Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문장을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 만들고, 구체적인 이유(예: 어떤 영양소가 있는지, 언제 주로 먹는지)를 덧붙이세요. 또한 말을 망설이는 표현(umm, uh)을 줄이고 연결어로 이유를 매끄럽게 연결하세요.

예시: My favourite food is hamburgers because they are filling and convenient to eat. For example, they often contain protein from beef and vegetables, so I usually have them for a quick lunch after work.

제안: 시제와 동사 형태를 정확히 사용하고 이유를 더 풍부하게 하세요. 또한 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어가면 더 자연스럽습니다.

예시: When I was young, I liked eating strawberries because they were refreshing and slightly sour. For instance, I often had them as a snack after school, which made them one of my favourite treats.

제안: 질문을 잘못 이해한 듯 보이며, 계절별 식습관에 대한 구체적인 설명이 필요합니다. 문장 구성과 문법(예: 'I eat tacos' 또는 'During the New Year...')을 정확히 하고, 계절별 예시를 들어 이유를 설명하세요.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer cold dishes like salads and fruits, while in winter I usually eat hot foods such as stews or noodles. During the New Year, my family often prepares traditional dishes that I only eat once a year.

제안: 말을 더 자연스럽게 표현하고 비교를 명확히 하세요. 주저하는 표현(umm) 제거하고 비교 표현을 간결하게 하며 구체적 이유(맛, 편의성, 건강 등)를 추가하세요.

예시: Yes, it has changed. I used to prefer strawberries when I was a child, but now I prefer apples because they are sweeter and easier to eat on the go. For instance, I often take an apple to work as a quick snack.

× My favorite food is hamburger.

✓ My favorite food is the hamburger.

'Hamburger' is a countable singular noun; when referring to a specific type as a favorite, use the definite article the. Use 'a hamburger' if speaking about one item in general, but 'the hamburger' or 'hamburgers' fits better for favourite food.

× It contains the many nutrition and uh, it is comfortable to eat, so I eat hamburger a lot.

✓ It contains a lot of nutrition and, uh, it is convenient to eat, so I eat hamburgers a lot.

'Nutrition' is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by 'a lot of' rather than 'the many'. 'Comfortable' describes people/items that provide comfort; 'convenient' fits better to mean easy to eat. Also pluralize 'hamburger' to 'hamburgers' when speaking generally about eating them often.

× I like to eat strawberry when I was young because it tastes sour and I love that sour taste.

✓ I liked to eat strawberries when I was young because they tasted sour and I loved that sour taste.

The clause 'when I was young' sets the time in the past, so the past tense 'liked' and 'tasted' should be used. 'Strawberry' should be plural 'strawberries' when speaking generally, and pronoun agreement requires 'they tasted'.

× Yes I do. I eat Taco. When when I get new year?

✓ Yes, I do. I eat tacos. When is the New Year?

Pluralize 'Taco' to 'tacos' for general habit. The question 'When when I get new year?' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'When is the New Year?' or 'When is the new year?' depending on style. Use definite article 'the' with 'New Year' to ask about that specific time. Also add necessary punctuation and remove duplicate 'when'.

× Yes, umm, I had like strawberry when I was a child, but now I like apple more than strawberry because it is more sweet than strawberry.

✓ Yes, umm, I liked strawberries when I was a child, but now I like apples more than strawberries because they are sweeter.

Past habit requires past tense 'liked'. Use plural nouns 'strawberries' and 'apples' for general preference. Comparative form 'sweeter' is correct rather than 'more sweet'. Maintain pronoun agreement: 'they are sweeter' referring to apples or 'it is sweeter' if singular; using 'they' matches plural 'apples'.