Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence stating your favourite, then give one or two brief supporting details (why you like it and examples). Avoid repetition and minor hesitations. Also check pronunciation of "favorite" and avoid doubling words like "so many so many."

예시: My favourite food is pizza. I like it because it’s versatile — I can try different toppings and styles. For example, I enjoy teriyaki pizza for its sweet-savory flavour and four‑cheese pizza for its rich, creamy taste.

제안: Open with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give a specific detail and brief reason. Avoid vague phrases like "I was the kind of kid who didn't eat much" without linking it to the example. Use linking words (for example, because) for coherence.

예시: When I was young I didn’t have a strong favourite because I was a picky eater. However, I particularly liked sandwiches because they were easy to eat and often had tasty sauces and meat fillings.

제안: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer (No, not really) then give one clear example and a brief explanation. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "I I", "a foods"). Use linking words like "for example" and "so" to structure your reply.

예시: Not really — I don’t change my diet much by season. For example, I still eat ice cream in winter because I enjoy it, so I don’t limit myself to only warm foods in cold months.

제안: Answer directly then give one specific example with a brief reason for the change. Avoid overgeneral statements and improve sentence variety. Make sure to use correct word forms ("macaroons" → "macarons" if referring to the French sweet) and explain why your taste changed.

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed. I’ve become more adventurous and now enjoy many foods I once disliked. For example, I used to dislike macarons, but after trying different flavours I now eat them regularly because I appreciate their delicate texture and varied tastes.

× Well definitely my favorite food is pizza.

✓ Well, definitely my favorite food is pizza.

Missing comma after introductory adverb 'Well' and 'definitely' for clarity; add comma to improve readability. Suggestion: include a comma after introductory phrases.

× To be honest, when I was little I really didn't like pizza, but now I try so many so many different types.

✓ To be honest, when I was little I really didn't like pizza, but now I try so many different types.

Repetition 'so many so many' is a redundancy error rather than a grammatical category listed, but it interrupts fluency. Remove the duplicate to produce a natural sentence.

× My favorite is teriyaki pizza and four cheese.

✓ My favorites are teriyaki pizza and four-cheese pizza.

The original uses singular 'favorite is' for two items; this is a singular/plural and agreement issue. Also 'four cheese' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective describing 'pizza'. Use plural 'favorites are' when listing multiple favorite items.

× To be honest, I was the kind of kid who didn't eat much so I didn't have any actual favorite food, but I think I especially like sandwiches because of their sauce and their meat.

✓ To be honest, I was the kind of kid who didn't eat much, so I didn't have any particular favorite food, but I especially liked sandwiches because of their sauce and meat.

Tense consistency: the sentence describes past preferences, so 'I especially like' should be 'I especially liked'. Also use 'particular' instead of 'actual' for natural phrasing and remove redundant 'their' before 'meat'. Add comma before 'so' when joining clauses.

× Well not really. I can eat ice cream even if it's winter.

✓ Well, not really. I can eat ice cream even if it's winter.

Missing comma after introductory 'Well'. Otherwise sentence is grammatically correct.

× I don't think I I have to divide a foods by time of the year and that's why I eat cold and warm foods at winter and summer.

✓ I don't think I have to divide foods by time of year, and that's why I eat cold and warm foods in winter and summer.

Remove repeated 'I'. 'a foods' is incorrect article+noun combination; use 'foods' without 'a'. 'By time of the year' is awkward—use 'by time of year' or 'by season'. Use preposition 'in' with seasons not 'at'. Add comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses.

× Yes, of course it has changed.

✓ Yes, of course it has changed.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. Included here for completeness.

× There are so many foods that I didn't like when I was a child, but now I eat them so much.

✓ There are so many foods that I didn't like when I was a child, but now I eat them a lot.

Use 'a lot' instead of 'so much' when referring to countable plural nouns and frequency; 'so much' is more natural with uncountable nouns. This improves collocation and naturalness.

× For example, macaroons.

✓ For example, macarons.

'Macaroons' vs 'macarons': likely vocabulary choice rather than grammar, but 'macarons' is the correct word for the French meringue sandwich cookie. If referring to coconut macaroons, keep 'macaroons'. No tense change needed.

× I really didn't like them, but now I eat them almost every day.

✓ I really didn't like them, but now I eat them almost every day.

Sentence is grammatically correct with appropriate tense contrast (past dislike vs present habit). No change needed.