の誤りが目立ちます。改善点：1) 比較級や最上級の誤用（most favorite → favourite）を直すこと、2) 主語と動詞の一致（she always cooks）、冠詞の誤り（a adult → an adult）を修正すること、3) 接続詞で時系列を明確にして簡潔にすること。練習方法：まず短い主題文（I loved my mother's cooking）を書き、次に理由（she cooked delicious meals）と現在の状況（I learned from her and still cook those dishes）を順序良く述べる練習をしてください。

예시: When I was young, my favourite food was my mother's cooking because she always prepared delicious meals for our family. Now that I am an adult with a family, I learned many of her recipes and often cook the same dishes.

제안: とても分かりやすく具体的な答えですが、自然な英語にするための小さな修正が必要です。改善点：1) 冗長な表現を避ける（winter time → in winter）、2) 単語の選択（on the contrast → in contrast）、3) 一貫した単数・複数形の使用（our body→ our bodies / our body → our bodies）を正すこと。練習方法：季節ごとの例を短く列挙し、理由を簡潔に添える練習をすると効果的です。接続語（in winter, in contrast）を意識して使ってください。

예시: Yes, I do. In winter I usually make oden or stews to keep us warm. In contrast, during summer I prefer cold dishes like soba noodles and chilled salmon to help cool our bodies.

제안: 意図は伝わりますが、時制と否定の使い方、冗長さを改善する必要があります。具体的には：1) 現在完了や現在形を適切に使って継続性を示す（No, it hasn't / No, it hasn't changed.）、2) 文を分けて論理的に整理する、3) 「それほど変わっていない」を自然な表現（hasn't changed much）にすること。練習方法：簡潔な主張（No, it hasn't changed.）を先に述べ、理由（I learned from my mother and still cook her recipes）を続ける形で練習してください。

예시: No, it hasn't changed much. I still love my mother's dishes, and since I learned to cook from her, I often prepare the same recipes for my family.

× My favorite food is Japanese and other Asian cuisines.

✓ My favorite foods are Japanese and other Asian cuisines.

'Food' here refers generally to multiple types, so plural 'foods' is more natural. Also 'Japanese and other Asian cuisines' refers to categories, so plural aligns. Use plural to match the idea of various dishes and cuisines. Suggestion: Use 'foods' when referring to multiple kinds or simply say 'I like Japanese and other Asian cuisines.'

× I also like cooking food by myself because it is healthy and you can make the food the the tastes you like.

✓ I also like cooking by myself because it is healthy and you can make the food taste the way you like.

Remove the redundant 'food' after 'cooking' and fix 'the the' typo. Use 'make the food taste' rather than 'make the food the tastes'. Also 'the way you like' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: Say 'I like cooking by myself because it is healthier and you can make the dishes taste the way you like.'

× And I don't want to salty food so I can degrease the salt into my dishes.

✓ And I don't want salty food, so I reduce the salt in my dishes.

'Want to salty' is ungrammatical; use 'want' with an object or use 'I don't want salty food.' 'Degrease' is incorrect; correct verb is 'reduce' or 'decrease', and preposition 'in' is needed: 'reduce the salt in my dishes.' Also add a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: 'I don't like salty food, so I reduce the salt in my dishes.'

× When I was young, my most favorite food was my mother's dishes.

✓ When I was young, my favorite foods were my mother's dishes.

'Most favorite' is redundant; 'favorite' suffices. 'Food' should be plural to match multiple dishes. Use past tense 'were' to agree with 'was young'. Suggestion: 'When I was young, my favorite foods were my mother's dishes.'

× My mom is very good at cooking and she always cook very delicious food for my family.

✓ My mom is very good at cooking and she always cooks very delicious food for my family.

Third person singular 'she' requires 'cooks' (adds -s). 'Always cook' is incorrect for 'she'. Suggestion: Remember to add -s for third person singular in present simple.

× Since I am a adult and I have a family right now, I learned how to cook from my mother and I'm trying to make the dishes, she told me.

✓ Since I became an adult and now have a family, I learned how to cook from my mother, and I'm trying to make the dishes she taught me.

Use 'became an adult' instead of 'am a adult' (article error and tense). 'Have a family right now' is better as 'now have a family.' 'She told me' is incorrect in this context; replace with 'she taught me.' Also remove the comma before the relative clause. Maintain past tense 'learned' for acquiring the skill. Suggestion: 'Since I became an adult and now have a family, I learned to cook from my mother, and I'm trying to make the dishes she taught me.'

× Yes I do. I prefer warm and hot meals.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer warm meals.

'Warm and hot' is repetitive; choose one. Add comma after 'Yes'. Suggestion: 'Yes, I do. I prefer warm meals.' or 'I prefer warm and hearty meals.'

× In the winter time I normally cook Oden or stews to warm up our bodies.

✓ In the winter I normally cook oden or stews to warm up our bodies.

Use 'in the winter' rather than 'in the winter time.' 'Oden' is a dish name but can be lowercase if not treated as a proper noun in sentence; consistency with 'stews'. Suggestion: 'In winter I normally cook oden or stews to warm up.'

× But on the contrast in the summer I cook cold noodles such as soba and salmon to make our body cooler.

✓ But in contrast, in the summer I cook cold dishes such as soba and salmon to cool our bodies.

Use 'in contrast' instead of 'on the contrast.' 'Cold noodles such as soba and salmon' is odd because salmon is not a noodle; better 'cold dishes such as soba with salmon.' 'Make our body cooler' -> 'cool our bodies.' Suggestion: 'In contrast, in summer I cook cold dishes such as soba with salmon to cool our bodies.'

× No I don't. My favorite food is my mother's dishes so I learned how to cook from my mother and I still cook the same recipes for my family so I don't think my favorite food has changed so much.

✓ No, it hasn't. My favorite food is my mother's cooking. I learned how to cook from her and I still prepare the same recipes for my family, so I don't think my favorite food has changed much.

Answering 'Has your favourite food changed' requires 'No, it hasn't' rather than 'No I don't.' Use 'mother's cooking' instead of 'mother's dishes.' Use present perfect 'it hasn't' to refer to change since childhood. Combine clauses with commas and avoid 'so' repetition. 'Changed so much' -> 'changed much' is more natural after negative. Suggestion: 'No, it hasn't. My favorite food is my mother's cooking; I learned from her and still make the same recipes, so I don't think my preferences have changed much.'