Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, phát âm và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ “definitely” và filler như “umm”. Chia câu ngắn gọn: nêu chủ đề, mô tả vì sao thích với từ vựng chính xác (crispy, juicy, flavorful), rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể (thói quen ăn cùng bạn bè) dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Sửa lỗi nhỏ như “in the outside” → “on the outside”.

예시: My favourite food is fried chicken because it is crispy on the outside and still juicy on the inside. I especially like the garlic-and-bacon flavour because it adds a rich, savoury taste. I usually eat it with friends at the weekend, which makes the meal more fun and sociable.

제안: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp (thì và cấu trúc câu), chính tả và từ vựng. Tránh lỗi như “I looking back”, “in healthy”, “muci shirt meals”. Nên dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi liệt kê với linking words (for example, especially) và kết luận phản ánh hiện tại. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ tuổi, tần suất) để tăng điểm nội dung.

예시: When I was a child I loved fast food, especially burgers, fries and fried chicken. I also ate a lot of sweets, such as ice cream, cake and candy. Looking back, my diet was unhealthy, and I tended to choose tasty food rather than balanced meals.

제안: Cần sửa cấu trúc câu và loại bỏ filler (“uh”). Dùng linking words rõ ràng (for example, however) và chỉnh ngữ pháp (“I tend to eat”, “they are more refreshing”, “they help me feel warm”). Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và giải thích ngắn gọn về lý do để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I don’t usually change my diet much, but my choices depend on the weather. For example, in summer I tend to eat lighter foods like fruit salad and ice cream because they are refreshing. In winter I prefer hot dishes such as hot pot or soup because they help me stay warm.

제안: Cần sắp xếp ý theo trình tự logic: trình bày thay đổi chung, nêu ví dụ cụ thể trước/giờ, giải thích lý do và kết luận. Sửa ngữ pháp và số nhiều/số ít (snack → snacks, meals → meal) và dùng linking words (however, although). Thêm tần suất cụ thể giúp câu đầy đủ hơn.

예시: Yes, my preferences have changed a lot. As a child I mainly ate junk food and sugary snacks, but now I try to eat more balanced meals to stay healthy. However, I still allow myself fast food once in a while, maybe once a week.

× I love how crispy it is in the outside and still umm juicy in the inside is has a lot of flavour.

✓ I love how crispy it is on the outside and still juicy on the inside; it has a lot of flavour.

Sử dụng giới từ sai và trộn câu dẫn đến sai vị trí tính từ và cấu trúc. Cần dùng 'on the outside' và 'on the inside' thay vì 'in the outside/inside'. Ngoài ra câu bị ghép sai ('is has'). Sửa thành hai phần được nối bằng dấu chấm phẩy để rõ nghĩa và đảm bảo động từ đúng: 'it has'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions with locative expressions and separate clauses with proper punctuation.

× But my favorite is definitely garlic and bacon.

✓ But my favorite flavours are definitely garlic and bacon.

Câu gốc dùng đại từ 'my favorite' không rõ số và không khớp với danh sách nhiều mục 'garlic and bacon'. Cần số nhiều 'flavours' hoặc 'dishes' để phù hợp. Sửa thành 'my favorite flavours are...'. Suggestion: Ensure noun after 'favorite' matches number of items listed.

× I usually eat it with my friends on the weekend because they make the meal more enjoyable and funny.

✓ I usually eat it with my friends at the weekend because it makes the meal more enjoyable and fun.

Sử dụng sai đại từ phản chiếu cho hành động và từ vựng không phù hợp. 'They' ám chỉ bạn bè nhưng chủ ngữ hợp lý là 'it' (the meal) or rephrase; 'funny' thường nghĩa hài hước, nên 'fun' phù hợp. Preposition 'at the weekend' (British) or 'on the weekend' (American) both ok; chọn one and đảm bảo trật tự. Suggestion: Match subject and verb and choose correct adjective.

× When I was younger I was really fond of fast food, especially burgers, snacks, chips, and as I say fried chicken.

✓ When I was younger I was really fond of fast food, especially burgers, snacks, chips, and, as I said, fried chicken.

Câu dùng thì quá khứ nhưng cụm 'as I say' là hiện tại; cần dùng quá khứ 'as I said'. Ngoài ra cần dấu phẩy để tách phần chêm. Suggestion: Keep verb tense consistent within past narrative.

× I also had a sweet too so I ate a lot of ice cream, cake and candy.

✓ I also had sweets too, so I ate a lot of ice cream, cake and candy.

'a sweet' (một cái kẹo) có vẻ không phù hợp với ý 'kẹo nói chung'; nên dùng số nhiều 'sweets'. Cần dấu phẩy trước 'so'. Suggestion: Use plural for general references to treats.

× I looking back my diet was in healthy but like many children I prefer tasty food over muci shirt meals.

✓ Looking back, my diet was unhealthy, but like many children I preferred tasty food over much healthier meals.

Thiếu trợ động từ 'am' hay 'was' cho 'looking back' as a participle phrase -> nên 'Looking back,' at sentence start. 'in healthy' is incorrect adjective/adverb; use 'unhealthy'. 'prefer' should be past 'preferred' to match past timeframe. 'muci shirt' appears to be typos: interpret as 'much healthier'. Suggestion: Start with participle phrase punctuation, use correct comparative and past tense consistently.

× Not really a spontaneous person but I think my food choice also depends on the weather.

✓ I'm not really a spontaneous person, but I think my food choices also depend on the weather.

Câu thiếu động từ 'am' for 'I'm not really...'. 'food choice' should be plural 'food choices' to match general meaning and 'depends' -> 'depend' to agree with plural subject. Need comma before 'but'. Suggestion: Include the verb 'to be' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Like during summer I tend to is uh lighter food like fruit salad, ice cream because they are refreshing.

✓ Like during summer I tend to eat lighter foods like fruit salad and ice cream because they are refreshing.

Sau 'tend to' cần động từ nguyên mẫu 'eat', không 'is'. 'lighter food' nên số nhiều 'lighter foods'. Kết hợp danh sách bằng 'and'. Suggestion: Use correct verb pattern after 'tend to' and pluralize general food items.

× But during winter I prefer hot dishes such as hot pot or soups since they have mistake warm.

✓ But during winter I prefer hot dishes such as hot pot or soups since they make me warm.

Cụm 'they have mistake warm' không có nghĩa; có thể ý muốn nói 'they make me warm' or 'they are warm'. Sửa thành 'they make me warm' để rõ chủ thể và tác dụng. Suggestion: Use clear verb phrases to express effect; 'make me warm' or 'are warming'.

× Like when I was younger. I mostly enjoy junk food and sugary snack now.

✓ When I was younger I mostly enjoyed junk food and sugary snacks; now I don't.

Câu gốc bị chia cắt sai với dấu chấm và thì không nhất quán: 'was younger' past, nhưng 'enjoy' present. Cần dùng quá khứ 'enjoyed' for past habit. 'sugary snack' should be plural 'snacks'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and fix sentence fragments.

× I still like delicious food, but I pay more attention to a healthy and balanced meals because I want to stay healthy.

✓ I still like delicious food, but I pay more attention to healthy and balanced meals because I want to stay healthy.

'a healthy and balanced meals' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'meals' and redundant 'a'. Remove 'a' to match plural or change to 'a healthy and balanced meal' if singular. Also 'healthy and balanced' as adjectives modify 'meals'. Suggestion: Ensure article and noun number agree.

× Even so, I still treat myself to fast food once in a while.

✓ Even so, I still treat myself to fast food once in a while.

Sentence is correct grammatically. No change needed. Suggestion: No change; use sparingly if wanting to emphasize.